This wasn’t meant to be. I should have stayed at home.
I’d just arrived at the club, and dressed down. Walked into the bar area. Same as any other night.
I looked up to the other side of the room. There. My blood ran cold. My heart raced, my senses heightened. It was him. I was shocked. Couldn’t look away.
The look on his face matched mine. We were never meant to meet. This was never meant to happen. Everything about this was wrong.
And yet... and yet. There was something about this, about him, about the fleeting possibility of an us. I was compelled, drawn in, like a moth to flame. Could I resist?
I knew all the reasons why this shouldn’t happen, had been over them a million times before. It’s not worth going over, it isn’t important. My mind was screaming for me to listen to reason.
But my body had other ideas, and I found myself approaching him, as if possessed. I saw the conflict on his face, too. He nodded, and pointed in the direction of a private room. We didn’t say a word.
I was helpless, such was the allure of the forbidden. |
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"The next episode starts with "Hi Dad" 
No, it's not that kind of forbidden! Or anything else that'd get me in trouble here. "
It's the fantasy section lol............i doubt anything would get anyone into trouble on here 
Looking forward to the next episode though  |
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"The next episode starts with "Hi Dad"
No, it's not that kind of forbidden! Or anything else that'd get me in trouble here.
It's the fantasy section lol............i doubt anything would get anyone into trouble on here
Looking forward to the next episode though "
It has had people in trouble. But it's not family. |
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Have to agree with Bonbons, well said. I love the gallery too by the way Swing, pity some of your pics are 'forbidden' (see what I di.... oh you did?... OK )... mad jealous of your Fab friends who get to see them but friendship must be earned.
I look forward to the rest of the tale with great anticipation.
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Good pacing and set up "
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He almost slammed the door behind him, startling me. His jaw was clenched and his eyes smouldered. My heart was still racing and I hoped that my trembling wasn’t quite visible.
Our bodies crashed together, nails digging into each other’s backs, as we devoured each other in a kiss. I could feel his heartbeat galloping as we tore into each other, quickly dispensing of our clothes. This was a very different kind of passion.
He walked me backwards into the bed, so he could get on top of me. He pinned my hands above my head, still not uttering a word. We caught each other eyes for a mere moment. His expression was ice cold.
I had been lured and snared by the forbidden. |
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I'm working on the next bit. For those asking... No I'm not going to say why this shouldn't be happening. Just it's not anything illegal and not a relative. Please don't send me gross messages about it. |
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The gaze was too intense, and he looked away. He grabbed my breast so hard that I gasped, and kneaded my nipple between his finger and thumb, before diving straight in with his teeth. The pain straddled the border of erotic and unpleasant. For a second I wondered if I’d made a horrible mistake. I was still utterly enthralled. I knew I couldn’t escape, even if I wanted to.
I found my hips rising towards him, involuntarily. Less about the pain he was inflicting on my nipples, more about the agonising tension in the air. He noticed me brush against his cock and looked at me again with a raised eyebrow. We remained silent. Keeping his hand pinning mine down, he moved up the bed and gave me a split second to contemplate his penis before forcefully face fucking me. I tried not to gag, struggled for air, but held firm, deep throating him as best I could. I was determined not to show weakness, at almost any cost.
There was perhaps a reason why this coupling had been forbidden. |
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"Interesting but perhaps feels a little rushed. Need to build the tension and build the anticipation. Pointing straight to the private room left me feeling a little - how did that happen. "
I do that in my other stories. I'm playing with a different style here. |
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The idea is very much that both are caught in a dangerous game they shouldn't be playing, they know they shouldn't be playing, but they can't resist. Obviously you're only getting one person's thoughts. |
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