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OK can I have some feedback please
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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on my profile 
It's a work in progress... anything I should (or shouldn't) include?
I gave pics in private for potential friends, it the bio OK or do I need to re write ? |
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Well, that photo of a bit of your back is pointless for a start. Suggests you have little imagination.
And mentioning your fantasy woman, Emma Bunton, but then effectively saying don’t worry if you don’t match up, is not going to excite the ladies either.
What to do
What do you like about the over rated Emma? Her smile? Then say you need a lady who smiles.
Etc etc |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Well, that photo of a bit of your back is pointless for a start. Suggests you have little imagination.
And mentioning your fantasy woman, Emma Bunton, but then effectively saying don’t worry if you don’t match up, is not going to excite the ladies either.
What to do
What do you like about the over rated Emma? Her smile? Then say you need a lady who smiles.
Etc etc "
Ahh ok, so I should elaborate on that a bit...
I love to look into a pair of sexy eyes, im mesmerised by them, and if they're blue... thats heaven.
The pic of my back shows I love to be scratched... deep! Maybe the oic doesn't show this, but rhats what it implied.
Blondes do get my attention more than brunettes, but all said and done it doesn't matter about colour, I go more for personality
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"Well, that photo of a bit of your back is pointless for a start. Suggests you have little imagination.
And mentioning your fantasy woman, Emma Bunton, but then effectively saying don’t worry if you don’t match up, is not going to excite the ladies either.
What to do
What do you like about the over rated Emma? Her smile? Then say you need a lady who smiles.
Etc etc
Ahh ok, so I should elaborate on that a bit...
I love to look into a pair of sexy eyes, im mesmerised by them, and if they're blue... thats heaven.
The pic of my back shows I love to be scratched... deep! Maybe the oic doesn't show this, but rhats what it implied.
Blondes do get my attention more than brunettes, but all said and done it doesn't matter about colour, I go more for personality
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Right put that second sentence about mesmerising eyes in then. Women love that soppy rubbish.  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Well, that photo of a bit of your back is pointless for a start. Suggests you have little imagination.
And mentioning your fantasy woman, Emma Bunton, but then effectively saying don’t worry if you don’t match up, is not going to excite the ladies either.
What to do
What do you like about the over rated Emma? Her smile? Then say you need a lady who smiles.
Etc etc
Ahh ok, so I should elaborate on that a bit...
I love to look into a pair of sexy eyes, im mesmerised by them, and if they're blue... thats heaven.
The pic of my back shows I love to be scratched... deep! Maybe the oic doesn't show this, but rhats what it implied.
Blondes do get my attention more than brunettes, but all said and done it doesn't matter about colour, I go more for personality
Right put that second sentence about mesmerising eyes in then. Women love that soppy rubbish. "
Maybe soppy rubbish, but if that's what turns me on then its all good
I am old school, treat a lady with respect, not just a piece of meat to dip my wick into.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Not great profile if im honest, pointless profile pictures, understand not everyone put a face pic on but you need better pics znd a good selection, I'd suggest keeping naughty pics private for friends.
I wouldnt even bother putting the comment about Emma in profile, I mean I like tom Hardy but I dont look for that type in my search.. if I did I could potentially put off a decent guy from messaging me if he was nothing like tom.
Im relatively new to the site too, I also need to work on my profile, ive found the forum really helpful in and take on board what I see in other profiles if all types.
I really believe in you get out what you in on this site, you've made no effort so unlikely you will get much back..
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I think it reads ok, if slightly plain. The bit about your looks comes off as being a bit self conscious. I’d just take it out, people will decide for themselves if they find you attractive or not.
Your profile pics doesn’t look good as a thumbnail, so I’d change that to something else. I would recommend you don’t make your profile pic one of your cock though as that puts people off. |
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It’s a very basic profile that reads as if you spend too much time looking in the mirror. You maybe handsome but no pictures to back that up, then it’s just empty words.
More pictures, preferably with your face but if not, then something imaginative that will back up your claims of being good looking |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"It’s a very basic profile that reads as if you spend too much time looking in the mirror. You maybe handsome but no pictures to back that up, then it’s just empty words.
More pictures, preferably with your face but if not, then something imaginative that will back up your claims of being good looking "
Far from it... i don't even have a mirror in my house haha
OK I lie.. there's one in the bathroom for shaving purposes, but its not one that talks to me  |
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You got your preferences ie couples and women with age groups in your ‘looking for’ section. I cant see why you would also mention it in your profile text. Then go on to say ‘age is just a number’ - it doesn’t really make sense to me.
Most peoples jobs are stressful - i would remove that bit.
You do you know we are eager to learn what you are looking for?
You want to meet m/f couples - there is nothing in your profile that would suggest anything in it for them. Remember, there are not just a female in m/f couple. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"You want to meet m/f couples - there is nothing in your profile that would suggest anything in it for them. Remember, there are not just a female in m/f couple. "
I did put that I would like to make friends first, whats in it for couples all depends on the situation we find ourselves in, as everyone is different i don't expect everyone to be wanting the same things.
Hope that cleared that but up for you
Thanks for the constructive criticism though... have taken the age bit out now |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You say a lot about what you want and what you're looking for, what about what you have to offer in return?
Other than that it's far better than a lot of profiles I've seen |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Also I'd avoid mentioning the re-write in your status as it implies you were struggling or that your profile was previously bad. Just on a personal note. |
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So having read your updated profile (what did you say about Emma?!) for what it’s worth I think its fine. My only query is why the lack of veris if you’ve been going to clubs for a few years? Need more photos too. Good luck with your quest. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"So having read your updated profile (what did you say about Emma?!) for what it’s worth I think its fine. My only query is why the lack of veris if you’ve been going to clubs for a few years? Need more photos too. Good luck with your quest. "
Lack of veris as this is a new profile after taking a break.
When my favorite club closed back in 2019 it hit me hard, losing the people that I thought were lifelong friends, turns out I was just another bloke willing to pay every weekend for over 3 years and support the club owners in every way I could.
Sorry went off on one there, it still hurts what they done to me.  |
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I think its too long. But I have a short attention span haha. Different for single guys though as a lot of competition I suppose. And our profile isn't all that so probs not the best to give advice hahah x |
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By *ucka39Man
over a year ago
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Hi I think after reading your profile seems ok but would do something about photos dress smart or casual and crop part so doesn't show your full face as a profile picture I think it would be catchy and any female would want to indulge further into conversation it's nice leaving something as a mystery and slowly showing more of yourself from different angles just my opinion hope my information assists  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hi I think after reading your profile seems ok but would do something about photos dress smart or casual and crop part so doesn't show your full face as a profile picture I think it would be catchy and any female would want to indulge further into conversation it's nice leaving something as a mystery and slowly showing more of yourself from different angles just my opinion hope my information assists "
The pics are definitely a work in progress as I hate the camera with a passion.
Gonna try and get some done this weekend... crop and hide my worst features haha |
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By *ucka39Man
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"Hi I think after reading your profile seems ok but would do something about photos dress smart or casual and crop part so doesn't show your full face as a profile picture I think it would be catchy and any female would want to indulge further into conversation it's nice leaving something as a mystery and slowly showing more of yourself from different angles just my opinion hope my information assists
The pics are definitely a work in progress as I hate the camera with a passion.
Gonna try and get some done this weekend... crop and hide my worst features haha"
Doubt most people enjoy taking photos of themselves as they never seem to look like how we expect but take a few then play around with them until something catches your vision no one is perfect just takes bit of practice
And good luck with this |
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