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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
Inkedlad2 - profile name sounds generic already. Also are you more than the sum of some tattoos, or not?
You've not put down a name, just a . that doesn't inspire confidence. Just make up a name you're happy to use, then people can address you by it.
The grammar could do with tightening.
There's no point thanking people for viewing your profile. The same with saying you aren't looking to make your way around the whole site.
It's good to see you're not meeting due to the pandemic.
The talked to a handful of people and met a select few make it sound as if you're doing people a favour by chatting and meeting. I'm not so keen on this.
There's no feeling for 'you' in your profile blurb. There's no personality invested in it. It's functional, like an out of office reply from a business that has closed for Christmas. There is no sense of the person behind it, what makes them unique or interesting.
Cannot accommodate/travel understandable during the pandemic, but it is nice to see what options are available for afterwards.
The pics aren't particularly great, nor are they terrible. They are, however, very samey and not much different to many other profiles. Like the blurb, they don't exactly scream personality, but instead have an air of this will do. What pics can you take that show you've got a personality? What can you take a shot of that shows some uniqueness? How can you inject a sense of fun into your pics?
Tina Titz, available for weddings, funerals, PTA meetings and cups of tea, but not on a Tuesday, when she is washing her wig.  |
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"Inkedlad2 - profile name sounds generic already. Also are you more than the sum of some tattoos, or not?
You've not put down a name, just a . that doesn't inspire confidence. Just make up a name you're happy to use, then people can address you by it.
The grammar could do with tightening.
There's no point thanking people for viewing your profile. The same with saying you aren't looking to make your way around the whole site.
It's good to see you're not meeting due to the pandemic.
The talked to a handful of people and met a select few make it sound as if you're doing people a favour by chatting and meeting. I'm not so keen on this.
There's no feeling for 'you' in your profile blurb. There's no personality invested in it. It's functional, like an out of office reply from a business that has closed for Christmas. There is no sense of the person behind it, what makes them unique or interesting.
Cannot accommodate/travel understandable during the pandemic, but it is nice to see what options are available for afterwards.
The pics aren't particularly great, nor are they terrible. They are, however, very samey and not much different to many other profiles. Like the blurb, they don't exactly scream personality, but instead have an air of this will do. What pics can you take that show you've got a personality? What can you take a shot of that shows some uniqueness? How can you inject a sense of fun into your pics?
Tina Titz, available for weddings, funerals, PTA meetings and cups of tea, but not on a Tuesday, when she is washing her wig. "
Best profile critique i have ever read. Great job.  |
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
"Inkedlad2 - profile name sounds generic already. Also are you more than the sum of some tattoos, or not?
You've not put down a name, just a . that doesn't inspire confidence. Just make up a name you're happy to use, then people can address you by it.
The grammar could do with tightening.
There's no point thanking people for viewing your profile. The same with saying you aren't looking to make your way around the whole site.
It's good to see you're not meeting due to the pandemic.
The talked to a handful of people and met a select few make it sound as if you're doing people a favour by chatting and meeting. I'm not so keen on this.
There's no feeling for 'you' in your profile blurb. There's no personality invested in it. It's functional, like an out of office reply from a business that has closed for Christmas. There is no sense of the person behind it, what makes them unique or interesting.
Cannot accommodate/travel understandable during the pandemic, but it is nice to see what options are available for afterwards.
The pics aren't particularly great, nor are they terrible. They are, however, very samey and not much different to many other profiles. Like the blurb, they don't exactly scream personality, but instead have an air of this will do. What pics can you take that show you've got a personality? What can you take a shot of that shows some uniqueness? How can you inject a sense of fun into your pics?
Tina Titz, available for weddings, funerals, PTA meetings and cups of tea, but not on a Tuesday, when she is washing her wig.
Best profile critique i have ever read. Great job. "
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