Kudos for the public face pics 
I think the bio is good, it says a lot. I’m going to hazard a guess that the die hard BDSM crew are going to whip your ass about you declaring to be ‘a Dom’ rather than just dominant. I’m no expert but there’s a difference and it seems that being a dom is a vocation!
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I'd agree about Dom vs Dominant.
Also got a typo nor/not.
I'd probably take the "enough experience bit" out.
My only other critique would be that your username doesn't really reflect your bio. I'd say your bio was quite mature and "nice" but your username is a bit immature and potentially desperate sounding, might be worth changing it? |
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"Changes made! Don't know how to change my user name tho
On the mobile site its in account/change username."
Thankyou! I'll change it when I can think of a better one haha |
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
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"Hey so I posted looking for a critique a while ago and looking for some advice on how it looks now? "
One of the better profiles and if you were closer we might reply to a message. Only two things...lose one of the dick pics (one is plenty just to see that it's not hideous) and definitely change the user name (sounds like a medical condition if you're really, truly always horny).
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"Hey so I posted looking for a critique a while ago and looking for some advice on how it looks now?
One of the better profiles and if you were closer we might reply to a message. Only two things...lose one of the dick pics (one is plenty just to see that it's not hideous) and definitely change the user name (sounds like a medical condition if you're really, truly always horny).
(Bry)"
Very much a shame your not closer!
Only got the one now. Any suggestions on the name change? |
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"Hey so I posted looking for a critique a while ago and looking for some advice on how it looks now?
One of the better profiles and if you were closer we might reply to a message. Only two things...lose one of the dick pics (one is plenty just to see that it's not hideous) and definitely change the user name (sounds like a medical condition if you're really, truly always horny).
(Bry)
Very much a shame your not closer!
Only got the one now. Any suggestions on the name change?"
AlwaysNerdy.
There's a reason I'm not allowed to change our name  |
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
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"Well we cant get better if we dont listen to advice!"
So many people ask on the forums then completely ignore everything. Or never even acknowledge the replies.
Although there's something to be said for not offering advice (then profiles really do reflect the writer and not just a reflection of what they have been told), it's refreshing to see someone making an effort
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"Well we cant get better if we dont listen to advice!
So many people ask on the forums then completely ignore everything. Or never even acknowledge the replies.
Although there's something to be said for not offering advice (then profiles really do reflect the writer and not just a reflection of what they have been told), it's refreshing to see someone making an effort
(Bry)"
Thankyou! I'm genuinely not great at writing profiles, always had issues with them. So helpful advice is always appreciated |
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