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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
Hello all you sexy fabbers.
I would love some helpful and constructive advice for my profile. Are my pics any good, is my bio well written or does it need work, maybe my username is a little childish. All advice is appreciated. Have a great day.
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"I am on fab to find a women with a like-minded woman, an individual to have good times with"
That sounds like gibberish
'I am on fab to find (a women with) a like-minded woman, an individual to have good times with
Remove the words in brackets, it will flow better.
And sadly if you are a male who can't accommodate, it will be assumed you are not single, but cheating. So maybe explain the living situation, if you are sharing a flat, or living with your parents (housing market is insane, people will understand) |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
""I am on fab to find a women with a like-minded woman, an individual to have good times with"
That sounds like gibberish
'I am on fab to find (a women with) a like-minded woman, an individual to have good times with
Remove the words in brackets, it will flow better.
And sadly if you are a male who can't accommodate, it will be assumed you are not single, but cheating. So maybe explain the living situation, if you are sharing a flat, or living with your parents (housing market is insane, people will understand)"
Thanks for that, hadn't realised it sounded like gibberish |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You've managed to get varified and had meets, not sure what your issue is. In comparison to a lot of blokes on here (including myself), you seem successful, like some sort of sexual god. |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"You've managed to get varified and had meets, not sure what your issue is. In comparison to a lot of blokes on here (including myself), you seem successful, like some sort of sexual god."
Unfortunately it's only been with males, never had any female meets yet |
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By *sm265Woman
over a year ago
Shangri-la |
"Thanks for the advice, keep it coming
Are my pics any good? Are any improvements needing to be made?"
Pics really aren't very inspiring and several are very similar...close ups of dicks and underpants really don't appeal to me and I'd be unlikely to look any further.
The profile text doesn't really capture my interest either. |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"Thanks for the advice, keep it coming
Are my pics any good? Are any improvements needing to be made?
Pics really aren't very inspiring and several are very similar...close ups of dicks and underpants really don't appeal to me and I'd be unlikely to look any further.
The profile text doesn't really capture my interest either. "
What would i need to add into my profile text for me to capture your interest?
And how could i improve my pics? |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"The reason why you can't accommodate, "living arrangements" could mean anything - live parents, shared house, married, etc. A bit if clarity might help. "
I've always worried that putting living with parents would turn woman off, makes me sound like a failure |
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I've always worried that putting living with parents would turn woman off, makes me sound like a failure "
With house prices now, I wouldn't say it makes you a failure.
You could always say you house share!  it's not untrue!
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"Thanks for the advice, keep it coming
Are my pics any good? Are any improvements needing to be made?
Pics really aren't very inspiring and several are very similar...close ups of dicks and underpants really don't appeal to me and I'd be unlikely to look any further.
The profile text doesn't really capture my interest either.
What would i need to add into my profile text for me to capture your interest?
And how could i improve my pics?"
I'll ask a male friend of mine to help me take some new pics |
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By *sm265Woman
over a year ago
Shangri-la |
"Thanks for the advice, keep it coming
Are my pics any good? Are any improvements needing to be made?
Pics really aren't very inspiring and several are very similar...close ups of dicks and underpants really don't appeal to me and I'd be unlikely to look any further.
The profile text doesn't really capture my interest either.
What would i need to add into my profile text for me to capture your interest?
And how could i improve my pics?"
Have a look at some other vell verified profiles for ideas for pics, generally something that leaves a little to the imagination is far more tempting than a full frontal.
As far as profile text goes , try to write something original that gives the reader an idea of who you are as a person. Try to incorporate your personality into your bio. |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"Thanks for the advice, keep it coming
Are my pics any good? Are any improvements needing to be made?
Pics really aren't very inspiring and several are very similar...close ups of dicks and underpants really don't appeal to me and I'd be unlikely to look any further.
The profile text doesn't really capture my interest either.
What would i need to add into my profile text for me to capture your interest?
And how could i improve my pics?
Have a look at some other vell verified profiles for ideas for pics, generally something that leaves a little to the imagination is far more tempting than a full frontal.
As far as profile text goes , try to write something original that gives the reader an idea of who you are as a person. Try to incorporate your personality into your bio. "
Is better to have a longer bio?
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By *AYENCouple
over a year ago
Lincolnshire |
The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done. |
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How does someone know if you're "like minded"?
All we know is that you're a man who is proud of his manhood and lives in a house share...
Show some personality and give potential meets an idea of what you can offer and what you're seeking.
But as the poster above says, we cannot write it for you, it must reflect you. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done. "
I've had several accounts on here over the years, and everytime I put a lot of effort and details into writing my bio. Unfortunately, if you don't get the views, the blurb seems pointless, hence my new and improved approach quest for a successful account. My new profile is working a lot better than previous ones.  |
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By *sBlueWoman
over a year ago
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"The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done.
I've had several accounts on here over the years, and everytime I put a lot of effort and details into writing my bio. Unfortunately, if you don't get the views, the blurb seems pointless, hence my new and improved approach quest for a successful account. My new profile is working a lot better than previous ones. "
No idea why lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done.
I've had several accounts on here over the years, and everytime I put a lot of effort and details into writing my bio. Unfortunately, if you don't get the views, the blurb seems pointless, hence my new and improved approach quest for a successful account. My new profile is working a lot better than previous ones.
No idea why lol"
I know, it baffles me as well. Little effort, greater reward. |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done.
I've had several accounts on here over the years, and everytime I put a lot of effort and details into writing my bio. Unfortunately, if you don't get the views, the blurb seems pointless, hence my new and improved approach quest for a successful account. My new profile is working a lot better than previous ones.
No idea why lol
I know, it baffles me as well. Little effort, greater reward."
I have tried that approach, no luck though |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The thing with your bio is that it is supposed to represent YOU. Asking other people what to put on it is not going to work as its more a reflection of them, not you.
If you're happy with it, then your job is done.
I've had several accounts on here over the years, and everytime I put a lot of effort and details into writing my bio. Unfortunately, if you don't get the views, the blurb seems pointless, hence my new and improved approach quest for a successful account. My new profile is working a lot better than previous ones.
No idea why lol
I know, it baffles me as well. Little effort, greater reward.
I have tried that approach, no luck though"
Less is more. Good luck  |
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By *jb773 OP Man
over a year ago
Bishops Stortford |
"Is that camera angle or you VWE, worth mentioning in profile, there's a lot of girls and guys in to big ding dongs"
Im about 8 and a half inches, i always thought that you sound arrogant if you put you size in your bio |
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"Is that camera angle or you VWE, worth mentioning in profile, there's a lot of girls and guys in to big ding dongs
Im about 8 and a half inches, i always thought that you sound arrogant if you put you size in your bio"
Fairpoint, sure you can think of squeezing VWE somewhere without sounding arrogant |
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