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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Would anyone like to read a story I wrote about a submissive woman and her dominant?

It's quite long so will email it to you on here in sections

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By *orgotten22Woman  over a year ago

out in the sticks in the north east england

Yes please x

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By *eanasmustardMan  over a year ago

corby

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By *udistnorthantsMan  over a year ago

Desborough

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By *ree-dom69Man  over a year ago

park gate

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By *imale38Man  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Part 1

Eleonora woke with the sound of something being poked through her letter box. It was mid afternoon and she had fallen asleep on the sofa surrounded by her selection of beautiful dogs. Dave had decided to climb onto the sofa and snuggle in to her soon after she fell asleep. They were both bathed in sunlight as it poured through the gap in the curtains and illuminated tiny bits of dust as they danced soperificaly in the beaming light. Eleonora lifted Dave's warm body off her and inhaled his sent as she raised her body up and off the sofa. She gave a little stretch as she raised her arms above her head before bending them to give the appearance of angel wings and an involuntary groan escaped her lips. She wiped her bright blue sleepy eyes and made her way to the front door to see what had been delivered. To her surprise she saw a hand written note sealed with a scarlet wax seal embossed with the letter "G". She instinctively knew who it was from as she turned it over and she saw, written in black ink "Filth". Her stomach churned as she began to think. Could it possible be from him? She hadn't heard from Graeme for ages. She suddenly noticed there was no address on the note. It must have been hand delivered. She quickly open the door and rushed outside to see who had delivered it. The road was empty apart from an old drinks bottle caught in the wind and clattering down the road until it crashed into the neighbours garden wall. Feeling both sacred and excited she gave a puzzled sigh and returned into her house and immediately went to the kitchen to get a knife with which to open the letter, she then went into her middle room, pulled out a wooden chair and sat at her table. She took the knife in her left hand and prized open the seal.

Inside the letter she saw the same black ink and started to read.

Filth,

I have been away for a while but I am back now. I have been watching you and its time you atone for your slutty behaviour.

15.30 The Holiday inn, Kettering

Room 403

Don't keep me waiting

Master

X X

Eleonora heart skipped a beat, her stomach started knotting with excitement and anticipation. She hadn't seen Graeme for so long and despite herself, the thrill of indulging her submissive side drove her wild. It had always existed within her but with the pressure of the modern world and peoples expectations of her to be a strong, independent woman had always ment she had to repress her submissive tendencies when they arose within her periodically for fear of it being seen as a weakness.

Should she go? Why shouldn't she? She wasn't sure. It had been a long time and things had changed. Would she still feel about Graeme as she once did? She reflected on the past times they had shared and a smile forged its was across her face. She felt a twinge of excitement in her loins as she thought about Graeme and what he must have planned for her. She knew him and knew he wouldn't harm her, she also knew he must have put time and effort into preparing an adventure for her, so she bit her lip and decided she would go. She would fight her feelings of trepidation as the excitement and curiosity was too much to ignore. Already she could feel her submissive side growing within her, nobody talked to her like that letter had, and somehow it thrilled her to take orders.

She didn't have long to prepare herself but one thing that troubled her though as she got dressed into clothes she thought would please her Master. Yes she had said Master in her own mind. It surprised her but she liked it and she would continue to call him as much. The thing she couldn't get out her mind was his name for her. Filth. It made her uncomfortable at first. She wasn't dirty or filthy and it made her want to rebel. It was a derogatory term and it alarmed her slightly. For the purpose of today though and the effort he must have gone to, to create this adventure for her she though she would go along with it, at least to begin with.

Once dressed, she admired herself in the mirror and was pleased with the reflection looking back at her. Ample cleavage to tease and distract her antagonist, short skirt showing off her long beautiful legs and her gorgeous face perfectly made up. She smiled as she twisted this way and that as she checked every detail from all angles. She knew how to handle herself and she felt confident enough to know that she could use her feminine charms to disarm her Master if it all got too much. Yes she thought to herself. I am the one who is really in control here. I will let him play out his little game, after all it will be a fun little adventure, but I am the one controlling it. With that she loaded up her car with all her beautiful doglets and started on her journey to the hotel.

While driving she couldn't shake the unsettling feeling of being both excited and really nervous. She continued to ponder her new name. Filth, why Filth? She thought. It must mean something. It must have a purpose. Master had used it for a reason but she just couldn't work it out.

Finally she arrived at the hotel and quickly parked up. The clock ticked over 15.18. She had twelve minutes to find room 403. She hurriedly lowered the car windows enough for her precious cargo and then taking her bag started to walk towards the hotel reception. Her heart really pounding now as the anticipation of what lay ahead began to take hold of her. She could feel her anxiety rising as she took a deep breath. She tried to reassure herself that she had made the right decision and told herself, its only Graeme she was meeting. He wouldn't hurt her, would he? She hadn't seen him for so long. Had he changed? No she thought, he's too gentle and loving. He can't hurt me.

She passed the reception and not wanting to draw attention to herself headed straight for the directional signs to help her locate the room. 400-450 upstairs. She began to ascend the stairs still questioning what she was doing. At the top of the flight of stairs she found another directional sign.

400-425 left

She went down the corridor. It was dark and decorated with pictures of sinking ships and boats caught in the maelstrom and other dark foreboding scenes. She looked over her shoulder, was anyone watching her? No one. Eventually she reached the second to last door on the left. 403. She looked at her watch 15.29 and waited. Finally it ticked over 15.30 and she took a deep breath and knocked.

No answer

She knocked again

Still no answer.

She tried the door and to her surprise it opened and tentatively she entered.

It was dark and the curtains were drawn. Eleonora crept around the door and slowly closed it behind her. She peered into the darkness as her eye adjusted to the gloom. It was a typical hotel room. The bathroom next to her and in front of her a narrow corridor leading to an opening. A double bed on one side and a desk on the other on which a television sat and a mirror hung above. She could also see one lone large candle which was flickering on the table. It provided the only light in the whole room. Then she saw her Master sitting in a chair in the far corner, shadow obscuring his face. All she could make out, his chest and legs. The light from the candle reflected off the chain dangling from his waist coat. He was sitting slightly angled to his left and she could see his elbow resting on the arm of the chair before his hand disappeared into the darkness. She imagined he had his chin resting on it. Without a word he raised his other hand and gestured her to stand on a patch of floor where he had marked an X using masking tape.

Eleonora did as she was told, she was full of mixed emotions. Excited to see him again, riddled with guilt due to loyalty to her boyfriend who she loved dearly, anxiety as to what was in store for her.  She had to admit she was now out of her comfort zone and her Master wasn't as she remembered. He seemed a bit more menacing.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Part 2

"Hello Filth" he said.

"I am glad you could join me. Now get down on your knees and get your phone out"

Eleonora did as she was instructed but it felt very unusual to her. Graeme had changed, he was more confident, more independent and determined. She liked it. Perhaps this would be more of a challenge than she had anticipated.

Eleonora reached into her bag and pulled out her phone.

"Good little Filth. I am pleased to see your so obedient. Any time now, your boyfriend will ring you. He will inform you that he has to go away on a course for a week. I have pull strings behind the scenes and arranged for him to be away for the week to "allow you body time to heal" from what you will receive today. When he rings you, you will act surprised but, you will go along with it. Do you understand Filth?"

"who the Fuck do you think you are calling me that?" Eleonora said taking offence at her name and feeling defensive of her boyfriend so started to rebel.

Graeme stood up and walked over slowly to her. He bent down and grabbed the back of her hair before she could say anything more and placed his mouth next to her ear. He then menacingly started to whisper.

"you are an insolent little bitch Filth. You drive me inane with how I feel about you"

He paused as he breathed in and tightened his grip on her hair as if fighting to control his lust filled  emotions. Finding his control again he continued

"You need to be corrected for your outrageously slutty behaviour and for your own good I am going to correct your inner whore.

To do so I am going to punish you and help you change from the wanton whore you are, always thinking with your dirty cunt, into the good girl you want to be. I am going to make you my little princess."

Eleonora laughed, and said

"my dirty cunt? Is that the same one you long to fuck but your little dick isn't good enough for? The dirty cunt your so jealous of and could never satisfy?

Graeme trying hard to assert his dominance and not allowing her to see she had infuriated him with her cutting insults and insolent behaviour found himself without warning spitting in her face.

"you really are a foul mouthed little bitch. But don't worry, I don't long for your filthy cunt, I am not one of your degenerate hangers on who wants to fuck you over a pool table in a run down pub or in a car park just to get a quick fix."

At that point Eleonora's phone started to ring and interrupted their fight for supremacy.

He let go of her hair and throw her head back with disdain, as walked back to his chair while Eleonora composed herself before she answered her phone, his saliva still dripping down her face. Sure enough it was her boyfriend informing her he had to attend a course in Bristol and had to leave this afternoon and wouldn't be back till next week. Eleonora didn't have to act surprised, she was surprised. How had Graeme arranged it? She let the phone call run its course and told him she loved him and they said their goodbyes and she hung up.

"how? How did you do that?" she asked Graeme.

"where are your manners Filth?" Graeme said with a calm soothing voice. "I am your Master, you ungrateful bitch"

Despite herself she was starting to submit, she didn't know how he had managed to manipulate things and orchestrate her boyfriends sudden disappearance and it unsettled and unnerved her. She felt sacred and in a low tremulous voice she said "sorry Master, How did you arrange it Master?"

"Never you mind Filth, now shall we get started?"

Eleonora nodded in reluctant agreement as her defiance ebbed away leaving her feeling docile and fragile. She was uncertain what he was now capable of and it scared her. She thought her safest course of action would be to go along with everything.

"Now Filth tell me your name and who do you belong to?"

"I am Filth Master, and I belong to you"

"Good girl"

With that Master went to a draw and pulled out some make up face cleanser and some cotton wool pads.

He handed them to Filth and told her to go to the bathroom and remove all her make up. Confused Filth obediently did as she was told and after a few minutes returned and handed back the items Master had lent her. He then told her to stand on the cross again as he slowly walked around her.

"Take your pump and the line out and hold it safe" he instructed.

Filth reached into her bra and took out her pump and held the line clear just in front of her.

With that Master pulled out some scissors from his back pocket and started to cut away Filths clothes.

Filth was dismayed but too afraid to stop what was happening to her. She looked down at her feet as her clothes lay in tatters around her. All that remained was her underwear. Master walked slowly around her looking at her up and down objectifying her, before once again taking the scissors and removing her underwear leaving her completely naked and exposed.

She felt so vulnerable, completely naked, without even any make up to hide behind. She couldn't even wear her clothes if she wanted to as they were in shreds around her feet. She was exposed and afraid. She tried to fight it but she couldn't help feeling her strength wilt within her. Master grabbed her arse firmly as he admired his work. He then walked around and stood right in front of her. His eyes locked on hers but she couldn't look at him. She felt ashamed, she was naked while he stood before her in his finery. The contrast was stark. 

He fastened a soft kind of belt type thing around her waist told her to place her pump into the pocket of the belt. This will keep it and you safe while we play he said making sure it wasn't too loose or too tight.

Then taking her hands he said in his firm but gentle voice.

"Look at me, Filth"

she tried to raise her eyes but she couldn't.

"Look at me"

Slowly her eyes met his and she could see that disarming kindness. He placed his warm hands on her hips as he stared deep into her soul.

"your my Filth, my little Filth and I need you to know I love you more than anything. Secretly we both know this is what you want and that you need this to happen. Do you trust me?"

"yes" came the reply in a broken voice. "I trust you"

With that he kissed her passionately and his hands moved up from her hips and on to the back of her neck and into her album hair. She wanted to touch him back but she knew she wasn't allowed to move so she just kissed him back as best she could. As she kissed him she re played what he said to her in her mind and she found she started to like her new name. It was hers and he had given it to her. It wasn't derogatory at all she thought. It was designed to get her into the right mindset, all of this was. She thought about the planning and effort her Master put into it and her heart quickened. She kissed him back harder as she began to feel special. She was his and she found herself really beginning to feel properly submissive. Her pussy started to get warm and wet as her excitement started to rise within her. She wanted to please him she wanted his attention. She knew then that she would do whatever he wanted no matter how challenging.

He then broke off their embrace and his hand made its way to her pussy. Still looking deep into each others eyes he moved his fingers around her opening before inserting his index and middle fingers. She let out a little sigh as the sensation swept over her. He then removed his fingers and placed them on her month. She could smell her own sent as he smeared her juices over her lips before plunging them into her mouth. Instinctively she started to suck.

"your body betrays you doesn't it? Your a wanton slut arn't you Filth"

"Yes Master" she replied still with her mouth full of Masters soiled fingers.

"You need me to correct you from your Fucking disgusting thoughts and habits don't you Filth? You need me to correct you because you don't want to be a dirty harpy whore anymore, only driven by what your clit wants. You want to be a good girl don't you? You want me to love you don't you?"

"Yes Master I do"

"Well before I can love you I need to rid you of your slutish behaviour"

He took her hand gently and lead her to the bed. He laid her down and secured her wrists and ankles to restraints he had already prepared that stretched under the bed. She was now powerless to move anything more then a few inches in any direction. Master placed a pillow under her head and asked if she was comfortable.

"Yes Master"

A rye smile came across his face. "You won't be soon"

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By *chilles and RavenCouple  over a year ago

Guernsey

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