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By *elltravelledman OP   Man  over a year ago

bradford

Complete fiction hope everyone enjoys

I just made the 4.30pm out if London, out of breath I started through the carriage and took a seat in the quietest one. I saw the petite brunette from behind as she first walked past.

Hair tied up smart jacket, tight pinstripe skirt, and a crisp white shirt. She was also wearing light grey patterned stockings and heels. She wandered past with an arm full of papers and was followed by a wonderful smell which captured my attention.

I looked back down at my book and smiled to myself as she disappeared into the next carriage. I was soon distracted again as I saw her coming back the other way and hoped she would sit in the seats on the opposite me. She stopped and looked down at me and said "Is anyone sitting here" to which I replied, "No there free". She sits directly opposite me and I could smell her. I looked up at her and smiled, her brown eyes framed by her black-framed glasses and she smiled back. She wore a gold necklace that comes down to just above her shirt which had 3 or 4 buttons undone. She is busy reading and looks up and notices me looking at her. She smiles and says "Busy day", "yes hectic" I reply.

The train pulls out and she puts all the papers down on the table and announces "Fuck it enough work for one day" and burst out laughing. She turns to see if the drinks trolley is coming and I see her breasts push out against her shirt. She is wearing a pale blue bra with no pattern and I can only see the lacey trim. I put my book away and stretch and then lean back in my seat and admire her. She spins back around with a grin on her face and says "here he comes with drinks."

She rummages around her handbag for a few moments and produces her purse. She turns to me taking a note out "Would you like a drink!" To which I reply "Sure." She tosses me the note and says "I'll have red wine, I'm going to the toilet." I take a deep breath as she passes and I smile to my self.

I order her wine and get myself a beer and put the change next to her purse on the table just as she arrives back. She leans over me to take the wine and says "I'm Jo what's your name" I reply "Errmm Gary, how do you do." Jo sits opposite me and pushes back in her chair I feel her kicking off her heels under the table as she says "Cheers". I feel her foot brush my knee and catch her smirking to herself when she knows it's her foot.

We make small talk for five minutes as the train pulls into the first station. A handful of people get off the train and no one gets on. Jo says "when you getting off" and sniggers and I laugh and say "Leeds" to which she replies "Ohh good, a good couple of hours then." I blush and reply "So it seems" and feel her foot against my knee again.

The train is still at the first stop and Jo is starting to fidget. She kneels on her seat looking over the headrest to see what's happening. I notice her figure under the tight pinstripe skirt and that it has ridden up and I can see the start of the top of her stocking 's on one leg. I look away and can see the carriage is almost empty and then look back at her incredible body. She swings around and plonks herself back in her seat as the train sets off again.

She is grinning at me as she takes her glass and finishes the wine. I notice that more of her cleavage is showing because a few buttons have come undone. She notices me staring at her chest and lets a hand fall to the opening in her white shirt and slips a finger inside it and runs it over her bra whilst looking at me. I feel myself get aroused and look away again.

I pick up some papers and pretend to read them when I notice she is out of her chair again and stood next to me. She slips me a note and walks off giggling, I open the note and it simply says "the first bathroom on the left five minutes" I turn and look down the aisle and see her walking toward the door. I look down at the note again my mouth dry and no idea what to do.

The five minutes pass and I still don't know what to do so I decide to go and speak to her. I cautiously get up and walk down the aisle and through the door into the vestibule. I reach the first bathroom on the left and see that it is engaged and go to knock on the door just as the guard appears. I cough and stop myself and lean casually against the window. She looks me up and down and carries on.

With the guard gone I knock on the bathroom door and hear her say "Who is it" to which I reply "it's me can we talk". I hear the door unlock and then nothing so I knock again and she says "Just come in". I push the door gently and go to say "look I'm sorry but I'm not sure what is going on. ...." and I catch sight of her.

She has removed her skirt and shirt and I stood leaning against the basin wearing her underwear. I feel myself immediately start to harden as I take in her perfect body. Pale blue/grey bra and panties with matching stockings that look incredible against her tanned legs. She takes my hand and pulls me inside locking the door behind me and starts to undo my shirt and trousers.

Her hands are all over me as she says "I've been waiting for the day that I can have you". She turns and places her hands on her panties and slips them down whilst bending over. She rubs herself up against my now throbbing cock whilst looking back at me and says "well!". I finish undoing my trousers letting them drop around my ankles and can feel her reaching back and taking my cock. I frantically pull my underwear down as she slips the tip of my cock into her waiting wet pussy.

My cock slips into her tight wet pussy from behind and I hear her groan. The train sways from side to side as I slowly grind her pussy and see that she has one hand on the top of the toilet. The other at the side of the mirror on the wall whilst she watches me fuck her in the mirror smiling in between loud groans as I go deeper inside her. She uses the hand on the toilet top to pull her bra down and let her breasts sway with the motion of the train.

The sight of her breasts and erect nipples makes even more aroused and I stand her up legs astride the toilet with me embracing her from behind. Her head falls back on my shoulder and I can feel her hot breath in my ear as I thrust into her from behind. She starts to moan and writhe more with each thrust and I can feel her tightening around my throbbing cock.

She starts to move like a wild animal riding the thrusts from my hips my cock deep inside her. She breathlessly pants and says "Fuck me harder I want to cum" and I start to fuck her harder and faster. She is starting to cum as I furiously fuck her pussy my arm around her waist forcing her down into me so I am as deep as I can go. She lets out a cry and I feel her legs start to shake as she climaxes but I keep fucking her hard wanting more from her.

Our sweaty bodies entwine as she lets out a scream and I know her orgasm is reaching its peak. She is panting now and with one final thrust from my hips, I feel her letting go and cum all over my rigid cock and down my balls. She continues to moan whilst trying to catch her breath and says "Hmmmmm".

She spins around and sits me on the toilet and slides down my body her breasts pressed up against my chest and feels that I am still hard. She grinds her cum soaked pussy up and down the length of my shaft whilst maintaining eye contact and I start to ache. She then takes to her knees between my open thighs, my cock stood to attention covered in her juices and she takes it and swallows its full length.

Whilst looking up at me and sucking the head of my cock she smiles and massages my balls gently gripping them. She then lets the tip of my cock leave her mouth covered in saliva and runs her tongue down the length of it maintaining eye contact with me as my cock slides up the side of her face.

Suddenly there is a sharp knock at the door and she looks at me and giggles. A voice from the other side of the door says "Are you ok in there" to which I reply "sure just a minute" pulling my trousers up. I hurriedly rearrange myself and open the door she is still semi-naked behind the door and has a hand over her mouth stifling laughter. The train guard looks me up and down and says "are you ok you've been in their a long time" I rub my stomach and say "yeah I'm fine just an upset stomach." The guard says "well we will soon be in Doncaster so please make sure you are out of the bathroom before we arrive."

I smile at the guard, close and lock the door. She is back in front of me undoing my trousers again and says "Oh you're good at this I should have done this week's ago." She sits me back on the toilet seat my trousers around my ankles. She turns and does a little lap dance her as in my face and I feel myself stiffening again. She bends over one hand on the sink basin and the other on her ankle thrusting her as at me. I stare at her beautiful puss as it grates before my eyes and I hear her say "well do I have to rub it your face or are you going to eat me."

I spread her cheeks apart and let my tongue slide the full length of her warm moist pussy up to her as and feel her let out a moan. I let the tip of my tongue circled her ass and tease it letting it slip gently in and out a little. She lets out a gasp and says "fuck yes that's good" and pushes back a little so more of my tongue is inside her ass. The train's motion of swaying means that my tongue us fucking her ass without having to do anything and she starts to groan more. She moves her hips so that her pussy can get some attention and I plunge my face into it and start eating her pussy.

She sits back up against my chest and uses my thighs to squat over me and lower herself down onto me. My cock is rigid and throbbing as I look down over her shoulder and watch her guide herself onto the waiting head of my cock. I feel myself enter her swollen pussy as she tightens around me and takes me. She starts to ride me taking my hand and gripping it hard. She is using her pussy to wank my hard cock and starts to pant as she rides it quicker and harder pounding me.

I feel myself starting to build towards my climax and she feels this and digs her nails into my thighs as she bucks on me. Alternating between sharp shallow strokes of my cock and long slow runs up and down the full length of it. Her pussy is starting to close tightly around me and I know she is going to cum again. She is panting hard now furiously using my cock to fuck herself with. I start to moan loudly as I feel my orgasm start to come on and my thighs stiffen. I have my hands on her hips above her suspender belt guiding her up and down me pushing her harder onto myself.

I feel myself letting go and let out a loud Arrrgggggh and I feel her rocket down on my cock as far as it will go and she starts to cum letting out a loud scream of joy. She is now grinding the full length of my cock with her pussy as she continues to cum, my cock deep inside her is shooting hot cum into her. She grips me with her pussy one last time wanting everything I have and slowly slides herself up and down the entire length of my cock. She lets the tip of my cock leave her just as I squirt my final bit of cum onto her pussy.

I lean back exhausted as she turns and puts a leg up on the side of the sink and I can see cum dribbling from her pussy and down the inside of her thigh. She scoops it up with her fingers and licks the cum from them whilst smiling at me. She says "hmm that tastes good, thankyou." She dresses just as the announcement comes over the tannoy "approaching Doncaster in 3 minutes......"

She leans into me and whispers "thanks for the great fuck we should this more often" and then says "let me leave and wait for five minutes before coming out". Then she unlocks and leaves the bathroom, I sit smiling to myself exhausted, hot and sticky. I leave the bathroom just as we leave Doncaster and head back to my seat.

I get to the carriage and see that she is no longer there and neither is any of her stuff. I look up and down the carriage and can't see her anywhere then see her strolling down the platform through the window. She sees me, waves and blows me a kiss as the train leaves the station.

I sit back in my seat left dumbfounded and notice a piece of folded paper on the table. The outside says thanks and has a smiley face, the inside reads.....

Thank you for that it's just what I needed we should definitely try to do it again sometime. I can't wait to tell my husband about it he has dared me to do it for a few weeks now.

Jo xx

And then her mobile number.

I smile to myself, fold the paper and slip it into my wallet.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Great story, any more??

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Fabulous

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Brilliant story, every man's fantasy I would say

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By *oss25Man  over a year ago

Flitwick and Fakenham

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By *us man1957Man  over a year ago

Guildford

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By *elltravelledman OP   Man  over a year ago

bradford

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By *elltravelledman OP   Man  over a year ago

bradford


"Brilliant story, every man's fantasy I would say "

Thanks and i'd imagine most guys wanting this scenario

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By *randyjackCouple  over a year ago

Wolverhampton

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