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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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I’m dyslexic and Struggle with spelling and Grammar.
I struggle with the first message I send to people makes me look like a Idiot because they think I haven’t read there profiles even tho I read every profile I go on.I would really be grateful if people could look at my profile and tell me if it reads ok.thanks in Advance. |
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Your profile looks fine to me. I'd take the first paragraph out though, don't start with a negative and to be honest your spelling and grammar isn't bad at all.
One small thing in your header it says "lift" I think you mean "life".
There's no magic message. Just keep it brief and introduce yourself, possibly mention something about their profile.
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"I’m dyslexic and Struggle with spelling and Grammar.
I struggle with the first message I send to people makes me look like a Idiot because they think I haven’t read there profiles even tho I read every profile I go on.I would really be grateful if people could look at my profile and tell me if it reads ok.thanks in Advance. "
This is almost word for word what is written on your profile, it just has the spelling and grammar corrected for you:
I was on here a few years ago with my partner on a couples account. Now I am doing it on my own my partner has given me permission.
A little about me; I am 6ft 2, average body, tattooed, clean shaven downstairs & dark hair.
Stuff I am into and enjoy; I am a good kisser, I have big hands and like to use them during foreplay, oiled massages, anal (giving not receiving) and I don’t mind little bit of hair pulling if that’s your thing.
I am here for the same reason as everybody else, fun and lots of it. I am not looking to hook up with everybody, just that select few that catch my eye, more of a FWB situation. There needs to be an attraction from both sides. I prefer a bit of a chat and banter before jumping into bed, it makes the experience worth waiting for.
If I send a wink it’s because I like what I have read on your profile and don't want to waste my time sending a message if it's just going to get deleted or left unread. If you wink back, then I will message.
If you are not verified or picture verified, I will not reply to your messages; there are too many fakes out there. I am straight, please respect this. I will not meet a couple if the guy is looking to play in any bi mm activity as that is not my thing. I do have a family and a busy life so I cannot meet at the drop of a hat. I can travel and accommodate.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I’m dyslexic and Struggle with spelling and Grammar.
I struggle with the first message I send to people makes me look like a Idiot because they think I haven’t read there profiles even tho I read every profile I go on.I would really be grateful if people could look at my profile and tell me if it reads ok.thanks in Advance.
This is almost word for word what is written on your profile, it just has the spelling and grammar corrected for you:
I was on here a few years ago with my partner on a couples account. Now I am doing it on my own my partner has given me permission.
A little about me; I am 6ft 2, average body, tattooed, clean shaven downstairs & dark hair.
Stuff I am into and enjoy; I am a good kisser, I have big hands and like to use them during foreplay, oiled massages, anal (giving not receiving) and I don’t mind little bit of hair pulling if that’s your thing.
I am here for the same reason as everybody else, fun and lots of it. I am not looking to hook up with everybody, just that select few that catch my eye, more of a FWB situation. There needs to be an attraction from both sides. I prefer a bit of a chat and banter before jumping into bed, it makes the experience worth waiting for.
If I send a wink it’s because I like what I have read on your profile and don't want to waste my time sending a message if it's just going to get deleted or left unread. If you wink back, then I will message.
If you are not verified or picture verified, I will not reply to your messages; there are too many fakes out there. I am straight, please respect this. I will not meet a couple if the guy is looking to play in any bi mm activity as that is not my thing. I do have a family and a busy life so I cannot meet at the drop of a hat. I can travel and accommodate.
Good luck "
Thanks very much appreciate that. |
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By *ucka39Man
over a year ago
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"Is your partner not able to help you with the spelling/grammar issues on your profile?
Fair point.
Why can't he/she?
Because he's a single guy so doesn't have a partner. Duh! "
But his partner has given him permission duh so he's not single he's playing with her permission |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Is your partner not able to help you with the spelling/grammar issues on your profile?
Fair point.
Why can't he/she?"
Because she don’t want to know what I’m doing when I’m on fab so I don’t bother asking her. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Is your partner not able to help you with the spelling/grammar issues on your profile?
Fair point.
Why can't he/she?
Because he's a single guy so doesn't have a partner. Duh! "
ye because I don’t have a partner. I just put it on my profile For the sake of it. |
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"Is your partner not able to help you with the spelling/grammar issues on your profile?
Fair point.
Why can't he/she?
Because he's a single guy so doesn't have a partner. Duh! "
Read the profile.
He clearly says his partner has given him permission.
So he does have a partner. Duh. |
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