Hi, to be honest it's not necessarily the content but the way it's written that I had problems with.
There's either no capital letters or it's all in capital letters.
The paragraphs are more like a series of lists than proper sentences. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Very comprehensive Op. If divulging all that gets you in contact with the right people, then why not ?
P.S
Probably best avoid messaging profiles looking for a 'man of mystery'  |
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There's nothing on there I'd consider out of the ordinary to say on fab; the pee/period interests are a bit more niche, but being upfront about it isn't bad.
Is it a bit wordy, sure, but letting people know what you like and offer is preferable to a profile which reads 'just ask' or whatever. I'd format it more carefully and take away any bits where you repeat yourself, but honestly I've read much worse. Good luck.  |
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
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I would says as above, it's very repetitive and very choppy put together.
Click your own username and see how we view your profile, a little rearranging and removing the repetitive bits and Bob's your uncle! |
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Honesty is best. Use of lots of CAPITALS is a deterrent for many. 
The extent of the level of detail is a personal preference and you can experiment, to see what works for you. Repetition is wasted space and may deter.
Some things will put more off than others but honesty works. |
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Not trying to be harsh but you have lots of generic snippets that look like they have been copied from other profiles. Be personal and write the way you are in person and tell us more about you, not just the sexual service you are looking for. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i have tried to make my profile as honest and as truthful as i can .
but is it too honest , should i put less on it.? .  "
I found it quite repetitive and didn't seem to flow.. |
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The profile is very unstructured which makes it a little bit difficult to read. I see no reason why the honesty would put you in a bad light.
Your profile also contains a lot of dick pics. You're automatically going to cut off the majority of the women on the site for that very reason.
If you have any female friends, ask them what they think of a guy who shows dick pics. I know this is a swingers site, but women think differently to us.
The best thing you could do in my opinion is get some (or some more) female friends and talk to them, see what makes them tick. You can then get an idea of how to present yourself on here.
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