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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey looking for some tips and help as much as I can fuck with the best of them, im new to this, any help would be gratefully appreciated"
I would suggest that you proof read your profile.
That is all.!!!
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
Personally iv always found it cringy when bios mishmash children with their sexual wants. If you have to mention them, at least give them a separate paragraph!
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
Off putting profile name.
Incredibly immature biography.
Terrably written. No one expects Shakespeare, but legible, constructed and informative is good, no matter how badly spelt or poorly punctuated. (To us anyway, other opinions will differ)
Questions;
What are you really offering? I'm not taking any notice of what your biog says, that's poorly written porn, a fantasy of what you think we want.
What do you think your target audience is looking for?
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"Off putting profile name.
Incredibly immature biography.
Terrably written. No one expects Shakespeare, but legible, constructed and informative is good, no matter how badly spelt or poorly punctuated. (To us anyway, other opinions will differ)
Questions;
What are you really offering? I'm not taking any notice of what your biog says, that's poorly written porn, a fantasy of what you think we want.
What do you think your target audience is looking for?
E"
We thought the name was very off-putting too.
What experience do you have to make you a Milfmaster ?
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"Off putting profile name.
Incredibly immature biography.
Terrably written. No one expects Shakespeare, but legible, constructed and informative is good, no matter how badly spelt or poorly punctuated. (To us anyway, other opinions will differ)
Questions;
What are you really offering? I'm not taking any notice of what your biog says, that's poorly written porn, a fantasy of what you think we want.
What do you think your target audience is looking for?
E
We thought the name was very off-putting too.
What experience do you have to make you a Milfmaster ?
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"Off putting profile name.
Incredibly immature biography.
Terrably written. No one expects Shakespeare, but legible, constructed and informative is good, no matter how badly spelt or poorly punctuated. (To us anyway, other opinions will differ)
Questions;
What are you really offering? I'm not taking any notice of what your biog says, that's poorly written porn, a fantasy of what you think we want.
What do you think your target audience is looking for?
E
We thought the name was very off-putting too.
What experience do you have to make you a Milfmaster ?
Single dad innit "
Spits coffee out  |
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Welcome to fab op. Think of your profile from the point of view of the kind of person you'd like to meet and imagine what they'd like to read 
It's very tough on here for single men especially at the moment when it's against site rules and govt regulations to arrange meets but if you put the groundwork in now by making connections in the forum or maybe the chat rooms you might make some friends for when this is all over although this isn't a guarantee
The one thing I would say is don't go in to detail about your children.
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"Off putting profile name.
Incredibly immature biography.
Terrably written. No one expects Shakespeare, but legible, constructed and informative is good, no matter how badly spelt or poorly punctuated. (To us anyway, other opinions will differ)
Questions;
What are you really offering? I'm not taking any notice of what your biog says, that's poorly written porn, a fantasy of what you think we want.
What do you think your target audience is looking for?
E
We thought the name was very off-putting too.
What experience do you have to make you a Milfmaster ?
Single dad innit
Spits coffee out "
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
"Welcome to fab op. Think of your profile from the point of view of the kind of person you'd like to meet and imagine what they'd like to read
It's very tough on here for single men especially at the moment when it's against site rules and govt regulations to arrange meets but if you put the groundwork in now by making connections in the forum or maybe the chat rooms you might make some friends for when this is all over although this isn't a guarantee
The one thing I would say is don't go in to detail about your children.
Good luck "
This is good advice.
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By *SA 2020 OP Man
over a year ago
Liverpool |
thanks for your help and honesty, iv had another go, just been straight, keep the naughty side for when iv built a few connections. Never used a site like that always used Badoo and Tinder which has its uses but not what im looking for, happy swinging |
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"ps didnt realise id said anything about bitches, iv changed it now, that miht have been the jack daniels talking, can anyone remember what I said?"
You don’t even know what your own profile says? You said you wanted “kinky bitches” - not a good look. |
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"ps didnt realise id said anything about bitches, iv changed it now, that miht have been the jack daniels talking, can anyone remember what I said?"
Yep we all remember.
In all honesty no one is going to message you to find out more (subject has been covered to death on the forums). |
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Your bio still needs a bit more work as others said it doesn’t have to be Shakespeare but a little more info is needed. Also I would remove your status as your comparing yourself to a horny animal which makes you look a bit desperate. Do you expect we won’t be out of tier 3 when lockdown ends and as another had said get rid of the picture with badly edited blue scribbles on it. Finally take some more pictures with greater variety and contrast to them, think of your profile as a car advertisement you have to woo people with it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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There's obviously been some rewriting of this profile to make it better. But I'd query "Im 33 hardworking and very little free time". You're basically saying "I'm going to fit you in for a shag" not "I want to make time to please you".
I'd also suggest you do your text on Word first so you can get rid of grammar and punctuation errors - there are three problems in the few words I quoted. It does send out a message you're not educated, not sensitive, or you can't be bothered. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Think we should have a thread where we critique other profiles? With that persons knowledge "
I'm sure there have been threads like that in the Lounge before. You could start one. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey all fairly new on here myself and any advice would be welcome thank you in advance "
What kind of advice do you want? It's better if you start a new thread and ask. |
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