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It's great that you have face photos but you don't look happy in any of them and more photo variety would be good. A smile is always more positive.
Text is OK but grammar and spelling needs some work and the content is very generic. Think of your profile as your shop window, as it stands it basically comes across as any woman will do...
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My impression..
You are sad, dull, miserable (though have nice shaped lips)
Great that you are honest about your body but you've used negative words again reinforcements of the photos
You smoke (not my thing)
Your hairy (again not my thing)
I care how good you are are eating pussy or rimming.. I'm not gonna message you.
Why, because I don't message people.
 Take from it what you like but as someone looking at so many shop windows.... I'd not be drawn in.
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"My impression..
You are sad, dull, miserable (though have nice shaped lips)
Great that you are honest about your body but you've used negative words again reinforcements of the photos
You smoke (not my thing)
Your hairy (again not my thing)
I care how good you are are eating pussy or rimming.. I'm not gonna message you.
Why, because I don't message people.
Take from it what you like but as someone looking at so many shop windows.... I'd not be drawn in.
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Poor OP - he was asking for constructive criticism on how he could improve his profile. Remind me never to ask you to review my profile |
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I wasn’t asking for a review I was asking for constructive criticism on how I could improve my profile, calling me miserable and dull isn’t exactly helpful, more outright insulting. I wouldn’t want someone like that to be drawn into my profile anyway.
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It's great that you have face photos but you don't look happy in any of them and more photo variety would be good. A smile is always more positive.
Text is OK but grammar and spelling needs some work and the content is very generic. Think of your profile as your shop window, as it stands it basically comes across as any woman will do...
Nita"
Hi nita, I’ve updated my profile description and I was hoping if you could tell me if I have improved it in anyway. Many thanks in advance
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