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"Have to say, if this is the way the op is taking the story then I am done with it. There are plenty of cuck stories on here better than this. This story has plenty in it to entertain without taking the easy option. Maybe I'm wrong but just my thoughts." I agree with this I don’t enjoy it as a chuck story, I wanted something more, something different | |||
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"Let's give the author the benefit of the diubt. Everything he has written so far is magnificent, he won't disappoint!!! Great work!!!" This 100% let the author tell the story his way, he has done a excellent job so, far and even though the characters annoy me at times that's the sign of a great story teller. Let him turn them all into cucks if he wants, its his story and for him to decide how it goes..... Looking forward to reading more (though I still want to slap some sence into Steve) | |||
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"Let's give the author the benefit of the diubt. Everything he has written so far is magnificent, he won't disappoint!!! Great work!!! This 100% let the author tell the story his way, he has done a excellent job so, far and even though the characters annoy me at times that's the sign of a great story teller. Let him turn them all into cucks if he wants, its his story and for him to decide how it goes..... Looking forward to reading more (though I still want to slap some sence into Steve) " Totally agree this 100% 100% author lead and we should not try and influence his stories. But published on a forum, it’s made for people to comment ! A great story should create and pull at people s emotions otherwise we wouldn’t read it Personally have never got more into a story on here and had got so caught with the characters and even bothered to post a few times I love reading other people’s takes on it too, adds that extra bit of insights to other people’s views I’m sure the author would prefer some feedback on here than get nothing or just an emoji, the greatest comments must be that you are moving people, playing with their emotions and drawn them into the characters he’s created for them | |||
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"Let's give the author the benefit of the diubt. Everything he has written so far is magnificent, he won't disappoint!!! Great work!!! This 100% let the author tell the story his way, he has done a excellent job so, far and even though the characters annoy me at times that's the sign of a great story teller. Let him turn them all into cucks if he wants, its his story and for him to decide how it goes..... Looking forward to reading more (though I still want to slap some sence into Steve) Totally agree this 100% 100% author lead and we should not try and influence his stories. But published on a forum, it’s made for people to comment ! A great story should create and pull at people s emotions otherwise we wouldn’t read it Personally have never got more into a story on here and had got so caught with the characters and even bothered to post a few times I love reading other people’s takes on it too, adds that extra bit of insights to other people’s views I’m sure the author would prefer some feedback on here than get nothing or just an emoji, the greatest comments must be that you are moving people, playing with their emotions and drawn them into the characters he’s created for them " Also agree with you, I have enjoyed your posts as well as the story it's good to see other people's opinions on how this will turn out. My post was more meant for the people that said they would stop reading the story if he turned Steve into a cuck, just goes to show how invested we all are in this story Well done op | |||
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"Let's see what happens when Alex punishes Alice for her disobedience. What will both of their perspctives be then? And what about Hannah/Victoria? Cant believe that we've heard the last of her Well Steve needs to be truthful with Sophie about hannah Victoria from the beginning that Alex sent her out to seduc him and what happened and how Victoria she was left wanting by Alex and how Steve is now filling that role and he cannot see it lasting as he to soft with her that she needs a alex/Steve mix together man Steve should have also told her how can he trust her to tell him thing with her resent track record and he finds out thing from others? Were they are getting it from An evening out with both of them?" | |||
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"Just thinking xx is op's real name E L JAMES xx (50 shades) lol xx " No. OP's writing is way better than hers lol. | |||
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"Just thinking xx is op's real name E L JAMES xx (50 shades) lol xx No. OP's writing is way better than hers lol. " Well xx thats us told xx lol xx | |||
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"A really good update but like I said earlier Thinking with his dick and a missed opportunity to set true boundaries while you had her complete attention after hitting the marriage bomb She has still not given up the puppet master and there s still punishment to come with yet again not boundaries Steve’s totally mixed up with his emotions and feelings and love for his wife but still going along for a ride with him firmly sat in the back street I don’t think that when he sits Sophie down on the bed and looks at her pussy and abdomen he thinks of a family and baby Wake up Steve having a baby or family will not sort Alex out, he doesn’t care it’s Alice with no vices no control and no family Having a leg over with Sophie keeps him inline, couple of words and a shag some marriage make up, she’s still seeing Alex and playing his games, not given that up or any tasks fucks auction s pimped etc still on Alex terms In the lines it says over Sophie and Steve says “it’s her lifestyle “ not there’s so while Alex and Alice about he’s cast aside that’s not going to work Sophie now knows she can get away with murder, but it’s ok no boundaries but it’s her lifestyle and Alex games although he’s so far nearly broke them apart Five minutes ago he thought her as being cheap at the bar, being humiliated infront of the locals flashing her pussy and even to the point she was so set on that than taking No notice off Steve until he-had, enough and was going home and leaving her there to play with the locals, no thoughts of babies then mate. Cheap Steve, yes she was, mmm auction the other day Your emotions are still in your pants and delusional until Alex and his games are no more In a couple of weeks she has lied been disrespectful and shown no respect for there marriage lives and relationship. One flip of the phone one truth and a leg over sorted How do we know If Alex hasn’t set this up like this !!! A way to bring wife loving Steve back in line and trust her so he can carry on digging those rabbit holes But it’s ok Steve knows I’m on the street corner for money, it’s sexy erotic and you carnt judge people by the way they look!!!! Sound familiar!!! It’s ok Steve you can follow her around like a lap dog for cast offs , if it gets out of hand Steve can take on the world and deal with any consequences It’s ok officers, don’t need to right a statement, it’s all on her blog, just print it off Wake up !!!! If Sophie needs ownership, then “Steve” should own her inline with his marriage and Steve sets the boundaries to keep her safe and there’s still some respect in the marriage no lies" No need for Alex or any other puppet master. That’s if you want to save your marriage There’s no get out of jail free card in this story Sophie has to make some real sacrifices to pull the rust Back and as of yet nothing honestly!! vic, she’s been absent in this and how will she fit into the life style “been there before” oh no don’t want this Or is vics Steve s lifestyle to play and own too !!! You can see how this turns out, hi babe, good day at work, yes thanks, the babies doing well today, kiss on babies head, don’t stay up sweet when you put our baby to bed, I’m going to the club with vic, she needs some extra cock including mine, it’s going to be a wild one, have a nice evening I’ve brought you tea in and a bottle of wine after breast feeding!!! Mm will Alex want his milk from her too, or will that be sold too the highest bidder Still lots to say and be told in this story and lots of direction s too Still Alex has no consequences to his actions, totally winds me up !! More more more !!!! " Steve wants a baby with Sophie!! Then what about possibilities of Alex's taking Alice to stop taking the pill Sophie has the baby inside her Steve wants but who'd?? | |||
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