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Taking My Breath

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By *latinumkitten OP   Woman  over a year ago

from Home Counties to Middle Earth

I yearn for you to take my breath away.

That short gasp before involuntarily expelling all the air inside me.

That moment when the lump in my throat creates a gulp.

When my mouth becomes dry.

When my legs become weak.

When my spine becomes so sensitive to touch, the vertibre almost feel like a domino chain waiting to tumble.

When you whisper in my ear, and before I can take in the words, I'm overcome with the feeling of your breath touching my skin. A signal to my whole body, for my skin now prickles to your every touch, which is tested as you so very gently run a finger slowly down my arm.

I catch sight of the lust in your eyes, burning away at you. I watch you fight it - you will not be overcome by the desire within you, not yet at least.

My own eyes, although seeing in absolute clarity, my peripheral vision heightened in the poor light, are struggling to stay from rolling back in my head.

I blink to try and steady them and refocus, before darkness befalls as you slide on a blindfold and another breathless moment overwhelms me.

My lips become dry. I try to moisten them with my own tongue but before I do, your mouth is upon mine, slow yet forceful. Your lips letting me know who's in control.

Overtaken with passion, I forge forward and kiss you, only to feel your hand on the back of my head, now gasping my hair and pulling me away from claiming that moment.

My head now tilted and locked backward, causing yet another exclamation of air from my electrified body.

My neck now exposed, you kiss it delicately and bite it lustfully, then hold me there.

Now nothing but shallow quivering pants can be heard coming from my mouth as I wait in anticipation of your next move.

You keep me waiting.

Waiting.

Delighting in my suspended animation.

My heightened awareness almost unbareable.

I want something to happen. Anything. I'm waiting, needing to hear, feel, sense something.

I feel you release me from your grasp, "Stay there!". Your footsteps fall away and I try desperately to count your steps and determine your motive for moving away and leaving me standing here. Undeterminable sounds... What are you doing??

I stay rooted to the spot. It doesn't even occur to me to move.

I hear your return and feel some sense of relief within me, then without warning and with one hand, you push me back against the wall, pinning me there by my waist, before holding my neck and I once again feel all the breath leave my body in one almighty rush. Then I find out exactly why you'd stepped away. "OHHHH..."

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By *ugbylad1973Man  over a year ago

Selby

Reading this starts the mind journey... where will it go..

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By *hilloutMan  over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

This is a brilliant first entry. You'll quickly rack up a group of fans with this writing...me among them.

Eagerly waiting for second installment.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Wow, you ought to write for a living ! That’s got me all exited . I was reading it as if I was the other person ! Got my heart beating !!

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By *rimsbyguygrimsbyMan  over a year ago

Grimsby

Cant wait for the next part

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By *iamondCougarWoman  over a year ago

Norfuck! / Lincolnshire

I’m wondering if THIS moment went with THAT track! It’s a very very good teaser!

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By *terobs6869Man  over a year ago

Llandudno

Nice

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By *nyx99Man  over a year ago

London

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By *uck role-playMan  over a year ago

Bolton

Mmmmmm

X

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Took my breath the first time I read this Taken again now..

Peach x

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By *irth.Minge.FireMan  over a year ago

Seen in far off places

Nice one PK x

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By *blecoolerMan  over a year ago

Goole

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Beautiful and sensory... Am poised with anticipation

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By *aughtyLondonGuyMan  over a year ago

london

Definitely the anticipation of what’s to come, experiencing pleasure of the level that’s never been felt before

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By *latinumkitten OP   Woman  over a year ago

from Home Counties to Middle Earth

Thanks for all the lovely feedback, both on here and in PMs.

This was a spur of the moment outpouring and I hadn't intended for there to be a continuation.

Your kind words have given me the confidence and impetus to think about writing again though, so thank you, and watch this space!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Wow...what a read. That's a fantastic effort, you are a natural. Def got me horny ????

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By *naswingdressWoman  over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

I love the way you write.

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By *b29mMan  over a year ago

York

What a fabulously gifted writer - I’m hooked and my heartbeat has suddenly raised!

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By *tarbuck777TV/TS  over a year ago

Grimsby

Your words do more too my body than you may ever know xx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

This writing is so sexy and hot, so good, I think you should write a book xxx

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By *hat Guy with the RopesMan  over a year ago

Kingston upon Hull

It might be asthma. Do you need some ventilin?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Wish I could do that to a woman with one kiss! It's probably Daniel Craig or Chris Hemsworth.

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By *latinumkitten OP   Woman  over a year ago

from Home Counties to Middle Earth


"Wish I could do that to a woman with one kiss! It's probably Daniel Craig or Chris Hemsworth. "

It's all in the build-up

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By *iamondCougarWoman  over a year ago

Norfuck! / Lincolnshire


"Wish I could do that to a woman with one kiss! It's probably Daniel Craig or Chris Hemsworth.

It's all in the build-up "

And the ability of someone to create that build up.... many here wouldn’t know where to start!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Wish I could do that to a woman with one kiss! It's probably Daniel Craig or Chris Hemsworth.

It's all in the build-up "

A warm gentle massage, relaxing at first, then teasing and sensual, building a little tension as fingers and hands begin to find your sensitive areas. The blindfold means you completely focussed on the tingling of your skin as my palms slide along your calves, thighs and spine. We murmur seductively throughout, exploring ideas and fantasies, and I tease you with promises of what's to come.

And then I lean across across your body and our lips touch...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Hoping there will be more to this story, when the OP is moved to write. xxx

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