Honest opinion? It needs a complete overhaul!
I would drop the opening paragraph where you are just putting yourself down. With regards to the rest of it, the general gist of it is ok but you need to use some punctuation because it makes it really difficult to read otherwise.
I would also remove your oldest verification. If the only feedback somebody can give is 'seen on cam' it would set alarm bells ringing for me.
I hope you take my feedback in the constructive way it is meant.
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over a year ago
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Please never put yourself down as many others that will do it for you.
We can see how you are in your pic, so concentrate on where you are, why you are looking and what for. |
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"There are quite literally thousands of single guys on here. For every single female, you've probably got 100 guys.
Even the stand out profiles still struggle."
This is very true.
And being honest we don't see many that really stand out. |
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"There are quite literally thousands of single guys on here. For every single female, you've probably got 100 guys.
Even the stand out profiles still struggle."
It is however worth sticking out, be true to yourself, never pushy and always respectful. After all there is someone for everyone, its just a matter of reaching out and not getting disheartened  |
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"Your photos are fine but not especially alluring or enticing"
That's what I thought but did not want to say.
IMO, the pics and the write up, more of a dating application rather than FS site material.
You do come across as a nice guy and you look it and my free tip is, join a dating site as well if you are looking for love as well as sex |
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