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Another needy male needing profile affirmation :-)
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"If it's not getting too boring - just be interested as to whether this works or makes me look like a twat.
If the latter be a bit gentle in your criticisms - I'm very shy and sensitive "
Well I can't really comment on the context of the text in relation to how it's going to attract the ladies but it does appear to be pretty sex centred (I know it is a swinging site so might sound like a contradiction in terms!
One bit of advice that I would give though is to replace you use of 'your' in places, rather than you're or you are, otherwise you'll be automatically discounted by any ladies who are spelling and grammar pedants . Not having a go at you or them here by the way.
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"If it's not getting too boring - just be interested as to whether this works or makes me look like a twat.
If the latter be a bit gentle in your criticisms - I'm very shy and sensitive " Have you got a profile picture before the bus hit you |
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You're status update was off putting but I read your profile.
My only criticism would be the "scenario". Two meets are.never the same for me, not even with the same person, so setting out what you want to happen will turn off those that don't like what you're suggesting.
Apart from that... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thank you all - your lovely "
No worries mate, that should be 'you're lovely' though, have you not been paying attention in class?
See you around again sometime, now I realise who you are |
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over a year ago
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I agree about your status update, its great that you had a brilliant time but the strength of your status sounds like you're considering a marriage proposal! On a swingers site, thats pretty offputing.
Also, either hide your picture or put the proper one on. That distorted one does neither shows people what you look like or hides you from _iew so theres no point in having it.
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over a year ago
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"If it's not getting too boring - just be interested as to whether this works or makes me look like a twat.
If the latter be a bit gentle in your criticisms - I'm very shy and sensitive "
i think its a bit long winded but who am i to say
but being bi i read lots of mens profile and im getting to the stage we as men should get the girls to write our profiles as lots of us cant sell our selves... but well done for getting out there |
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over a year ago
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I had to scrutinize your avatar pic, when its small it looks a bit like the elephant man...it wasn't till I looked properly that I reaslised you'd scribbled on it. If I was browsing a list of single men I'd think it was wierd.
Profile's good though. |
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Following the consensus I've scrubbed my status (it would have gone in a few hours anyway).
It fitted the context of the night in question - but see what you mean about everyone else who wasn't there! |
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"I had to scrutinize your avatar pic, when its small it looks a bit like the elephant man...it wasn't till I looked properly that I reaslised you'd scribbled on it. If I was browsing a list of single men I'd think it was wierd.
Profile's good though. "
hello welcome back xx
profiles a bit ummm i didnt read it all |
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