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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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OK
I can't see anything realy wrong with it tbh. The block text is a bit overwhelming, but then it's a joke so........
Perhaps missing a face pic, but that's entirel up to you......... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
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"Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
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Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
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Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!"
Or not selective, would he realy fuck a 98 year old? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The second half of the profile really isn't funny and even if it was the ability to copy and paste a generic joke is hardly indicative of a great sense of humour.
As others have said a 50 year old male that can;t accommodate smacks of married man and needs explaining. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
and
Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!"
"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.
it means he is realy horny.  |
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Lose the first sentence entirely it doesn't makes sense.
Leave the rest until you get to Alan x
THEN Delete EVERYTHING under that. What a stupid waste of time and space and bandwidth ......
There.... perfect x |
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"Lose the first sentence entirely it doesn't makes sense.
Leave the rest until you get to Alan x
THEN Delete EVERYTHING under that. What a stupid waste of time and space and bandwidth ......
There.... perfect x "
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
and
Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!
"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.
it means he is realy horny. "
You have your opinion - we have ours. To us, ANYONE who has left the age range at 18-99 either....:-
a) hasn't given it any thought
b) is desperate
c) is a fake (that is a common 'thread' - no pun honestly - in fake profiles)
So if WE think that, how many others looking at the OP's profile will think the same????????? Hmmmmm....?????
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By *exyeyez23 OP Man
over a year ago
Lytham St Anne’s |
"Not too bad, but.....
Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????
Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!
And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.
and
Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!
"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.
it means he is realy horny.
You have your opinion - we have ours. To us, ANYONE who has left the age range at 18-99 either....:-
a) hasn't given it any thought
b) is desperate
c) is a fake (that is a common 'thread' - no pun honestly - in fake profiles)
So if WE think that, how many others looking at the OP's profile will think the same????????? Hmmmmm....?????
and "
Have taken the constructive critasism on board and have made some changes hopefully for the better and thank you to everyone for your input it has been very much appreciated I think my profile is better now just going to revisit my pictures see if I can make them better thanks to everyone |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Alan - just had a look at the changes you have made. Much, much better mate. Well done.
The ONLY lasting criticism we would have is that, for a guy of 50, your lower age limit is unrealistic and gives a 'dubious' impression on you. Have a look at it this way: You are advertising for a fem who is just SEVEN years older than your son .......... Does that make the point?
Other than that, we wish you luck with it - now all you need is bucket loads of patience and persistence...... 
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"And what is cut manhood?
Sounds a bit painful  Circumcised thought women liked that ?"
Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant  |
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By *exyeyez23 OP Man
over a year ago
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"And what is cut manhood?
Sounds a bit painful Circumcised thought women liked that ?
Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant "
Thought that was what you meant and you are right so sounds better saying circumcised. Thanks |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"And what is cut manhood?
Sounds a bit painful Circumcised thought women liked that ?
Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant Thought that was what you meant and you are right so sounds better saying circumcised. Thanks"
No problem |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Did not see what it was like before so cannot comment but looks ok now
But what I really want to say is what a refreshing change , somebody who asks for advice gets the advice and acts on it
That in itself is remarkable |
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