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over a year ago
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"It’s better than a lot on here
Thanks 
Any improvement ideas?
Yeah if struggling - get your arse to a club  "
It’s on the todo list (Along with Miley Cyrus), I’m waiting for my GF to not be ill or on her period haha. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"It’s good! Really good!
Could you perhaps list yourself as bi though. I (The Boy) fancy you quite a bit! "
Haha thank you! My Mrs is the bi one though, afraid I can’t cater to that market  |
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Can't see much wrong with this at all buddy, apart from the obvious*.
If it was me I'd change 'I don't mind accommodating' to 'I can accommodate' or 'I'm able to accommodate'. The way you have it worded at the moment sounds a little bit like 'if I have to'. At least to my ears anyway.
This really is splitting hairs though. Other than that it looks a hell of a lot better than the majority I've either seen or heard about.
*You're younger then me, much more attractive than me, have a six-pack (unlike me) and I hate you.  For the avoidance of doubt, I am joking of course.
The best of luck to you buddy. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Can't see much wrong with this at all buddy, apart from the obvious*.
If it was me I'd change 'I don't mind accommodating' to 'I can accommodate' or 'I'm able to accommodate'. The way you have it worded at the moment sounds a little bit like 'if I have to'. At least to my ears anyway.
This really is splitting hairs though. Other than that it looks a hell of a lot better than the majority I've either seen or heard about.
*You're younger then me, much more attractive than me, have a six-pack (unlike me) and I hate you. For the avoidance of doubt, I am joking of course.
The best of luck to you buddy."
Don’t forget I have hair too! Although it doesn’t seem to make any positive difference as you have had much more success than me
Appreciate the honesty even with the undoubtable hatred for me. I’ll reword the accommodating section as I think you’re right.
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You're very welcome and yes, I forgot the hair!
If I have had 'success' as you put it then we would firstly need to define what 'success' actually means to you and I. Those could well be completely different things.
If your definition of 'success' is that I've had some meets and veris then I can tell you right now the secret to that is owning a GSXR. Top tip (don't tell anyone this) the blue ones are slightly faster than any other colour. |
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"You're very welcome and yes, I forgot the hair!
If I have had 'success' as you put it then we would firstly need to define what 'success' actually means to you and I. Those could well be completely different things.
If your definition of 'success' is that I've had some meets and veris then I can tell you right now the secret to that is owning a GSXR. Top tip (don't tell anyone this) the blue ones are slightly faster than any other colour. "
I’m the case of the GSXR I’ve hear an opposing opinion to your one. One that’s slightly more derogatory towards the owner of such a bike |
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"Looks and reads fine to me, you look a bit like a young marti pellow in your smiley pic... "
Well he looks like a goodish looking guy so I’ll take that, thanks haha
P.S loving the wet T-Shirt |
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As others say, it's fairly good.
If you have a couples profile, you could add the info.
The length is about right. If anything, I'd encourage you to be more concise on the somewhat superfluous bits and to sell you more, potentially not making it much longer in total. If viewers are considering between you and others, what is it about you that could help to sway their opinion? If in doubt, most people won't - they'll carry on reading their messages or searching out profiles, until someone gives them a more solid certainty that someone has what it takes for them to be happy. A little zest and bite may work the magic |
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"As others say, it's fairly good.
If you have a couples profile, you could add the info.
The length is about right. If anything, I'd encourage you to be more concise on the somewhat superfluous bits and to sell you more, potentially not making it much longer in total. If viewers are considering between you and others, what is it about you that could help to sway their opinion? If in doubt, most people won't - they'll carry on reading their messages or searching out profiles, until someone gives them a more solid certainty that someone has what it takes for them to be happy. A little zest and bite may work the magic "
Less waffle, more zest. Got it, thanks |
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