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By *ir1967 OP   Man  over a year ago

in da sticks, london, amsterdam, madrid

This is a test script from a story I published in German. As I am not sure whether I find the right tone to keep the story erotic and not drifting into sheer vulgarism, this is a part from the first chapter. Any feedback is welcome

Skyped

„Okay kiddies, into bed now, we can talk on Skype tomorrow again“ I said into the Skype screen and with that I initiated the usual virtual Good Night Kiss ritual we exercise since several month. 8200 km away from me and five and a half hours back in time my kids waved and made kiss hints toward the camera. It was heart breaking each time but global economic turmoil has imposed hard challenges upon us. Far away from wife and kids I was working for a European civil engineering company in India to earn the daily bread. Sure it was a very well paid job, but the price tag to sustain our prosperity was high for all members of the family. Another two month and then I will head home for good

Thanks God, there is Skype, allowing us to see and talk to each other for a few minutes. The Zupp noise came, the video screen turned black and a message “Call Finished” popped up. ´No, I don´t want to give a feedback about the calls quality right now´ I thought by myself and clicked the pop up away. Suddenly appeared in te text chat window “Are you still there?”. “Yes” I keyed back. “ If you stay awake for another little hour…I may have a surprise for you”. “Ooh? What is it then?” I ask curiously. “You will see and I am sure you gonna love it”. It was almost midnight here in India. “Okay love, I will wait then” I keyed in. ” I only need to get the kids to be now, see you later” came back.

Silence…

The skype noise which announces a new incoming message shales me out of a snooze

“Hey luv, are you still awake?” was in the text display. I rubbed my eyes and kay back “Yes, sure”.

“ I miss you”. “ Same here, its only two month left”. „ I wish you could touch me right now”. It was clear to me that she did not mean that in the sense of a petting over the head. The signal for an audio call came in and I accepted the call.

“Sweetie” her voice breathed thru the speaker, “ I want you to sit down comfortably”. “ I am all set, I am here on my comfy chair with my computer on my lap”. “Not comfy enough…, you better put the computer down, don´t worry, you will understand soon why”. ´Okay…´I thought

“ Okay, I am all set, I am ready“ I spoke in direction of the screen after I set the computer on a little beautiful Mahagoni table. That table was a piece of artwork, carved with lots of erotic motives from the Kamasutra, carried by four half naked dancers

“I will switch on the video now” came over the speaker. A few seconds later our bedroom was revealed on screen, bathed in the shimmering light of candles and two spot lights. To have a better video quality I adjusted my computer to resolve the diffuse light.

Then she entered the screen and what I saw left me speechless. All she was wearing was a fishnet like cat suit. It reminded me to a German fairy tale where the king did invite the smart farmers daughter to come to the palace with challenging preconditions: “Do not come by foot but don´t come in a carriage either, don´t be dressed but do not come naked either”…

The catsuit exposed her back as well as her bum and her pubic area in such manner that the leg part gave the impression as if she would wear a garter belt. The view was hot. The dark coarse fabric let her breasts shine thru but was tight to her body like a second skin around her body.

“How do you like it?” came from the speaker whilst she was turning to all sides to grant me a best possible view. “ Hot, baby, absolutely hot” I stammered, still fully paralysed form the view of her sexy body in this hot outfit. The emphasis of her hips revealed that she was wearing high heels.

“Let me be tonight your personal peepshow. I will do it to myself in front of the webcam and hope that you will touch yourself too. Let me be you’re the vision you jerk yourself off tonight”. “You are in my fantasies anyways, love”. “Why thank you, but tonight you got live porn, You are my video client and you will direct the show”

I have never been on explicit sites of this kind, but I wanted to participate in this game. It turned me on to be the voyeur and as I sat in my chair I opened my pants to relief my hardening buddy below the belt

She sat down at the edge of the bed and looked to me over the screen, her tongue wetting lasciviously her lips. “ Should I switch on my video too?” I asked. „No, that would kill the idea of the anonymous client and it is this anonymity which currently makes me wet“

“Okay Babe, please don´t get upset if my demands get kind of vulgar but this is how I imagine it goes in these commercial shows”. “ Don´t worry, it is a game, hence play your role as you are pleased . I am turned on already to be your internet slut”

“Spread your legs and show me how wet you are”. She let her body fall back onto the bed, opened her legs and lifted her pelvis. On my screen the familiar view of her smooth shaven pussy appeared. With her left hand she pulled her labia apart whilst she was dipping the fingers of her right into the wet paradise. “Uuhh, see how wet I am?” she asked, mining her own nectar to spread it over her lust cherry. I enjoyed the view of her bare lustful flesh for a few minutes till I ordered her: „show me now your other lust hole“.

“ Uuhh, yeah, my backdoor could do a good cock too”, came from the speaker. She turned into doggy position, rubbing her clit with one hand, pulling her buttocks apart with the other and revealed a view onto both lust holes at once. My dick was so hard from this view , I could have smashed window glass with it.

Her hand reached for the lub which she dispensed on her hand to spread it on her rectum

"Uhh, Babe, I need a cock now“. „ Use the black vibrating dildo but first let me see with this toy how you would suck me“

Once I had bought her a vibrator of high quality, not a cheap plastic piece which smells like the rubber of a bicycle wheel. It was a very fine material with a smooth surface, a fine sensual feeling when touching it. It was in the form of a classic phallus. The intensity of the vibrator was adjustable to level that pulsing waves came from the device. This is how she has set this toy right now. The device was extremely low noise so that the usual humming would not disturb.

Her tongue plays around the tip of the toy, then she inserts it deep into her throat, sending luscious eye winks over the screen and stroking over her breasts. Her hard nipples are peeking out of the catsuit. She let herself fall on her back again, lifts her pelvis with spread thighs and let the vibrator sink deep into her lust temple, which is aching for penetration. I can hear her breath getting shorter. “Turn around and let me see your other lust hole again”. She complied with my demand after a few minutes. Then she took the toy out and kneeled on the bed presenting the view of her two peach halves to me.

Still kneeling before me or better before the webcam she strokes with the artificial phallus time again and again thru her wet trench, from the rectum all the way thru the lust trench to her clit and back. I hear the panting breath of her ecstasy

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Oh yes this is a great story. One we may have to try. X

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By *eeky goodnessMan  over a year ago

Worcester

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Second tester comes on sunday

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