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"Was enjoying the story up until the implication that John was tricked into having sex with his own daughter the previous year. Unless I missed something that is. It might just be a fantasy/fiction or whatever but that went too far." Sorry about that, it certainly wasn’t my intention to imply that, it was a mistake on my behalf, reading back I see your point and your right, re writing it I would of made it clear John wasn’t present the previous year, sorry if has spoiled the story for you, I do apologise x | |||
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"I don’t remember any mention of John attending the year before or did I miss something?" There wasn’t but it did imply he could of been, my mistake x | |||
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"I don’t remember any mention of John attending the year before or did I miss something?" Same here | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " this!! | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " Couldn't of put it any better. | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " Well said | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " Here here, the op is not claiming to be Enid Blyton!!! Tremendous story, more please!! | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " Well said | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more Well said " | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " ...well said .. | |||
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"Please stop criticising the OP. It comes across as nit picking and it is in the fantasy section! How many of us have put as much time and effort into writing a story for the forums? Its a fabulous story and very well written. I for one....simply want to thank you and encourage you to write more " In total agreement | |||
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"Was enjoying the story up until the implication that John was tricked into having sex with his own daughter the previous year. Unless I missed something that is. It might just be a fantasy/fiction or whatever but that went too far." Don’t think OP implied that at all and most of us never took that inference | |||
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"Was enjoying the story up until the implication that John was tricked into having sex with his own daughter the previous year. Unless I missed something that is. It might just be a fantasy/fiction or whatever but that went too far." Why don't you read part 4 first? Read them in order "John used to play rugby when he was younger and got invited every year but no wives or girlfriends ever got invited, I always wondered why!!!! ‘It’s a stupid lads night ange, I’m not bothered to be honest, it’s d*unk men praising themselves, there’s a stripper and all that’ ‘A stripper?’ I reply ‘Yes, a stripper, don’t say anything to Sam but the stripper last year was a proper slag, I didn’t see anything but rumour was she had sex with them all, not me, I left early but that’s the rumour’ All I thought was ‘OH MY GOD’" | |||
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"Was enjoying the story up until the implication that John was tricked into having sex with his own daughter the previous year. Unless I missed something that is. It might just be a fantasy/fiction or whatever but that went too far. Why don't you read part 4 first? Read them in order John used to play rugby when he was younger and got invited every year but no wives or girlfriends ever got invited, I always wondered why!!!! ‘It’s a stupid lads night ange, I’m not bothered to be honest, it’s d*unk men praising themselves, there’s a stripper and all that’ ‘A stripper?’ I reply ‘Yes, a stripper, don’t say anything to Sam but the stripper last year was a proper slag, I didn’t see anything but rumour was she had sex with them all, not me, I left early but that’s the rumour’ All I thought was ‘OH MY GOD’" hack Jeez , you make one comment I have enjoyed the story all the way through. I think the op is a talented writer, wether it is fiction or fact matters not. I have made no negative comments about the author or the story other than the one comment about the possible implication that father might have had sex with his own daughter. The author has clarified this. To the couple of people who point out that John said he left early and didn't take part, I suppose in your mind there is no chance that he would lie to his wife about having sex with another woman. But anyway, it's a great story, congrats to the author and please continue. | |||
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"Had Sam been introduced to Sean previous year and been able take him. As John says, slag last year took all of them but john had left" | |||
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"Thanks for all the nice comments, I’ll be starting a new story soon as I can only write about Michael as it happens, back soon you horny lot x" Then Michael needs to get the ledout lol | |||
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"Thanks for all the nice comments, I’ll be starting a new story soon as I can only write about Michael as it happens, back soon you horny lot x" Well your right there. lol. We certainly are a horny lot and long may we remain so. I await further tales of horniness from your pen (keyboard I suppose now) as and when you can. Pleeeze. Pleeeze. I need to read more | |||
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"so when this one ends can we have the daughter one" Good call | |||
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"so when this one ends can we have the daughter one Good call " Best... idea.. ever! | |||
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"so when this one ends can we have the daughter one Good call Best... idea.. ever!" Definitely need that version | |||
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"I collapsed on the floor as the door shut behind us, Michael unclipped the lead and unzipped my mask, if felt good to be out of it, I rolled onto my back exhausted and aching all over, everything I touched was covered in cum, I put my hand between my legs, my pussy was a swollen, sore, sticky mess, my clit to tender to touch ‘You did great Ange, so, so much better than the slut we used last year, you even looked like you was enjoying it out there’ michael said as he stood over me I needed to get out of the basque and into a hot shower The guilt and shame hit me as I showered the cum off me, I was ashamed of how many men I had just let use me like their fuck toy and the guilt of John being there and even involved ‘The room is yours for the night if you want ange’ michael shouted through the door I didn’t, I wanted to get home, as I stepped out off the shower, I picked up the basque and knickers, they were heavy with cum and fluids, I put them into my bag and started to get dressed, wondering what would happen when I got home My hands were shaking as I drove home, terrified about what would possibly happen, I opened the door and walked towards the stairs, I couldn’t see John, I started to walk upstairs ‘Ange, is that you?’ I froze as John shouted me ‘Yes babe’ I replied A delay, oh fuck, it was all going to erupt now I thought, I seemed to stand there for what seemed hours..... ‘How was your night?’ He asked, I heard him get up out of his chair ‘Er..... it was ok thanks, how was yours?’ He walked out of the living room and joined me at the bottom of the stairs, my stomach was in knots and the colour must of drained as I looked at him ‘Ah you know, boring, same old shit, I came home early, glad you had a better night’ he said as he walked towards the kitchen, I didn’t know what to think apart from relief, oh god relief, I walked upstairs and locked myself in the bathroom, pulling my knickers down to pee, they was soaked in cum again, men’s cum still finding its way out of me ‘What a slut’ I thought The days past and I couldn’t believe what I’d gotten away with, Michael stuck to his word and I thought my life would get back to normality, sam came round to the house one day carrying bin liners ‘Sam, what’s with the bags’ I asked her worried something was wrong ‘Oh, there clothes there going to the charity shop, I’ve brought them round to sort, hope you don’t mind’ she replied We sat and had a coffee sorting the clothes when something caught my eye that made my heart sink like never before, I grabbed it pulling it out of the bag ‘What’s this’ I asked, my hands trembling as I held it up, Sam snatched it out of my hand, her cheeks redding up as I looked at her ‘Oh, it’s nothing, Michael bought it for me last year, I only wore it once and didn’t like it so it’s going’ The basque was exactly the same as the one Michael had made me wear two weeks earlier All I thought was ‘you bastard michael’ " So what happens next? Is this the end does he delete the vids etc dying to know | |||
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"Part 8?" | |||
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"What happened to the Money story? Nx" Hi, sorry about the money story, it was deemed inappropriate and broke forum rules apparently and I was banned yet again x | |||
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"What happened to the Money story? Nx Hi, sorry about the money story, it was deemed inappropriate and broke forum rules apparently and I was banned yet again x" Please don't let them stop your creative Juices | |||
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"What happened to the Money story? Nx Hi, sorry about the money story, it was deemed inappropriate and broke forum rules apparently and I was banned yet again x" Hopefully this one will continue with him haveing more off ange xx | |||
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"Oh my word. I've just had the pleasure of reading through parts 1-7 in one go. I can't imagine how everyone else coped having to wait weeks for it to unfold. Utterly brilliant, so so so horny. The Carlsberg of wank material. " You should start a blog or something. I would follow that | |||
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"More please" Pretty please | |||
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"Cum on part 8 please xxxxxxxx so miss this story" Me too | |||
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