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By *ailyt OP Woman
over a year ago
Moray |
This is only my second short story so honest feedback would be much appreciated. Hope you enjoy 
It was getting late one wet and chilly night, we’d just been out for lovely meal and a few drinks. I was starting to feel a little tipsy and couldn’t keep my eyes off him, those bright green eyes sparkling when the light hit, those big broad shoulders, he knew he was teasing me wearing that T-shirt, he knew it hugged his body showing off his muscles. Whenever he got up to go to the bar he must have noticed I was checking out his bum which was just so peachy with perfectly thick thighs to match. God I want him now!
I kept giving him a cheeky smile across the table, my foot touching his. We decided we just couldn’t wait no more so I nipped to the loo before going home. I come back from the bathroom and slip something into his pocket, and walk outside. We get to the end of the car park before he realises what it was. We walk through the alleyways to get home, he pushes me up against the wall and kisses me deeply grabbing hold of my bum. I can feel his cock getting hard against my leg.
We continue home, get through the door and before I get chance to lock it he has me pushed hard up against it, he pushes my hair out the way and starts to kiss down my neck taking off my jacket. He reaches round and grabs my pussy which is already wet and aching for him. I turn round and grab his head, kissing him passionately I strip off his T-shirt exposing his slightly hairy body, I start to kiss my way down until I’m on my knees infront looking up at him. His grin getting cheekier knowing what’s about to come, I undo his buttons on his perfectly fitted jeans his cock bulging to be let free. I pull them down along with his boxers and his cock flips out infront of me. I smile ear to ear take hold of it and start to lick from base to tip, I then take his beautiful hard cock into my mouth inch by inch swirling my tongue around as I suck. I move my hand to his pert bum cheeks and he rests his hand on my head holding my hair out of the way working me on his cock, slowly fucking my mouth! He pulls me back up kisses me and then takes my hand and lease me through the hallway up to the bedroom.
He takes off my top kisses my neck gently whilst stroking my left breast my nipples go instantly hard! He works his mouth down across my chest and down my breast until he reaches my nipple. He starts to suck it whilst twerking the other, my head falls back in pleasure sticking my chest out more, my pussy is really starting to ache now, I need to feel him inside me! He kisses down my stomach opens my trousers pulling them down exposing a clean shaven wet pussy. He slips a finger to part my lips, he gasps your soaking! He starts to circle my clit, it feels so damn good, he inserts a couple of fingers deep into my pussy and slowly starts to fuck me whilst rubbing my swollen clit, I’m getting close to cumming he can feel me getting tighter on him. He keeps going as I squeeze my breasts he gets faster I’m breathing so heavy right now as I let out a loud moan I’m just about there when he stops! Pushes me onto the bed takes off my trousers and pushes my legs back, he sticks his huge tongue in my push and starts to lick me out.
Holy mother of all fucks what a diamond, it feels amazing, he tells me just how good I taste, he licks my clit and fucks me with his fingers and I cum within about 60 seconds letting out a loud moan! He gets up and pulls me closer to the edge of the bed and rams his huge bulging cock deep inside my pussy! Fuck me it’s so tight but so good. He speeds up then slows right down, playing with my boobs and teasing fuck out of me. I then tell him to fuck me harder so he flips me over onto all fours, pushes me down into the bed and slips right in, he fucks me like a champ spanking me, squeezing my bum cheeks and tugging onto my hair. He’s starting to tire but I’m just getting started! I start to push back and dance on the end of his cock, getting deeper with every thrust, it’s turning him on so much he just can’t resist, he starts to fuck me again, with no mercy smashing me deep and hard, I’m close to cuming all over that cock baby, don’t stop, please don’t stop. I’m moaning so damn loud, fuck the neighbours. We’re both fucking so hard, cum for me baby and whilst saying that to him he starts to really moan as he cums deep inside my pussy. He stays in the position for a few minutes before slipping out so he can see him cum drip out of my red raw pussy.  |
Only kidding, that was a very enjoyable, well constructed story and you certainly need no help from anyone or need to worry about criticism. The mystery of who the protagonists are and their prior relationship with each other is something we can all work out for ourselves, there are so many possibilities and that's a very enjoyable element of the tale.
It's great to hear a woman describe such a passionate tryst, very erotic - more please.
Arnie xx
