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A beautiful phoenix

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Ok another fantasy write, this first section it's just an introduction to the story and characters will add more when I can

Sara was the kind of lady that didn't speak her mind, bit her tongue and liked to keep the peace. Throughout her life many people had told her that she was ‘too nice for her own good’. She’d never responded to that comment, but it hurt because it was true. She always prioritised other people's feelings over her own and was yet to discover the reason for this. She disliked her submissive nature, the way she allowed, almost invited in fact, people to treat her like she didn't even exist. Yet she’d never done anything to change it, until now.

She'd met a handsome man called Josh at the bar that she worked, one bitterly cold Friday evening. He'd noticed how she walked with her head down and the way she seemed to cower out of people's way as they passed. ‘Excuse me miss’ he called out to her ‘what can I help you with Sir? Another drink? Sorry about that, in a world of my own’ she stuttered. ‘No need to apologise silly, I just wanted to talk to you, if you don't mind’ he replied with a soft, gentle smile. She hid her face behind her hair and fidgeted with the cloth that she had in her hand. ‘are you sure? ‘ she asked hesitantly. Why does he want to talk to me she thought to herself, maybe he's trying to sell something or he needs directions to somewhere she told herself. ‘yes, I am sure, I want to know why a lady as beautiful as yourself is so shy and lacking in confidence’, ‘I'm not beautiful , I'm really not at all’ came her reply as she shook her head.

Over the course of the evening the two of them chatted and Sara felt more relaxed around him as the evening progressed. Before they knew it, closing time was upon them and Josh had to leave, he thanked her for brightening his evening up and gave her a kiss on the cheek before picking up his coat and heading out of the door. Sara was smiling, for the first time in such a long time she'd felt appreciated, acknowledged, like she mattered.

Over the next few weeks, Josh drank at the bar and talked to Sara every Friday night. She looked forward to seeing him, as he did her. Those few hours that they shared together were an escape for her, with Josh she could speak her mind without worrying. He was fascinated by her beauty and wished she could value herself as much as he did. He'd hover around the other side of the dance floor many times to see if her confidence had grew and every time, her head was bowed as it was when he first met her. Josh had a proposition for her but first he had to tell her his deepest secret.

He offered to walk her home after work and he’d drank more than usual that night, he needed some Dutch courage. ‘Sara, if I tell you something, please don't let it lessen your opinion of me’ he said looking deeply into her eyes. ‘I won't, what is it?’ she asked, her mind went into overdrive she hoped he was going to tell her that he had fallen for her as she had him. Oh how she longed to hear those words. ‘Well, there's no easy way to say this, but well, erm I have a bit of a kink or fetish or however you'd like to refer to it and I'd very much like your help’ Sara was dumbfounded, all she could manage was ‘you want to lick my feet?!’. Josh laughed ‘no, not a foot fetish, I like to be ordered and controlled, I'm a sub and I want you to be my mistress’. ‘Oh Josh, I can't make decisions for myself, let alone give someone orders’ she whispered, feeling disappointed that he hadn't declared his love for her.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nice. Xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Wow a perfect build up to what I can only imagine will be a passionate story.

I can see Sara now and Josh .

Brilliantly well crafted opening. Bella you have done it again . I am waiting in anticipation for the next installment.thank you xx

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By *ymrocruMan over a year ago

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Fascinating and brilliantly written.

More please gorgeous. Xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Oh my such a good start, im so intrigued to hear more. great work Bella xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Nice. Xx"

Thanks lovely xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Wow a perfect build up to what I can only imagine will be a passionate story.

I can see Sara now and Josh .

Brilliantly well crafted opening. Bella you have done it again . I am waiting in anticipation for the next installment.thank you xx"

Thanks Mr Taff means a lot coming from a writer as talented as yourself

xxxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Fascinating and brilliantly written.

More please gorgeous. Xx"

Glad you like it so far, thank you I will write up the next installment as soon as I can xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Oh my such a good start, im so intrigued to hear more. great work Bella xx"

Glad you like it so far, thank you xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Great start Bella,up to your usual high standard!!xxx

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By *ricksydemonMan over a year ago

llandudno

So far so good, as usual... X

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Bella, you can be my mistress anytime

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looking forward to the next installment

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Great start Bella,up to your usual high standard!!xxx

Thanks hun glad you like it so far xxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"So far so good, as usual... X "

Thanks Mr x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Bella, you can be my mistress anytime

Haha im a bit nervous about writing it as I've no experience of it whatsoever, but I keep fantasising over the idea

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Looking forward to the next installment

Will be posted as soon as I get chance xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

They’d reached her flat by now, which was on the high street above a bakery. ‘Please, just forget I mentioned it’ Josh stuttered. Sara stopped for a second examining his face ‘it's not a joke?’ she asked confused. ‘Not at all' came his reply, 'look I'll give some space until you've decided he said here's my number, get in touch when you've got an answer.’ He kissed her on the cheek as she unlocked her door in a daze, trying to take it all in and before she realised, he was gone.

Over the next few days, Sara toyed with the idea of making Josh’s fantasy a reality. She did like the idea of being in control and experiencing the feeling of empowerment, but how would she ever muster up the courage to go through with it. It would be completely and utterly out of character and well out of her comfort zone. Out of of curiosity, she found herself watching mistress type pornography and was stunned by how much they turned her on. She watched them intently, picking up every detail; tone of voice, facial expression and body language. Sara began imagining herself wearing tight black, metal studded PVC as the porn stars did. She didn't like the thought of inflicting pain but could certainly see herself teasing Josh with the aid of restraints and blindfolds. Next, she found herself shopping online for a PVC dress like the one she'd been fantasising over. She'd made up her mind, she was going to go ahead with it, although she was nervous, the fantasy was turning her on more than she could bare.

A few days later her PVC dress arrived and she ran to her bedroom to try it on, she was surprised at how well it looked on her. It had studded material crossed over on the chest which would accentuate her ample breasts, on the sides there were mesh panels which highlighted the curves of her body. The stretchy material clung tightly to her round arse and chunky thighs. The outfit came with suspender clips which she teamed with her favourite fishnet, lace trimmed stockings. She slid her feet into a pair of black patent stilettos and strutted back and forth in front of her full length mirror. She looked, and felt, like a woman who could have any man eating out to the palm of her hand, but could she put it into practice? Sara glanced over at the box where she kept her fancy dress items, remembering she had some hand cuffs. She opened it up and searched through the contents, she also found a thin black soft leather belt with tassels and a long piece of of black satin. She smirked as she realised the belt would be good for tying Josh up and the satin would make the perfect blindfold.

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By *ricksydemonMan over a year ago

llandudno

Keep going... Please

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Fantastic , it keeps building perfectly, you have us all hooked xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Love a good story

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Very good, love a mistress having a sub x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Very good so far hon

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Keep going... Please"

Will do lovely x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Fantastic , it keeps building perfectly, you have us all hooked xx"

Thanks Mr Taff always makes me smile to hear feedback from you xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Love a good story"

Thank you x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Very good, love a mistress having a sub x"

Thanks it's not something I have experience with so I hope I deliver it well x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Very good so far hon "

Thanks lovely x

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By *entaur_UKMan over a year ago

Cannock

You've got me intrigued to find out what happens next Bella.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

More please!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Sara grabbed her red handbag and searched for the small piece of paper that Josh had gave her. Her hands shook furiously as she tapped his number into her phone. When he answered all she could manage was ‘Josh, it's Sara, I've decided I want to take you up on your offer, I'll be your mistress’ Josh’s stomach flipped with excitement ‘wow OK thank you see you at the bar on Friday’ came his babbling reply. She smiled and put the phone down, it's time I grew more confidence at work she thought to herself. The following day, she bought herself a new black shirt for work which was much lower cut and far more figure hugging than the one she had. She also swapped her smart black trousers for a short tight skirt teamed with trusty black stilettos. When Friday arrived, she spent a lot longer getting ready for work than she usually did. Her eye make up was more dramatic than making her blue-grey eyes stand out. Her blonde shoulder length hair was styled to frame her face.

At work, for the first time Sara held her head high, she smiled and spoke to her customers. One regular thought she was a new barmaid and was shocked to learn that she was the quiet, shy one that had been there for a couple of years. As she walked through the bar collecting glasses, many eyes followed her every movement. Her walk during the course of the night seemed to turn into more of a strut and she was loving her new found confidence.

Josh arrived halfway through her shift, but held back to observe her confidence once again, expecting to see her head bowed. He couldn't believe his eyes, there was his beautiful Sara laughing, joking even flirting with her customers. She oozed confidence and was more attractive than ever. After watching in a daze for a short while, he decided to go over and talk to her. ‘wow Sara the change in you is just magnificent, you look amazing your confidence is fantastic’ he said in awe, ‘I know’ she shrugged with a smile, ‘usual glass of red?’ ‘please’ he whispered still in shock. She put a large glass of red wine next to him ‘you're coming home with me tonight’ she said firmly. Before he had chance to respond she looked deeply into his eyes and added ‘I'm not asking you, I'm telling you’ and strutted off to serve the next customer.

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By *ood at oralMan over a year ago

kirkcaldy

Hi hot sxy lady Bella hope your ok another great story well written that keeps you well entertained keep up the great writing

xxxxxxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Hi hot sxy lady Bella hope your ok another great story well written that keeps you well entertained keep up the great writing

xxxxxxx"

Thanks lovely xxx

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By *ood at oralMan over a year ago

kirkcaldy

Awe your welcome hot sxy lady god your body looks so hot with a cracking looking ass lady Bella xxxxx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

you have my full attention

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"you have my full attention

Thanks Taff glad you're enjoying it so far xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Very hot

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Very hot"

Thanks hun xx

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By *ountryfansCouple over a year ago

huntingdon

Loving the story. Its well written. Can really feel for Sara and understand where her and josh are coming from.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

This girl can write!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very hot

Thanks hun xx"

Love the Christmas outfit

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looking forward to the rest

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

And us

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Looking forward to the rest "

Me too

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Loving the story. Its well written. Can really feel for Sara and understand where her and josh are coming from. "

I'm glad the character's are being understood thank you xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"This girl can write! "

Thank you, you're very kind xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Very hot

Thanks hun xx

Love the Christmas outfit

Haha thank you xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

To those that said they are looking forward to the rest of the story I've just done the next section sorry it's taking long, it's hard on the run up to Christmas to get it done thanks for being patient

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

During the rest of her shift Sara consciously flirted with all of her customers, except Josh, which only added to his desire for her. He watched, mesmerised as she chatted confidently, twirling her hair and giggling with strangers. It was such a wonderful sight and he couldn't help but feel proud of her. She was the centre of attention and she was lapping it up, she let go and for the first time in a long while she actually enjoyed her shift. As the last few punters headed out of the door, Sara collected the last of the night's glasses as quickly as she could. Josh helped her tidy up and when she'd finished they headed out of the door to start the short walk to Sara’s house.

They arrived about ten minutes later and Sara instructed him to pour them both a drink and wait in her room for her ‘first room on the left’ she said sharply. Josh nodded and followed her instruction, a mixture of emotions whirling through his head; excitement, intrigue and a little bit of fear of the unknown. Josh sat himself on her bed sipping his drink as he waited patiently for his muse, Sara the beautiful phoenix that had rose from the ashes of her former self. A short while later, Sara emerged at the entrance of the door in her PVC dress staring at him as her eyes glistened with excitement. She was a vision, the dress looked amazing on her curvy figure and really flattered her assets, he was so taken by her he almost choked on his drink.

He couldn't take his eyes off her, she was captivating and enchanting. ‘Strip to your boxers’ she said firmly before he had chance to say anything, he nodded and began to unbutton his shirt. Sara tried not to notice his well toned torso, but it was too late she felt herself starting to lose it a little. She turned away from him and tried to calm her excitement, ‘hurry up’ she ordered trying to distract herself from the thoughts that ran wildly around her mind. Once she had regained control, she turned back to face him, he was sitting on the edge of the king size bed, she glanced down at the growing bulge in his tight black boxers. ‘Excited?’ she asked in a demanding tone, Josh nodded his head. ‘Have you lost the ability to talk?’, ‘no’ came his nervous reply. She quickly dropped down to a crouch so that she was at his eye level, her sudden movement making him jump in fear.

The tension in the dimly lit room had built to excruciating heights, the slightest sound or movement sent shivers down his spine. She pulled his face closer to her own and bluntly whispered ‘from now on you call me Miss Sara, do you understand?‘ as she dug her deep cherry red nails into his skin. He nodded again, ‘PARDON?!’ she suddenly boomed, Josh trembled ‘yes, Miss Sara I understand’ he stuttered. She grinned, almost sniggering ‘good’ she replied as she let go of his face and stood up, towering over him in her heels. He looked up at her in awe, what a beautiful, powerful lady she was. He was more attracted to her now than he'd ever been, she was confident and very much in control of her own thoughts, she was empowering.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Great story,again Bella,sorry Miss jingle bells!!would love to find you under my tree,you are a real cracker!!love the Santa outfit! Festive as f##k!!keep up the good work! Ho Ho Ho !!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Great story,again Bella,sorry Miss jingle bells!!would love to find you under my tree,you are a real cracker!!love the Santa outfit! Festive as f##k!!keep up the good work! Ho Ho Ho !!!

Aww hun you're too kind

thank you so much I'm going to do another Christmas pic though as I'm not overly happy with that one xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Still loving this story

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Its fantastic!!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Still loving this story "

Glad you like it I'll do another installment later xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Its fantastic!!!"

Thanks so much glad you're enjoying it

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By *edmark07Man over a year ago

liverpool

fantastic so far,your too modest, you have a talent x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

More plz

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Why are you a scouser now,thought you were a taff!!glad you're happy,though!keep writing your stories!Ps why are you so happy? Must be love!!!!chuffed for you if it is!!!!

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By *ty31Man over a year ago

NW London

It's reading really well Bella and it's probably the best piece of writing you have done.

I like how you are allowing more time to develop your character's personalities and set the scene.

Looking forward to the next part.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"fantastic so far,your too modest, you have a talent x "

Aww you're so kind thank you

glad you're enjoying it so far xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"More plz "

Next installment coming shortly xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Why are you a scouser now,thought you were a taff!!glad you're happy,though!keep writing your stories!Ps why are you so happy? Must be love!!!!chuffed for you if it is!!!!

I'm always a Taff, let's just say my towns quite small and didn't want to be recognised

I intend too stuck for my next story though. Aww thanks hun thats so kind were taking it slow for now just seeing how it goes

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"It's reading really well Bella and it's probably the best piece of writing you have done.

I like how you are allowing more time to develop your character's personalities and set the scene.

Looking forward to the next part."

Thanks lovely, I'm liking writing it with more character development, just a shame it's taking so long to get this one done I'm so busy what with Christmas and work but I hope to finish it over the next few days xx

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By *eighbiMan over a year ago

Leigh

Interesting story. Look forward to the next installment

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By *ye SeMan over a year ago

london

Great story. So turned on

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Brilliant read and excellently written, each character brought to life by your words and descriptions, I bet there are many people that have been in this situation and the build up is the most sexual, getting ever sence going, I can't wait to read more, please don't try and rush to finish it.

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By *ames WhyteMan over a year ago

Near Manchester Airport

Has the potential of a magnum opus. Please continue to torment us, it's delicious.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Interesting story. Look forward to the next installment "

I do plan to finish this haha it was a busier Christmas then expected I think maybe I should write the full story before posting but I like to get feedback from each section

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Great story. So turned on

Glad you're enjoying it xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Brilliant read and excellently written, each character brought to life by your words and descriptions, I bet there are many people that have been in this situation and the build up is the most sexual, getting ever sence going, I can't wait to read more, please don't try and rush to finish it. "

Thank you so much I'm glad you like the build up I'm trying to make it as believable and real as possible

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Has the potential of a magnum opus. Please continue to torment us, it's delicious."

Glad you're enjoying it

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By *ames WhyteMan over a year ago

Near Manchester Airport

Pleasure to read erotica like this.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Sara walked towards her bedside table and picked up the blindfold, cuffs and the tasselled belt. Josh watched, his eyes widened in anticipation. Sara remained silent her heels clicked across the floor as she walked closer to him. Once again, she lowered herself to his level and breathed down his ear, ‘lay back’ she told him firmly. He did as he was told and moved back up the bed, she cuffed his hands and tied his ankles together then placed the blindfold over his eyes. Then without a word clicked away from him and headed down the stairs. Josh was confused, was she mocking him for having this fantasy? How long was she going to leave him like this for? From downstairs he could hear that Sara was humming a tune to herself, which only added to the tension. After a few minutes, he could hear the heels clicking back up the stairs towards him, he froze, uncertain about what was going to happen next. The sound of the clicking of her heels was in the room with him now and making its way towards him, he gulped. ‘What is the matter?’ she said loudly interrupting his thoughts ‘n.. n.. nothing’ was all that Josh could manage.

The bed creaked a little and he realised she had joined him on the bed ‘you seem tense’ she said playfully. Josh was still frozen with fear his mind was running wild with questions ‘why did she go downstairs?’ Not being able to see or touch her was almost torturous, she looked more beautiful than ever tonight. His thoughts were stopped in their tracks by a strange sensation on his chest which made him almost scream, it felt like a sharp pain at first, then as if she had branded him with a hot iron. The sensation moved in slow circles down his torso and he soon realised it was an ice cube. ‘You are tense aren't you?’ she laughed, mocking him as she continued to run the ice cube over his body. She lifted the blindfold from his eyes, he noticed an ice cube tray next to her. Without saying a word Sara pulled the top half of her dress down a little exposing her breasts which were pushed up by the figure hugging PVC dress. She then took two ice cubes, one in each hand and ran them around her nipples. He looked on in excitement as she continued to tease him, he wanted to touch her desperately and her nipples looked so delicious and suckable. She let out slight moans as she continued to run the ice cubes over her breasts.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one

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By *ty31Man over a year ago

NW London

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one "

Take Your Time and get it how you want it and when you think it is right. It's really good so far and the latest part builds up the tension. Well done!

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one

Take Your Time and get it how you want it and when you think it is right. It's really good so far and the latest part builds up the tension. Well done!"

Thanks means a lot I do plan on getting it finished though it bugs me knowing have an unfinished story lol thanks for your patience

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one

Take Your Time and get it how you want it and when you think it is right. It's really good so far and the latest part builds up the tension. Well done!

Thanks means a lot I do plan on getting it finished though it bugs me knowing have an unfinished story lol thanks for your patience

You really ought to think about writing a novella or even the full novel. You write so creatively and with a good sense of understanding

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Brilliant read , thank you for sharing xxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one

Take Your Time and get it how you want it and when you think it is right. It's really good so far and the latest part builds up the tension. Well done!

Thanks means a lot I do plan on getting it finished though it bugs me knowing have an unfinished story lol thanks for your patience

You really ought to think about writing a novella or even the full novel. You write so creatively and with a good sense of understanding

Why thank you that's so very kind

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Brilliant read , thank you for sharing xxx"

Glad you're enjoying it so far xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Glad to see you're continuing story!still as well written as usual,if you still have writer,s block,would love to get your(creative) juices flowing!!!xxx

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By *ye SeMan over a year ago

london

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one "

Keep it going. Love what Sara has be come

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"So sorry to all the readers that this story is taking so long

I've had writer's block with this one "
holy oke ive been waiting for this for ages amd can i say miss bella you never fail to in making me horny with the anticipation of your writing. Oh how i would loved to be teased to the limits you have inside your wonderfull and naughty mind

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