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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi every one just wondering if people can give me feed back on my profile feel like it needs polishing up but just don’t know what to to do to make it stand out that little bit more and make it that little bit more attractive
Thanks
Girthyscouser |
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Always surprises me that when someone has distinctive tattoos, hides their face.  To be honest Op you stand a better chance showing your face on here.
Try using paragraphs on the text, as it makes it easier to read.
Honestly it’s just a typical bloke profile nothing special and reads like the majority. Do some research and look at other guys profiles who are more successful and get some ideas.
Good luck Op  |
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
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"Hi every one just wondering if people can give me feed back on my profile feel like it needs polishing up but just don’t know what to to do to make it stand out that little bit more and make it that little bit more attractive"
Lose the dick profile pic. Chances are we'd just delete it if it popped into our inbox. Loose the two dick pics in your profile....the grip of death isn't at all attractive and it's not doing you any favours.
The text.....exactly the same as every other guy unfortunately. Nothing much for us to start a conversation from. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Very bland, dull and generic profile text in my opinion.
A whole lot of words that don't really tell the reader much, or anything about you.
What I'm getting from your profile is that even you don't know what it is you're looking for.
As for the last sentence, I'd dump it if I were you. Nobody is going to go to the trouble of messaging you to find out information that you can't take the trouble of putting on your profile, when so many others have made that effort.
Your profile is your shop window. Your chance to sell yourself. You need to stand out. Hook them in. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just updated my profile don’t know if I’ve made it worse or better haha am really bad at righting about myself  "
The only difference I see is that you've fleshed it out with more words, but it STILL doesn't tell anyone what you're looking for or what you have to offer.
What sort of things are you into, and no, I'm not talking about your stamp collection.
Try to think about how it might come across to someone else reading it.
Or, imagine you came across a single lady's profile that was written like yours.
How are you going to know if you'd meet her needs or that she'd meet yours?
I'll give you an example. There's a lady not that far away from me - within about 30 miles. Absolute stunner. Gorgeous body, the works. And yes, I'd love to shag her.
BUT. Reading her profile tells me we'd clash and that it just wouldn't happen.
See. Saves all the bother |
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