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By *andS4fun OP Couple
over a year ago
Lancashire |
Hi all, could some of you good folks just take a little time to review our profile please ? we would be very grateful. We have just updated it we realise its a bit long so we are going to cut it back but without taking out the important bits & the meaning.
We have been taking a break as we have had a baby but want to get back into swinging so any advice on the profile would be appreacited. Thanks folks xxx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Tis a bit long for sure.....but in general the only thing I would say is go through it and delete anything that's repeated as I noticed 3 or 4 bits minimum (right from the first paragraph).
And don't feel you have to explain why you don't have more verifications etc. Quality people won't give a shit and will accept your explanation if it ever did become an issue.
You sound like great people, welcome back and hope you have plenty of fun. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Far too long and repetitive in my view. Reads like you've written it in bits and kept adding new sections. Good comprehensive info tho so don't lose that. Just rewrite it so it flows better. Welcome back after your break! |
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By *andS4fun OP Couple
over a year ago
Lancashire |
"Far too long and repetitive in my view. Reads like you've written it in bits and kept adding new sections. Good comprehensive info tho so don't lose that. Just rewrite it so it flows better. Welcome back after your break!"
Hey, again thanks- totally agree, noted  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Wow that profile is way too long!
plus why can you not accommodate?
what arrangements are you happy to make with regard to accommodation?
Photos are a bit disorganised could you re think them....?
How about some input from your other half?
Mark and Jayne |
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By *andS4fun OP Couple
over a year ago
Lancashire |
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Wow that profile is way too long!
plus why can you not accommodate?
what arrangements are you happy to make with regard to accommodation?
Photos are a bit disorganised could you re think them....?
How about some input from your other half?
Mark and Jayne"
Thanks for the feedback we've trimmed it a bit now & going to take another look. We like you have children ( 3 young children) so that is why we don't accomodate it's easier for us to go out& get a baby sitter rather than ship our kids our somewhere else. We would never 'play' with the kids upstairs asleep.
Not sure what you mean by photo's 'disorgnised' we intend to put some fresh ones up very soon however.
Also not sure what you mean by input by other half as we have both written this -) Thanks for your input & yeah it is too long so we'll edit.
Thanks again. |
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