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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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2 reasons for this post
1st being,, its always good to hear some feedback advice whever its good or bad, be honest no holding back let me have it both barrels...
2nd being,, i have changed my profile about a few times since being here, now happy with how it descibes me an what im looking for.
fire away you lovely lot... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I know it might be really nitpicking but constantly using "an" where it should be "and" is really offputting
Otherwise if you are happy with it and feel it reflects you then that's exactly what your profile should do |
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"Also..
You haven't used a single capital letter and you spelt curvy wrong.
Sorry, but you did ask. "
Full stops are amazing also.
Personally if a profile is just dick pics then I presume you really think theres nothing else to you then a penis and don't go no further. |
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
Peterborough / Stamford |
I'm guessing there are tattoos that are being covered up in one of the photos but it actually looks like you're covered in plasters and looks a bit off-putting.
And agree about the capitals and spelling. Poorly written profiles are a turn-off for us, however snobbish that might make us seem. Grammar, capital letters and spelling is quite important to a lot of people. |
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Agree with all of the above ... I find bad punctuation/grammar a turn off too.
Also, your pic of the 4th June ... if you cropped that to just your torso/top of your hips and made it black and white it would be a much more appealing photo. Personally I like photos that are masculine, alluring and leave a little to my imagination 
Again this is just nit picking, but there are a lot of women who take notice of these things. |
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"I'm guessing there are tattoos that are being covered up in one of the photos but it actually looks like you're covered in plasters and looks a bit off-putting.
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I assumed his nipples had gone septic after being pierced unhygienically. |
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"2 reasons for this post
1st being,, its always good to hear some feedback advice whever its good or bad, be honest no holding back let me have it both barrels...
2nd being,, i have changed my profile about a few times since being here, now happy with how it descibes me an what im looking for.
fire away you lovely lot..."
You seem pretty honest and upfront with your profile which I appreciate. Wish others could follow suit. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I'm guessing there are tattoos that are being covered up in one of the photos but it actually looks like you're covered in plasters and looks a bit off-putting.
I assumed his nipples had gone septic after being pierced unhygienically. "
hahaa brilliant, i can assure you there fit and healthy and plaster free  |
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I quite like it. There's a little touch of humour. Your three photos are OK, the middle one being a bit arty. I would recommend more photos, preferably full-length and with a variety of casual and smart clothes.
Your text is OK but some of struck me as a bit redundant, like the bit about what a first message from you would be like. It would strike me as better to say you are always respectful and courteous.
I don't know why you have inverted commas round the au revoir.
I like your profile photo.
I'd say you profile is definitely above average amongst the single guys on here. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"2 reasons for this post
1st being,, its always good to hear some feedback advice whever its good or bad, be honest no holding back let me have it both barrels...
2nd being,, i have changed my profile about a few times since being here, now happy with how it descibes me an what im looking for.
fire away you lovely lot..."
Its 
Love it!
Great arse!
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By *niper oneMan
over a year ago
DERBY/Notts border |
"2 reasons for this post
1st being,, its always good to hear some feedback advice whever its good or bad, be honest no holding back let me have it both barrels...
2nd being,, i have changed my profile about a few times since being here, now happy with how it descibes me an what im looking for.
fire away you lovely lot..."
Mate if your looking for a single woman go on POF its much easier most on here are really coupled up and just like the xtra attention.POF is a better end result also. |
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By *ENGUYMan
over a year ago
Hull |
You asked, so...
Sloppy punctuation, sometimes used where it isn't necessary, but not used where it should be!
Spelling? In your original post you talk about how it descibes you. The word is - describes.
Very little use of Capital letters. Virtually no sentences, but almost written as Bullet Points.
You don't accommodate but don't say why- that puts people off!
Some may say it's nit-picking, but a cleverly constructed profile gets more results than one that isn't.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Passing yourself off as 90% straight but listing yourself as bisexual and looking for TV’s is fence sitting.
If you’re bisexual be proud of it.
Apart from that it’s a good profile OP. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"2 reasons for this post
1st being,, its always good to hear some feedback advice whever its good or bad, be honest no holding back let me have it both barrels...
2nd being,, i have changed my profile about a few times since being here, now happy with how it descibes me an what im looking for.
fire away you lovely lot...
Its
Love it!
Great arse!
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aha thankyou your too kind my lov xx |
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