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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all me n my partner have now decided to expand our horizons n to start swinging as a couple for the first time. I have made a start on the profile text but as its a new profile I can't yet post on the forums with it so if you could username search it to see wot you think. I have tried to draw inspiration from previous advice threads n from browsing successful profiles but would still appreciate some feed back. There are no pics as yet but they will be uploaded shortly just after a few nice pics of us together that arent just fanny n cock shots! The profile name is "trysts" thanks in advance |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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seems well done enough...maybe needs some spacing though...it is a bit of a hard read.
very glad u gave the sexual prowess as an opinion of each other..rather the hard fact everyone will would be blown away |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks I will look into breaking the text up a bit more as reading it back it can be broken down into more readable chunks I just didn't want to seem like I was writing an essay that people would get board with xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Don't be put off by doing a long profile. Ours is long but I think its right that u give people the right info. People have a better understanding of u before making inital contact.
Good luck
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I agree re the lenght, if someone can not be bothered to read my profile, they are too lazy for me 
I dont like lazy men in bed
I tried to keep it short and sweet, however, was asked over and over the same questions; so now it is in my profile text  If they haven't read it, block delete and next  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Just took a look - it's very well worded and perfectly states where you are and what you are after
It could be seen as being a bit too long , but if potential meets can't be bothered to read it all then perhaps you wouldn't want to meet them anyway ! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi,
just had a look mainly because you are local and I see you post in here quite a lot. I think it's a good profile well written. Not that I profess to be the best at grammar but the use of 'n' instead of 'and' is something I would personally change.
I feel bad even bringing it up but out of the whole profile this is what stood out to me, otherwise you two sound fantastic and very level headed.
Cx
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Well written, could do with maybe being a 'little' tighter, but tells you all you need to know.
Only comment otherwise is that the fact that you are only looking for soft swing right now is a little lost. That's a key thing for us, and with a lot of couples.
Otherwise, sure it'll work well for you.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hi,
just had a look mainly because you are local and I see you post in here quite a lot. I think it's a good profile well written. Not that I profess to be the best at grammar but the use of 'n' instead of 'and' is something I would personally change.
I feel bad even bringing it up but out of the whole profile this is what stood out to me, otherwise you two sound fantastic and very level headed.
Cx
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Did try my best to avoid text speak as I know a lot don't appreciate it, but some obviously slipped through the net and I will correct it thanks |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Well written, could do with maybe being a 'little' tighter, but tells you all you need to know.
Only comment otherwise is that the fact that you are only looking for soft swing right now is a little lost. That's a key thing for us, and with a lot of couples.
Otherwise, sure it'll work well for you.
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I realise soft swing dampens our chances but its how my part we wishes to start till his confidence grows so I have to respect that he comes first always will |
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