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Would you like to check out my profile and give a feedback on how it looks and what can be improved?
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From our pint of you full marks for not displaying cock pics. Think the bit about couples being in the same page etc is a bit superfluous and makes your text look a bit long winded. |
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"Hello dear fabbers!
Would you like to check out my profile and give a feedback on how it looks and what can be improved?
Thank you for your time!
From our pint of you full marks for not displaying cock pics. Think the bit about couples being in the same page etc is a bit superfluous and makes your text look a bit long winded."
Thank you for your time, I will think of ways to tweak and restructure the text to be a bit shorter |
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"Yeah good. Just a little long winded so it loses impact and weaken your profile after the good start with pictures (now that I think about it, it’s not Facebook, you could drop one of those)"
Thanks for your time, I’ll try to make it a little bit shorter, but I will have to add another sentence as well, that I do have some pics (that don’t good on Facebook) and I will share them upon request! |
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""Some conservative criticism is access well".
I don't know what this means.
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Thanks for your time, but I don’t think I understand what you mean! “Some conservative criticism is access well”
My thread is about “constructive criticism” or in shorter term Feedback, but I would appreciate some pointers on what can be changed or how! That’s why is constructive!
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""Some conservative criticism is access well".
I don't know what this means.
Thanks for your time, but I don’t think I understand what you mean! “Some conservative criticism is access well”
My thread is about “constructive criticism” or in shorter term Feedback, but I would appreciate some pointers on what can be changed or how! That’s why is constructive!
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Oh yeah! Sorry! I spotted the mistake! I was tiered and some typos with the help of autocorrect slipped through!!
Thank you for raising that question! |
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