It's pretty good. Pics of him could add a lot, if he's going to be involved. There were a few tiny typos and, I think 1 use of text chat spelling (some say it puts them off seeing txt type chat).
You could possibly run it all through a checker, to spot anything amiss. It's not that most of us would crave meeting a spelling/grammar nazi, just that it can distract attention away from yourselves and why you're here.
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