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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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id love some feedback on how i can improve my profile and make it stand out from the crowd a bit.Iv spoke to a couple of people on hear who are great but seem to hit a brick wall with most people, where am i going wrong |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's in one big block, not gonna lie, barely bothered reading it. Separate into short paragraphs maybe. Also maybe take a bit more care grammatically?
IMO |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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firstly your profile is written poorly with both grammatical errors and little puctuation.
Secondly as already quoted you are straight, but are looking for TV/TS which is a contradiction.
just my thoughts! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"firstly your profile is written poorly with both grammatical errors and little puctuation.
Secondly as already quoted you are straight, but are looking for TV/TS which is a contradiction.
just my thoughts!"
Ditto. Plus the text is really hard to read as its all in one block. |
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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago
Manchester and that's all you need to know |
OP you asked for feedback on your profile and people gave you some really good advice yet you have not done nothing with the feedback.
Was this just a way of getting people to look at it? |
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