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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

This is a fictional story I wrote about 3 years ago.

Her name was Lisa, she was 22, 5’3” tall with collar length blonde hair. She was very young and girlie looking but this suited her delicate frame.

She weighed about 7 stone and was, some might say ‘waify’? But she was happy with her shape, even though past boyfriends had sometimes joked that she needed a good meal inside her and that her breasts were too small, Lisa was herself content with how she looked.

On this particular night she was driving home after attending an interview for a job she didn’t really want as it was too far away from her home town and not really challenging enough for her but the upshot was the money and perks were fantastic so she went anyway.

It went ok and she drove the long distance home feeling fairly confident that she had duly impressed her prospective employers with her lively chat and work experience.

She had even dressed to impress in her new black shortish skirt with a matching fitted jacket, under which she had on a beautiful silky white blouse.

Her decision to wear lacy white underwear with natural coloured stockings and suspenders was admittedly flirty but she knew the skirt was short enough to ride up slightly as she sat down so figured that could only go in her favour as the interviewees were both male.

She remembered the look on their faces as she crossed her legs as she sat down, her stockings making that delightful sound as they brushed together!

She finished this look with black high heeled patent leather court shoes which enhanced her slender legs and body perfectly.

Her make up was applied with her usual expertise if a touch heavier than her day to day look, and she had complimented her jewel like blue eyes with dark pink lipstick over her small but endearing mouth.

She drove on through the dark country roads towards her home town.

Another 20 miles and she would be home with her feet up and a stiff drink by her side, she listened to the radio as she sped on.

Suddenly as she was coasting along a nice long straight stretch of road her car started slowing and juddering, she could feel something wasn’t quite right with it, the ignition lights came on brightly and she had to quickly pull over to the side of the road.

She tried in vain to re-start the engine but the problem seemed terminal.

She looked around outside the car and through the moonlight realised she was in the middle of nowhere, she made to get her mobile from her hand bag but upon checking the screen she found there was no signal in this remote location.

Lisa slid her toned legs out of the door and stepped from the car. She shivered in the cold, she hadn’t brought a coat with her as she felt it spoiled the tailored look of her suit and at that time did not think she would need one.

The road was deserted, not a call box in any direction and no other cars came along even after waiting for 15 minutes or so.

She started to feel mildly worried now as she really didn’t know what to do.

After 10 more minutes Lisa decided she had no choice but to walk in the direction she was driving to see if there was a house or pub where she could use a phone, she walked purposely along the makeshift pavement, her high heels which were far from suitable walking shoes clicked loudly in the still night air as she went.

Rounding a slight curve in the road she came upon what appeared to be a pathway to her left with a house name on an old sign next to it.

‘At last some civilisation’ she thought ‘hopefully they will let me use their phone’

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By *lubcouple2Couple  over a year ago

newport

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Great start Hanna and as always look forward to more

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By *oannacd67TV/TS  over a year ago

worcester

Hope theres more to cone

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By *imale38Man  over a year ago

Barnsley

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Great start Hanna, another fantastic story in the making. Can't wait to read more.

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 2

She gingerly strode up the path towards a large house with dim lighting emanating from within and came upon an imposing front door with a large brass knocker, she knocked twice and waited on the steps.

The door creaked open and a tall dark man of about 45 years old answered in a polite voice “How can I help you miss?”

“Hello” she said “I’m sorry to bother you at this hour but I have broken down just up the road from here and can’t get a signal on my mobile phone to call anyone, and I was hoping I could use your phone?”

“Of course child!” the man replied “Please come in out of the cold and I’ll gladly help you”

Lisa nervously stepped into the house and followed the man into the kitchen.

“My phone is just in the living room on the side table” he said.

“Thank you” Lisa replied and walked towards the room he had indicated to her.

“Let me make you some tea” he called to her “While you are waiting”

“Thanks that would be lovely as I’m freezing!” Lisa replied.

She called her breakdown recovery company who informed her she may have to wait about an hour or 2 for a patrolman to come out to her.

She agreed to wait at this house and said she would walk back to her car at that time and check if anyone had arrived and hung up the phone.

The man who owned the house then came in with 2 mugs of steaming tea and offered one to her, she gladly accepted and sat in one of the leather arm chairs in the room.

The man sat opposite her and held his own mug in his hands while he asked her where she was heading etc.

They engaged in polite chat for a while and all the time Lisa couldn’t help but notice that he was glancing at her legs and body the way men sometimes do! ‘Hardly surprising’ she thought considering how short her skirt was and with her sheer stockings and sexy shoes she couldn’t blame him for looking!

“Your very lovely child if you don’t mind me saying, your legs are simply enchanting!” “What is your name?”

“Thank you” she answered, blushing slightly “It’s Lisa”

“I’m Tom” he replied “pleased to meet you Lisa!”

“Do you mind if I ask you how old you are Lisa? I’m just curious that’s all!”

“No I don’t mind you asking” she said “I’m 22”

“Well you are very beautiful and look much younger than 22” he added.

“Yes I know, I get told how I look rather young all the time” she said

“I guess It’s my features and being so skinny that helps?”

“Yes maybe” he said “personally I think girls with your build, petite and lithe are the most attractive, but that’s just my preference I guess” and they both half smiled at that point.

“I’d guess you weigh no more than about 6 or 7 stone?” he asked exquisitely.

Lisa looked at him in mild surprise and muttered “Erhmm Yes I’m actually dead on 7 stone!”

“Why do you ask?” She added.

“Just curious” He replied.

They both smiled awkwardly for a while and continued drinking the tea.

After half an hour or so Lisa started to feel quite queasy! Her head began to spin and she felt hot flushes spreading through her, it was almost as if she was d*unk! She stood up and tried to speak but felt herself coming over in a dead faint as her vision blurred and narrowed her legs began to give way and she knew she was about to pass out!

Tom had got out of his chair and was standing next to her, he caught her in his large arms and gently laid her on the sofa as her consciousness slipped away from her.

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Wow that was a sinister twist, didn't see the twist coming so early.

Fantastic build up and can't wait for more.

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By *ur sheepskin loverMan  over a year ago

Redhill, now i live in Germany

Lovely, part 3?

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By *dsindyTV/TS  over a year ago

East Lancashire

Oohhhhhhh, dark and sinister. This looks like it could be a masterpiece.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

As people saying def a more sinister story than your others but told wonderfully as always

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By *rDomme1Man  over a year ago

Colchester

Great start Hanna... you do love emphasising those black patent shoes in your stories dont you.. x

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 3

The last thing she remembered was Tom speaking quietly to her as he lowered her.

“Don’t be afraid young Lisa, I have sedated you angel, you are quite safe here and no harm will come to you, but you are simply too beautiful to pass by.

I am part of a small order of likeminded men who seek girls such as yourself and by the time this night is over we will change you forever, bring out a part of you that perhaps you have never discovered and nurture it for you, you can trust us all to look after you as a girl like you should be, and to fulfil you beyond your wildest fantasies!”

As his words echoed in her mind she vaguely realised he was removing her jacket gently, she felt limp and unable to resist as her world went blank and she slipped into a deep sleep!

Sometime later Lisa awoke, her eyes adjusted to her surroundings and she realised she was standing in a large basement brightly lit from above, her hands were tied high above her head to a length of rope fastened to the ceiling and her ankles were bound tightly together with her heels barely touching the stone floor!

Her jacket was gone and she was now just in her blouse and skirt.

She had no idea how long she had been out for the count but vaguely remembered Tom’s words before she blacked out.

She felt frightened and didn’t understand quite what he had meant? She cried out in the space before her feeling very nervous now.

She struggled with the ropes at her wrists but they were well bound and she realised there was no escape.

At that moment a door opened at the side of the room and Tom appeared, Lisa was shocked to see he was naked and had a smile on his face that renewed her fear!

“Ahhh Lisa my child do not be afraid we are not going to harm you in any way, far from it in fact , once we get started with your initiation you may find you will enjoy it beyond imagination!”

Lisa’s heart pounded in her slim chest as she listened to his words

“What are you going to do to me?” she inquired “Please you must let me go!”

“You said you would help me!” she cried.

“Yes and we shall little girl...We shall!”

Lisa felt a renewed stab of fear within her at his words.

“Please! Please let me go!” she cried again.

“What are you going to do to me?”

“All in good time my child” he replied “and I’m sorry but we can’t let you go until we have ‘revealed’ you fully and you have entertained us, in return!”

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Fantastic build up, love the bondage elements.

Cant wait for the next chapter to see what carnal delights Tom introduces Lisa to.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Such an amazing writer

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By *rDomme1Man  over a year ago

Colchester

Ooooh... we patiently await the next installment...

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

Wow what a powerful story

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By *xbanana2Man  over a year ago

addlestone

Superbly written x

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By *valexis147TV/TS  over a year ago

Tunbridge Wells

This sounds amazing Hanna, more more please babe!!! Xxxx

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By *eil777Man  over a year ago

leicester

More more more your have a skill of writing

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 4

Lisa was completely puzzled by his choice of the word ‘revealed’? She was about to protest further when he put his finger to his mouth and uttered a ‘Shhh’ at her to be silent!

At that moment other men slowly started to enter the room, all also naked, Lisa stared open mouthed as she counted mentally these strange men all about the same age as Tom and all huge muscular types.

Lisa counted the men as they slowly filtered into the room, there were 8 altogether including Tom.

“Please” she cried “I want to be set free now!”

“I don’t think I believe you Lisa!” he said.

“What? I do! Please, I’m begging you let me go” she cried.

“We are not convinced I’m afraid!”

“I don’t understand?” she muttered.

“You will my girl very soon!”

She was now visibly shaking with fear and they could hear this in her quiet voice.

“Please try and calm yourself little Lisa, we can see you are frightened and uncertain of us, but I promise you your fear is unjustified and will soon turn into pleasure for you”

“Please!” she cried again.

She then screamed as loudly as she could, a long ear piercing scream for help.

“Scream all you want child, but you will just be wasting energy you may need in a moment!” Tom said.

She screamed again and struggled in vain with her bonds.

“We are miles from anywhere dear Lisa and this basement is well soundproofed so I assure you it is a waste of precious emotion and time for you!”

Lisa sobbed quietly at his words, breathing deeply with effort and fear.

“I’m sorry Lisa darling but you are just going to have to submit to us tonight, believe me when I say you are going to enjoy what we have planned for you, we have done this many times before and always with success and I am expert at spotting the signs of potential material for us, and you my girl are the best I have ever seen!”

“You can’t… I won’t!” she protested, “You can’t make me!”

“Lisa my girl we won’t have to make you, believe me, I’ve seen it before, and I know I am right about you!”

He went on to add how he noticed something in her eyes when she first arrived that suggested to him that she would be perfect for his group of followers!

Lisa couldn’t speak as she listened to his words and realised there was no escape for her, and she would have to endure whatever these men had planned for her.

She trembled there in the cold room teetering on her heels, her hands far above her head with her heart hammering away in her chest.

“She is indeed as you described Tom quite lovely” said one of the men,” “A true beauty” said another.

“Well gentlemen without further delay shall we begin?” added Tom.

Then with no more explanation he and his friends moved towards her, they surrounded her tiny body and leered at her with menacing smiles on their faces.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Amazing story I'm sure that they are experts that bring out the inner slut within women and Lisa will be the most natural slut they have ever worked on

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By *obbly2000Man  over a year ago

Doncaster

Next part required pretty damn quick please

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By *rDomme1Man  over a year ago

Colchester

Oh... another twist cumming ???

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By *tudog1Man  over a year ago

Southampton

Great start more please

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 5

2 men approached her and without warning ripped open the front of her silk blouse, as they did so the buttons flew away in all directions.

Lisa gasped in sheer shock and surprise.

‘Stop’ she cried. ‘Please don’t’

The other man then felt around behind her back to the zip of her skirt and began to lower it, the lining of her skirt sliding slowly down her sheer stockings until it fell silently to the floor, then her blouse was parted and gasps of pleasure were heard from the group as they saw her delicate lacy white bra and the small pert breasts concealed beneath.

Hands caressed her slender firm waist, enjoying her porcelain smooth, white skin.

Lisa struggled against her bonds but it was futile and the 2 men held her firmly and they continued to undress her.

Her skirt was collected by one of them and placed on a chair in the far corner where she noticed her jacket also lay.

Then to her shock one of them came forward with scissors and methodically cut her blouse away from her arms and shoulders!

“Please don’t!!” she cried, but he ignored her and continued, his expert hands worked quickly brushing her soft pale skin with the cold steel of the scissors making her flinch uncontrollably.

Next he moved his attentions to her lace bra cutting easily through the thin straps until it floated along with the blouse to the cold stone floor.

The men all stared and let out a simultaneous sigh as they saw her naked breasts revealed at last, her nipples pert and erect in the cold basement air.

Lisa struggled against her restraints but she knew it was hopeless.

She now felt more frightened and exposed than she had ever been in her young life yet found herself feeling strangely excited as well, ashamed even that they were having this effect on her, it was as if she were outside herself and viewing from afar as she couldn’t ignore the feeling that she was under some sort of spell cast by her captors.

How had she got herself in a few hours into this situation?

And why was she now feeling mildly excited? No…. more than that, she began to fee turned on at being amongst so many men whom it was obvious to her by now were going to dominate her sexually in some way.

The man with the scissors then moved his hands, placed his fingers in the thin elastic at the sides of her white lace knickers, before she had time to react he had swiftly cut both sides of the thin material and they to fluttered to the floor!

He picked up the ruined garments and tossed them towards the corner.

Lisa now found herself wearing just her white lace suspenders, sheer stockings and her high heeled shoes, hands still tied above her with feet barely touching the floor in front of 8 big, leering naked men intent on who knows what with her!

“You are truly beautiful my girl, you will make an excellent challenge!” one of them said.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

More please amazing

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

OMG, I am bursting to read more!

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

What a fantastic story from the beautiful description of what she was wearing through the half hearted pleas to the dawning realisation that she wants to submit.

Thanks Hanna.

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 6

The men then all moved forward at once and stood circling her body, examining her every curve, then they began touching her, slowly caressing her thin arms and toned back, moving down to her slender hips, her flat tummy all of them at once…8 pairs of male hands on her.

“Pppllease stop!” she cried.

“Don’t…. Stop!” she persisted in vain.

But the men kept on caressing every part of her taught young petite body.

She found herself closing her eyes without realising, her head leaned back as she eventually started enjoying being touched so sensually like this, and she felt ashamed and knew she was blushing.

They then kissed her lightly all over her body, delicate hot kisses everywhere at once, in between her legs and across her firm tummy, she sighed gently and was moaning through her half open mouth at the pleasure they were giving her.

They saw the colour change in her face and without taking their hands off her one of them said “Hey Lisa darling it is nothing to feel ashamed of, Tom knew, as did we when we saw you that you would succumb to submissiveness- as have so many other girls we have brought here- it really is nothing to fear…let go and give yourself to your desires and you will experience pleasure you never thought possible!”

Lisa listened through a wave of sensation as he spoke while they all touched, stroked and kissed her, working their way slowly down her lean legs up and behind to her small firm bum, then to her tiny breasts kissing and biting gently moving down again slowly to in between her legs. They touched and tested, feeling, probing her pussy brushing the fine blonde hair they felt there, moving backwards to her bum again and inside her bum she felt a finger work its way inside her bum in further and out again.

She suddenly realised the moaning she could hear was from her!

She was moaning with ecstasy her breasts felt on fire as 4 hands were massaging them delicately with expert fingers, rolling her nipples, squeezing, pinching, it hurt a little and she uttered a small whimper but they continued regardless.

She could feel herself becoming moist between her legs and began to clench her thighs together in protest.

Lisa then felt a hand feeling between her bum cheeks and something cold and wet going inside her.

She then felt something cold and hard at the entrance to her bum, she tried to move herself forward away from whatever it was, but expert hands pulled her hanging body back into position as someone held her bum and began pulling her cheeks apart! She gasped in surprise as she realised they were inserting a large butt plug into her! She tensed, but couldn’t stop them forcing it all the way into her small tight ass.

Her muscles contracted…and the plug was sucked into her body.

She let out a tiny cry of shock and slight pain as it filled her slender bum with its girth…”Ahhhhhhh!” she cried again.

“Did that hurt Lisa?” asked Tom “Yes” she replied.

“Shall I ask him to take it out then?”

“No no! Please don’t …not yet, leave it in me please!” she quickly said

“I think you like it to hurt don’t you?”

“Yes” she blushed “Yes I do”

“You like a little pain don’t you child?”

“YES!” she admitted “Yes I think I do”

“It turns you on doesn’t it…. being hurt?”

“Mmmmh!”

“Will you beg us to hurt you Lisa?” one of them added.

“Wwwhat?”

“Beg us to hurt you Lisa!”

“Yyyeess!” she nervously replied.

“Beg then you beautiful little girl”

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

My god, so hot

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Loving how this going as Lisa slowly succumbs to her bodies needs

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Wow, loving how submissive Lisa is, cant wait to see how this plays out.

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 7

They waited in silence for her to comply…she was shaking all over now, but slowly she gave in to her unknown desires, her lips parted and she spoke softly, the words they wanted to hear.

“I beg you please will you make it hurt for me?”

“Where would you like to be hurt most on your perfect little body Lisa?” asked Tom.

“My bum” she stammered, “Hurt my bum please!” she said deeply ashamed of herself now

“Would you like to experience something more intense Lisa?” enquired Tom. “Something more painful but still within your own boundaries?”

“Ahh huh! “She trembled a reply “mmm please”

“You see, we were right all along about you, you just needed the right masters to bring it out of you love” said Tom with satisfaction.

Tom then moved towards her with a roll of silver tape in his hands, she watched in shock as he tore off a strip then quickly applied it across her mouth as she was about to protest.

He patted the tape firmly across her mouth and cheeks, a smile on his face.

Lisa tried to speak through the tape but it was impossible.

At that moment the men stopped touching her and moved to a cabinet against the wall, Lisa watched them and noticed how wet she was between her legs, no she was soaking as she could feel her juices running down the inside of her legs making her shiver with sensation.

They opened the cabinet and each brought out a leather paddle about 2 feet long with a handle tapering outwards to the flat soft end.

As they moved back towards her she stared opened mouthed at what she saw!

They surrounded her once more then started to slap the paddles on her bare firm bottom softly at first building slowly with intensity until they became quite hard slaps, making her cry out each time.

“Mmmmuph!” she moaned through her taped mouth with each slap becoming harder and harder, but they could see the moans were of pleasure not of pain.

The men seemed to be enjoying spanking her as much as she shamefully seemed to be! She had never been spanked in her life and never thought it was something she would ever want to try, but here she was tied to the ceiling virtually naked, her ass filled with a plug and 8 strange men taking turns to spank her hard….. she was in heaven.

They continued spanking a Lisa now losing herself in her new found submissiveness, they spanked her relentlessly harder and harder, the sound was loud and echoed in the large basement space, her bum felt hot and burning with pleasure, she wanted it to hurt more! Wanted it to never stop, no needed it not to!

They sensed this in her cries of pleasure and slapped her as hard as they each could muster. The slaps were so hard they were moving her back and forth from her bound position and she was swinging slightly like a bizarre pendulum.

Tom noticed this and gestured to one of the other men to hold her ankles still below her which he promptly did.

Now with her body held vertically Tom and the others carried on punishing her tight little bum.

Each slap seemed to drive the plug in slightly deeper each time and this brought new sensations within her.

Her wrists were also burning from the ropes which due to the movement had tightened adding to her ecstasy of pain.

Tom then moved towards her face and swiftly removed the tape over her mouth.

“Would you like us to stop Lisa?” enquired Tom.

“NO No please don’t!” she responded, “just a little while longer”

“Would you like us to spank you a little harder as well my girl?” enquired Tom.

“Mmmm hmm!” she moaned, gasping for air.

“I shall take that as a Yes then you horny little slut!” he replied.

“A little harder? Or a lot harder Lisa?”

“A lot harder please!” she whimpered.

Tom re applied the tape over her pretty mouth.

‘Just to subdue your protests baby’ He said.

So they started again all 8 of them like a well oiled machine, they spanked her pretty little bum over and over, with as much force as they could inflict this time and still it seemed she was enjoying every painful slap.

After another half an hour had passed, their arms were aching so Tom announced it was time for something different for their new found prize, and so without speaking he and another reached up and untied her hands from the ropes and removed the bindings around her slim ankles. They removed the tape across her mouth and again she gasped for air.

They all looked at Lisa and smiled, she was flushed and visibly shaking all over her delightful body, her eyes were closed, her nostrils flared, her breathing was deep and heavy and her pussy glistened with wetness, her pretty little bum was bright red and looked obviously sore but her captors could see this was what she had wanted and they realised she was already well on her way to another plane of sensuality.

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Brilliant, love how Tom knew she was a submissive.

Lisa seems to have found her new Masters.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Lisa def learning that she def a pain slut xx

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

I wonder what’s next for her. Can’t wait to find out.

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By *valexis147TV/TS  over a year ago

Tunbridge Wells

Wonderful as ever Hanna, cannot wait for more!! Xx

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By *lim_jim1964Man  over a year ago

peterborough

As always a great well written posts ??????

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By *J GeminiTV/TS  over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 8

They carried her to the middle of the room, one man holding each of her thin arms and legs, lifted her up to waist height and pulled her limbs far apart like a human X.

Tom then came around to where her head was and spoke softly close to her ear.

“Lisa darling we need to tell you that now we are all going to fuck you, but we cannot use condoms as it’s against the rules of our order”

“Do you have a problem with that?” he added.

“Well I don’t want to get pregnant nor catch anything” she croaked.

“Are you not taking birth control pills?” He asked her.

“No I am not at the moment” She replied.

“Ahh that’s fine then my child for we are all experienced masters and shall be careful not to impregnate you, and you certainly will not catch anything from us as we are a decent celibate order until we find treasure such as yourself!”

She nodded sheepishly that it was ok by her as long as they didn’t cum inside her they then she would allow them to fuck her as they wanted.

“Excellent!” he exclaimed.

He then pushed her head backwards so it was hanging down towards the floor.

She watched with interest as the remaining 4 men moved to each end of her body, 2 at her head and the other 2 at her feet.

They shuffled in on her and she noticed they were all erect sporting massive hard dripping wet cocks!

The men holding her pulled her arms and legs tighter apart, her body taught and open.

Tom nodded to the others who with large purposeful hands positioned their cocks one at her pussy and the other at her mouth, he waved his hand and they both entered her body at once!

The guy at her pussy drove the breath out of her as he forced his engorged cock all the way into her small tight cunt, at her head she felt a hand grab her tightly by the hair and another cock was forced into her pretty mouth and like this they started fucking her!

Lisa could do little but take the cocks that were being forced into her mouth and pussy, the men were quite rough and fucked her with animal like grunts as they pumped into her outstretched body, all the time the others held her tightly and the 2 remaining men waited their turn with this pretty little girl Tom had discovered.

She wondered how she might feel after being fucked by so many men at once, and realised that this thought drove her wild with sexual abandon! She moaned softly through her cock filled mouth as after about 20 minutes the cock she was sucking suddenly pulsed against her tongue and she felt his hot thick cum pumping into her pretty mouth, he held her firmly by the hair to make sure she swallowed all of his cum but she was happy to do this as the sensation lifted her higher than she thought possible!

He pulled away from her head to be immediately replaced by the guy behind him who gripped Lisa’s head and with one movement slid his throbbing cock into her mouth and another face fucking began.

About this time the man fucking her pussy increased his pace as his own climax was fast approaching, he grabbed her slender hips and with one huge shove tilted his head back, cried out her name and erupted his cum into Lisa’s beautiful body! All thoughts and assurances of withdrawal forgotten now as lust had taken over him.

Lisa found she really didn’t care, in fact she was ashamed to admit to herself that she wanted him to cum inside her! Indeed wanted them all to do so...and hoped they would!

Tom looked at her expression and bent down to her ear once more and whispered gently “You wanted him to cum in you didn’t you Lisa?”

“You want us all to fill your tight little cunt with hot thick cum don’t you?”

“mmmm” she moaned through her full mouth and managed a slight nod of her head to confirm this!

“You are indeed a horny little subby slut aren’t you girl? Who wants the 8 of us to fill her pretty mouth, and body with as much cum as we can produce don’t you?”

“Mmmmhm!”

“You love cum don’t you? You realise now that you are a cum slut and can never have normal sex again don’t you?”

“Have no fear sweet girl for we shall fill you with more cum than you have ever seen, it will be our pleasure to do this for you!”

Lisa managed a shy nod once more and a cheer erupted from the group of men as they realised they had found a true slut in Lisa who would submit to their every need.

“She is up for anything gentlemen that much is obvious!” announced Tom.

“Feel free to fuck our prize and fill her with your seed and male lust as you see fit!”

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Lisa will become the ultimate slut through her journey of self discovery

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By *obbly2000Man  over a year ago

Doncaster

Absolutely fantastic read

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

Can it get any better?

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By *rDomme1Man  over a year ago

Colchester

Wow... great story and always.. Full of self desire Hanna ??

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By *J GeminiTV/TS  over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

I need more of those story. My head has blown off

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By *parklesueTV/TS  over a year ago

Middleton

What happened to the repair guy xx

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Oh wow, this story just keeps getting better and better.

Loved the creampie twist.

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

Part 9

Lisa’s heart pounded in her chest at this statement as she accepted now she was going to receive the fucking of her life from all of them, all thoughts of safety were now abandoned as her own newly emerged sexuality took her over!

She thought about her not being on the pill and that all the men would now be cumming inside her but her mind simply could not let go of the sluttish eroticism of that now happening and she found herself more turned on by that thought than she had ever known.

They held her like that between them and the 8 men alternated around their prey, while 4 held her tightly, the others queued up to fuck her wet mouth or her tight pussy, Her face after what seemed like hours was slick with cum, it ran from the corners of her mouth and dripped into her blonde hair, her cheeks were glistening with it and some was even on her neck and her gorgeous breasts looking like tiny pearls on her pale skin.

Her pussy was on fire with lust as she was relentlessly fucked and fucked by the group, each one filling her with yet more sperm or cumming over her flat tummy splashing down on her like hot licks of white rain.

Her blonde tufts of pubic hair were sticky with it also and it poured from her used cunt and dripped wetly on the stone floor.

Tom at that point snapped his fingers to the group and they carried her over towards a large oak table, rotating her body so she was now on her front flat on the table, her breasts pressed hard against the dark wood.

They let her legs drop to the floor and pulled her arms out to each corner.

Lisa was mesmerised by what they were now doing to her as she felt them skilfully binding her ankles apart to each of the tables back legs and at the same time tying tightly her thin wrists to the opposing corners of the table,

In this position she was bent forward over the table with her feet well apart but standing on the floor in her heels, her outstretched arms hurt a little from the tightness of the ropes, Tom sensed this and told the men to tighten the ropes further!

They did this and as he expected Lisa let out a soft little girlie sigh of pleasure at this extra pain.

A few of them stepped up to take turns giving her beautiful pert but still red bum a good hard slap, to which she moaned quietly in gratitude.

After quickly removing her butt plug which Tom noticed was dripping wet with her juices and their sperm he spoke to her closely.

“It’s time for you to be fucked properly now Lisa darling”

“May we assume you like cock in your tight ass?” he enquired.

Lisa realised she had given herself totally to these men and softly moaned,

”Mmmhmm!”

“And may we assume you are happy for us to fill your beautiful little bum with cum as well?” Tom asked.

“Ahhhh ha!” she replied.

“Good girl! You know you will enjoy it like this as will we!”

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

Oh I wanted so much more! I can picture Lisa over the table I want to be there now. I also want to be her too waiting for my arse to be filling to the brim by these skilled masters.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Shes now a wonderful sexy little 3 hole slut oh if only this was my wife used and now strapped to the table

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By *anexjxWoman  over a year ago

castleford

Wow great stuff

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

And it gets better again. Anal creampies and more bondage.

Brilliant chapter Hanna.

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

PART 10

He then stepped close to her upturned bum and she felt pressure at its entrance as he slid his engorged cock all the way in until she could feel his balls against her soft thighs and he began to ass fuck her with vigour.

Lisa grunted animal like little grunts as Tom pounded into her abused little bum holding her by the hips even though she was unable to move he felt she would like being held by hands as well as ropes for this the ultimate fuck.

The others stood in line to await their turn at Lisa’s pretty bum, a few of them made her suck their wet sticky cocks to bide the time, a couple came in her mouth again during this and she greedily swallowed all they could give her.

Tom’ climax was immanent and he sped up and pounded into her, his hips a blur he grabbed her by the hair forcefully pulling her head back and raced towards his goal of filling her bum with his cum, letting out a cry of joy he pumped as deep into her bum as he could go and held it there while his cock sprayed the inside of her back passage with hot slick cum.

No sooner had he pulled out of her with a wet sucking sound than another guy fit to burst took his place and filled her bum with his throbbing cock!

“You have to admit Lisa it’s so much better being fucked this way isn’t it darling?”

“AAhhhhh!” she moaned as she was pounded into from behind.

“We knew you would be perfect Lisa!” said Tom.

They continued this for what seemed like hours with her, each taking his turn fucking her bum and filling her with cum, some waited and some made her suck their cocks back to life pulling her violently by her hair each time which she seemed to love them doing, they then took a place in the queue for Lisa’s ass and fucked her there with pace once more.

As they used her little ass she could feel their earlier cum loads dripping out of her pussy.

She wondered how the men could keep going like this and cum repeatedly, they seemed to never run out of energy.

Lisa herself was tripping out to another place during all this, a place only a select few girls had ever been. The place Tom had said she would visit that night and a place she knew she would always belong to, right then, there in that cold basement with her captors she didn’t want to ever come back to reality as she had tasted the fruit of submission and domination and welcomed it.

She would involuntarily pull and tug at the bindings on her hands making delicate little female grunts each time, and flex her fingers as if she wanted to make sure she was still tightly bound…happily for her she was.

The hours rolled by with the group fucking her small ass with ever greater urgency, again and again she received cock after cock inside her smooth white bum, and each time she felt more of their hot cum pumped deeply into her used little body.

Eventually the men untied her and picked her up between them carrying her to the far end of the basement to an old mattress on the floor.

Tom lay down on his back cock in hand as they lowered Lisa face down onto him lining up her cunt with his cock and keeping a firm grip on her hands and legs as they brought her down to the mattress and Tom.

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Brilliant, and now looks like she's about to experience her first Dp.

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Thanks Hanna.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Soon to be airtight 3 hole slut mmmmmm

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By *J GeminiTV/TS  over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *ogue78Man  over a year ago

edinburgh

Wow!! Fantastic story!!

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By *aimeSmithTV/TS  over a year ago

Cliss

Hannah,

Another superb story, thank you for your sharing your creativity and kink xx

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

Amazing story. I don’t want it to end. Wouldn’t it be great to have Lisa tell her side too

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By *eet or funMan  over a year ago

peterborough

Fab story as always very well written

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

PART 11

He entered her pussy again and held her there as the others moved around her, one at her mouth and another at her bum as they pushed their still hard cocks towards their targets.

Lisa was now impaled on Tom and had another cock in her mouth and one more up her used red bum whilst held tightly by the remaining group members.

And like this she was now furiously fucked in every orifice at once!

This new twist drove Lisa over the edge of ecstasy and beyond as she kept up a steady series of female grunts, gasps and moans that the men smiled at in harmony as they realised they had successfully broken her and her barriers and indeed seen a new girl emerging.

As a last gesture 2 of them stood powerfully in front of her face, cocks hard and menacing, she opened her eyes then her mouth as she understood what they wanted.

They stroked themselves quickly and urgently, the tips of their cocks touching her now outstretched tongue.

She closed her eyes again as she waited for the impending climax.

It arrived swiftly in the form of a torrent of hot cum blasted forcefully over her pretty face and onto her tongue.

They carefully aimed the hot licks of cum so as to cover her mouth and tongue as liberally as possible.

She sighed in sheer pleasure as she felt the warm wet sperm rain down on her, as they stood back exhausted, she looked up at them and swallowed obediently, savouring their male taste and smell.

After more hours of unrelenting sex with their new slave they all stood up and looked down on her, she was exhausted, breathless and had collapsed soaking wet and covered with sperm.

Her blonde hair was matted against her pretty face, slick with dried cum like the rest of her.

They pondered for a moment looking knowingly at each other, there was some quite whispering between the men which Lisa could not hear, they all looked at each other with relish in their eyes as a decision was made within the order that could not be ignored.

Lisa was picked up by the group who took her to a far wall where there were metal shackles sunk into the brick work directly above her head and close together, they pulled her lifeless arms up above her head to meet the cuffs that hung there clamping them firmly shut around her wrists.

Her feet were pulled apart towards 2 metal rings anchored to the floor, so she was restrained tightly spread eagled to the cold rough wall.

If she stood on tip toes she could just about touch the floor with the toes of her shoes to relieve the strain on her arms stretched way above her head.

She looked down on her masters as a female plaything, a possession for them to exploit and the revelation that dawned on her was that she felt owned by them and was powerless to resist anything that they wanted to do with her next.

She also admitted to herself that this felt adorable! No, more than that she welcomed it with her heart and mind…embraced her new found pleasure.

She closed her sparkling blue eyes and shuddered.

“What are you going to do with me now?” Lisa asked them.

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Just amazing

I need my wife broken in like that hehe

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

Incredible.

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By *obbly2000Man  over a year ago

Doncaster

Getting better every day

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By *ndrea54TV/TS  over a year ago

cambridge

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By *J GeminiTV/TS  over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *p22333Man  over a year ago

Witney

And loving it

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Brilliant chapter Lisa was used totally and filled with cum

Wonder what's going to happen next

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By *anna Violane OP   TV/TS  over a year ago

South East

PART 12...last part! But there is more coming on this story soon!

“We have decided you are to stay here Lisa as the group’s personal property for as long as we see fit, you are just too beautiful to let go and we want to enjoy your body for as long as we need!”

“What?” uttered Lisa in total surprise “You can’t be serious?”

“I have a life!” she tried to insist.

“We know you do and like Tom said at the beginning we would, and have changed that life forever!”

“You belong to us now love” said Tom.

“Don’t pretend the thought hasn’t occurred to you, nor that right now it does not appeal to you?”

“Well am I right?” he waited for her reply.

Lisa lowered her head in shame and defeat as she knew he was right, as they all did, that it did indeed appeal to her to be their prisoner in this place, a sex slave for the group to use whenever they wanted and to receive punishment as needed.

“Our group is growing all the time Lisa and we have 6 new members due for initiation this week and they are all well built older men like us, so you will have plenty more men to use you!”

“You should feel flattered and proud darling that we feel your worth keeping as you are the first to make it this far”

“I do and I am” she timidly replied

“So now tell us, are you pleased we want to keep you?”

“Yyyeeess!” she stammered “I am”

“And are you longing for our next playtime with you?”

“Mmmmm yes!” she admitted.

“And we can do anything we choose to you can,t we Lisa? You will submit to our demands without question?”

“I will” she replied “I promise”

“Good girl, and does it matter how many men we bring into our little hive of debauchery with you?”

“No as many as you say, I’ll be good I swear”

“Wonderful!” Tom exclaimed.

“Well you will not have to wait here long before that happens Lisa darling”

“Once the 6 new members are introduced to you, they will join with the 8 of us and you will then know domination and submission like it has been with you all your young life”

“And we have more men applying to join our order all the time!”

“Just think of it Lisa the whole basement filled with big built rampant older males eager to use your wonderful body, to tie you, and spank you as hard as you need, to abuse you and hurt you however they think, and to fuck you in every hole and bathe you in their lust filled juices!”

“You will experience new heights of pain mixed with pleasure so the 2 emotions blur into one and it will be impossible for you to determine the difference between them!”

Lisa just listened to them now in her shackles, her stockings laddered and cum stained, her pretty lace suspenders damp and dirty, and her once shiny black heels now scuffed and worn, she hung there, exhausted, dripping with cum and sweat, let out a soft little sigh and let this overwhelming thought pour through her mind!!

To be continued!.....

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By *ugardadcleanerMan  over a year ago

cirencester

Depends if guys have a sadistic streak or 1 or more are extreme sadists. I know Hollie can tell difference as in her time been loaned to all. Keep it up Hannah

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By *untingtonMan  over a year ago

Chorley

Fantastic conclusion the first story.

Didn't see the group keeping her.

Brilliant story, thanks Hanna

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By *abrina59TV/TS  over a year ago

moved to cuckold land

Mmmmm Lisa the perfect group where now

Her new life complete knowing that there will be more and more men joining the club to use all her perfect little holes over and over.

She now needy for as much cock, cum and pain she can get

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By *anexjxWoman  over a year ago

castleford

Very well done. Excellent

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By *untooMan  over a year ago

manchester

For some reason I expected Lisa to be fucked whilst in shackles but my goodness what a change in her.

To me, this is the most powerful story I’ve read in the forum. This is the first that I call a keeper.

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By *J GeminiTV/TS  over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *aimeSmithTV/TS  over a year ago

Cliss

To be tied helpless and used by eight men, kept as a slave - what a dream!

Thank you Hannah, you're such a talented writer, and a beautiful looking gurl xxx

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By *iM4kinkMan  over a year ago

San Antonio


"This is a fictional story I wrote about 3 years ago.

Her name was Lisa, she was 22, 5’3” tall with collar length blonde hair. She was very young and girlie looking but this suited her delicate frame.

She weighed about 7 stone and was, some might say ‘waify’? But she was happy with her shape, even though past boyfriends had sometimes joked that she needed a good meal inside her and that her breasts were too small, Lisa was herself content with how she looked.

On this particular night she was driving home after attending an interview for a job she didn’t really want as it was too far away from her home town and not really challenging enough for her but the upshot was the money and perks were fantastic so she went anyway.

It went ok and she drove the long distance home feeling fairly confident that she had duly impressed her prospective employers with her lively chat and work experience.

She had even dressed to impress in her new black shortish skirt with a matching fitted jacket, under which she had on a beautiful silky white blouse.

Her decision to wear lacy white underwear with natural coloured stockings and suspenders was admittedly flirty but she knew the skirt was short enough to ride up slightly as she sat down so figured that could only go in her favour as the interviewees were both male.

She remembered the look on their faces as she crossed her legs as she sat down, her stockings making that delightful sound as they brushed together!

She finished this look with black high heeled patent leather court shoes which enhanced her slender legs and body perfectly.

Her make up was applied with her usual expertise if a touch heavier than her day to day look, and she had complimented her jewel like blue eyes with dark pink lipstick over her small but endearing mouth.

She drove on through the dark country roads towards her home town.

Another 20 miles and she would be home with her feet up and a stiff drink by her side, she listened to the radio as she sped on.

Suddenly as she was coasting along a nice long straight stretch of road her car started slowing and juddering, she could feel something wasn’t quite right with it, the ignition lights came on brightly and she had to quickly pull over to the side of the road.

She tried in vain to re-start the engine but the problem seemed terminal.

She looked around outside the car and through the moonlight realised she was in the middle of nowhere, she made to get her mobile from her hand bag but upon checking the screen she found there was no signal in this remote location.

Lisa slid her toned legs out of the door and stepped from the car. She shivered in the cold, she hadn’t brought a coat with her as she felt it spoiled the tailored look of her suit and at that time did not think she would need one.

The road was deserted, not a call box in any direction and no other cars came along even after waiting for 15 minutes or so.

She started to feel mildly worried now as she really didn’t know what to do.

After 10 more minutes Lisa decided she had no choice but to walk in the direction she was driving to see if there was a house or pub where she could use a phone, she walked purposely along the makeshift pavement, her high heels which were far from suitable walking shoes clicked loudly in the still night air as she went.

Rounding a slight curve in the road she came upon what appeared to be a pathway to her left with a house name on an old sign next to it.

‘At last some civilisation’ she thought ‘hopefully they will let me use their phone’

"

Well writen i like it.

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By *iM4kinkMan  over a year ago

San Antonio


"Part 5

2 men approached her and without warning ripped open the front of her silk blouse, as they did so the buttons flew away in all directions.

Lisa gasped in sheer shock and surprise.

‘Stop’ she cried. ‘Please don’t’

The other man then felt around behind her back to the zip of her skirt and began to lower it, the lining of her skirt sliding slowly down her sheer stockings until it fell silently to the floor, then her blouse was parted and gasps of pleasure were heard from the group as they saw her delicate lacy white bra and the small pert breasts concealed beneath.

Hands caressed her slender firm waist, enjoying her porcelain smooth, white skin.

Lisa struggled against her bonds but it was futile and the 2 men held her firmly and they continued to undress her.

Her skirt was collected by one of them and placed on a chair in the far corner where she noticed her jacket also lay.

Then to her shock one of them came forward with scissors and methodically cut her blouse away from her arms and shoulders!

“Please don’t!!” she cried, but he ignored her and continued, his expert hands worked quickly brushing her soft pale skin with the cold steel of the scissors making her flinch uncontrollably.

Next he moved his attentions to her lace bra cutting easily through the thin straps until it floated along with the blouse to the cold stone floor.

The men all stared and let out a simultaneous sigh as they saw her naked breasts revealed at last, her nipples pert and erect in the cold basement air.

Lisa struggled against her restraints but she knew it was hopeless.

She now felt more frightened and exposed than she had ever been in her young life yet found herself feeling strangely excited as well, ashamed even that they were having this effect on her, it was as if she were outside herself and viewing from afar as she couldn’t ignore the feeling that she was under some sort of spell cast by her captors.

How had she got herself in a few hours into this situation?

And why was she now feeling mildly excited? No…. more than that, she began to fee turned on at being amongst so many men whom it was obvious to her by now were going to dominate her sexually in some way.

The man with the scissors then moved his hands, placed his fingers in the thin elastic at the sides of her white lace knickers, before she had time to react he had swiftly cut both sides of the thin material and they to fluttered to the floor!

He picked up the ruined garments and tossed them towards the corner.

Lisa now found herself wearing just her white lace suspenders, sheer stockings and her high heeled shoes, hands still tied above her with feet barely touching the floor in front of 8 big, leering naked men intent on who knows what with her!

“You are truly beautiful my girl, you will make an excellent challenge!” one of them said.

"

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By *iM4kinkMan  over a year ago

San Antonio

Fucking fantastic story i luved it.

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