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By (user no longer on site) OP
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Hi all I was looking for someone to just read through my profile text to see if it makes sense. Ive re written it because of some advice and just want to make sure its right.
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Well, I nearly didn't get past the first paragraph. I'm no spelling nazi but if you're claiming to be a professional it's best to spell it right.
I then did give up when you basically blame your girlfriend for you being on here and cheating
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"Hi all I was looking for someone to just read through my profile text to see if it makes sense. Ive re written it because of some advice and just want to make sure its right.
Cheers"
Never apologise, never explain was something John Wayne said I beleive, so just say you're in a relationship don't go in to what's wrong with it and criticise your girlfriend to boot...if you can do it to her you'll do it to a potential meet is the way I look at it. Also you do yourself no favours describing your foreplay technique as a fumble.
It's too long, you spell professional like that and you should have a look at how you've laid it out spacing etc.
I'm not usually so negative about someone's profile but yours does need work |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hi all I was looking for someone to just read through my profile text to see if it makes sense. Ive re written it because of some advice and just want to make sure its right.
Cheers
Never apologise, never explain was something John Wayne said I beleive, so just say you're in a relationship don't go in to what's wrong with it and criticise your girlfriend to boot...if you can do it to her you'll do it to a potential meet is the way I look at it. Also you do yourself no favours describing your foreplay technique as a fumble.
It's too long, you spell professional like that and you should have a look at how you've laid it out spacing etc.
I'm not usually so negative about someone's profile but yours does need work "
Thats great i dont mind negativity just want to get it right.
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