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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I’ve just rewritten my profile on account that it would seem that attached or guys from the next county can’t read or understand what ‘single’ or ‘local’ means
Can someone have a look please and let me know if it’s ok or perhaps a little unfriendly? I’ll correct it if it is, as I don’t want it to be
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*If you are attached/married or separated I absolutely will not meet you*
This could be read incorrectly.
I think you mean "If you are attached or married, (whether separated or not), I absolutely won't meet you".
At the moment, it could be read as you won't meet guys who are attached, married nor separated. Which means you'll only meet guys who have never been in a relationship.
I read another female's profile on here once, she worded it very cleverly. "If someone else thinks they're in a relationship with you, don't contact me"...
As for locality, I think it's fairly clear.
Final comment. Maybe consider separating what you're looking for down to bullet points. Having communicated with some single guys, they feel they need to message females and couples whilst those females/couples are online, else the single guy is ignored. So the guys only skim read the profiles, because they are rushing to send a message while the recipient is still online. |
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"*If you are attached/married or separated I absolutely will not meet you*
This could be read incorrectly.
I think you mean "If you are attached or married, (whether separated or not), I absolutely won't meet you".
At the moment, it could be read as you won't meet guys who are attached, married nor separated. Which means you'll only meet guys who have never been in a relationship.
I read another female's profile on here once, she worded it very cleverly. "If someone else thinks they're in a relationship with you, don't contact me"...
As for locality, I think it's fairly clear.
Final comment. Maybe consider separating what you're looking for down to bullet points. Having communicated with some single guys, they feel they need to message females and couples whilst those females/couples are online, else the single guy is ignored. So the guys only skim read the profiles, because they are rushing to send a message while the recipient is still online."
No, I mean attached (ie “I have a GF, in a relationship whether living together or not) married (self explanatory), separated (still have a wife legally) which means I will only meet single (don’t have a GF/wife) men….. there’s no need to make it more confusing.
I like the quote though -  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It reads fine. However, most people don't even read the profiles... If you're a single fem, and accepting messages from men then they'll inbox pretty much regardless. Mine is a very clear 3sec read. And still gets ignored  |
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It's OK. Kinda feels a bit too rambly and focuses more on the negative to me and if I wasn't forcing myself to read it I would have hit back ignoring the obvious that I'm 100% not what you're looking for. Pics could be better, they're all quite dark.
But it says everything we need to know, it's not bad. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Your profile seems very clear to me. My only comment is you are both 54 and 55 !"
Well spotted! I re re wrote it last night. So what you see now isn’t what I asked about.
The age difference is because I am 54 now but my birthday is in a couple weeks |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Personally I'd switch it around - put the preferences right at the top... Area, looks wise. I'm lucky if I can get someone to even clock my status "
This is not the profile I asked for advice about as this is the re-written version, which I’m happy with, guys seem to think it’s ok as getting messages which is the main point.  |
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