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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi guys, I've recently returned to the site after a good amount of time away, and at first was struggling to make my profile sound decent! I've given it a good shot but would massively appreciate some feedback on how it is or what I could do to make it even better?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You know how annoying other single males are, but probably not that cool to sell yourself and portray yourself as better than your peers just by slagging them off.
Boundaries and respect - well that's a no brainer, surely it goes without saying?
Other than that it's just a bit bland, no real sense of your personality or what you are looking for. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"You know how annoying other single males are, but probably not that cool to sell yourself and portray yourself as better than your peers just by slagging them off.
Boundaries and respect - well that's a no brainer, surely it goes without saying?
Other than that it's just a bit bland, no real sense of your personality or what you are looking for."
Thanks, I'll see what I can change  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"You know how annoying other single males are, but probably not that cool to sell yourself and portray yourself as better than your peers just by slagging them off.
Boundaries and respect - well that's a no brainer, surely it goes without saying?
Other than that it's just a bit bland, no real sense of your personality or what you are looking for."
How's it look now? x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Maybe ditch the first paragraph its mostly repeating info. The rest reads quite well. Stick some photos up, cause it doesn't matter how well it reads if folk can't see you to lure them in in the first place. |
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"Maybe ditch the first paragraph its mostly repeating info. The rest reads quite well. Stick some photos up, cause it doesn't matter how well it reads if folk can't see you to lure them in in the first place."
Thank you first boring paragraph gone x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Find a popular guys profile and see what they write.
Don't copy it but look at the format.
Distance you'll travel, times you can accommodate, likes and dislikes, any extras you can offer.
It's like a sex cv lol |
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