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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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His appointment was 12 noon. I opened the door in one my most desired Dominatrix outfits. I could tell he was impressed by the look on his face and the bulge in his black work suit. We discussed and arranged over email and the phone that he wanted a lunch break session. He contacted myself, Ms Von to ask for a different kind of lunch break. That I could promise him. What I couldn't promise is that he would be back to work on time. You can't put a time on a good time. He happily obliged and said it wasn't a problem. I offer him a quick drink and then lead him to The Velvet Room. He stood in the Velvet Room in front of the ebony glass cabinet. His face flushed visibly as his eyes darted from one toy to another.
I ask him to take a seat on the Bondage Chair. I can see excitement in his sky blue eyes, that is , until I cover them with a black luxurious leather eye mask. I walk around him in my red stiletto heels, looking at him, reading his body language. I reach out to the glass door of the ebony cabinet, open it and pull out a tickle whip.... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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His appointment was 12 noon. I opened the door in one my most desired Dominatrix outfits. I could tell he was impressed by the look on his face and the bulge in his black work suit. We discussed and arranged over email and the phone that he wanted a lunch break session. He contacted Miss Von to ask for a different kind of lunch break. That I could promise him. What I couldn't promise is that he would be back to work on time. You can't put a time on a good time. He happily obliged and said it wasn't a problem. I offer him a quick drink and then lead him to The Velvet Room. He stood in the Velvet Room in front of the ebony glass cabinet. His face flushed visibly as his eyes darted from one toy to another.
I ask him to take a seat on the Bondage Chair. I can see excitement in his sky blue eyes, that is until I cover them with a black luxurious leather eye mask. I walk around him in my red stiletto heels, looking at him, reading his body language. I reach out to the glass door of the ebony cabinet, open it and pull out a tickle whip....
I trace the whip all around his neck, ears and lastly his beautiful full lips. I untie his black tie and unbutton the first two buttons of his crisp white shirt which slightly reveals a tanned, toned, shaven chest. I take off the blindfold and ask him to strip from his work clothes, he does as I say. I take each piece and hang it up for him. I demand he removes his tight white CK's too. I notice he done what I had asked over email and that was to purchase a cock ring and have it on for our appointment. His cock looked divine. I put his boxers on top of his pair of shoes along with his socks.
I tell him to be seated on the bondage chair once again. I cuff each wrist and each ankle to the black leather bondage chair. He can see as well feel the tickle whip now. I start to trace his nipples with it, down his chest to his stomach, over his outstanding manhood, and inner thighs. I give the tickle whip a whip over his left thigh and then to his chest, he gives a slight moan of enjoyment. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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His appointment was 12 noon. I opened the door in one my most desired Dominatrix outfits. I could tell he was impressed by the look on his face and the bulge in his black work suit. We discussed and arranged over email and the phone that he wanted a lunch break session. He contacted Miss Von to ask for a different kind of lunch break. That I could promise him. What I couldn't promise is that he would be back to work on time. You can't put a time on a good time. He happily obliged and said it wasn't a problem. I offer him a quick drink and then lead him to The Velvet Room. He stood in the Velvet Room in front of the ebony glass cabinet. His face flushed visibly as his eyes darted from one toy to another.
I ask him to take a seat on the Bondage Chair. I can see excitement in his sky blue eyes, that is until I cover them with a black luxurious leather eye mask. I walk around him in my red stiletto heels, looking at him, reading his body language. I reach out to the glass door of the ebony cabinet, open it and pull out a tickle whip....
I trace the whip all around his neck, ears and lastly his beautiful full lips. I untie his black tie and unbutton the first two buttons of his crisp white shirt which slightly reveals a tanned, toned, shaven chest. I take off the blindfold and ask him to strip from his work clothes, he does as I say. I take each piece and hang it up for him. I demand he removes his tight white CK's too. I notice he done what I had asked over email and that was to purchase a cock ring and have it on for our appointment. His cock looked divine. I put his boxers on top of his pair of shoes along with his socks.
I tell him to be seated on the bondage chair once again. I cuff each wrist and each ankle to the black leather bondage chair. He can see as well feel the tickle whip now. I start to trace his nipples with it, down his chest to his stomach, over his outstanding manhood, and inner thighs. I give the tickle whip a whip over his left thigh and then to his chest, he gives a slight moan of enjoyment.
I give some quick whips to his manhood that is standing to my attention. I can't help but go in for a lick from the base of his cock right to the tip, the tip of my tongue covered in his tasteful, delightful pre cum, it makes me wetter than I ever imagined. How could it not. I have this very tall, handsome, toned man in front of me that has lips you just want all over your intimate parts and a cock so gorgeous you are left thinking what shall I look at and take advantage of first. This guy is perfection and I have him for as long it takes me. I untie the leather cuffs of his ankles and wrists and lead him over by the collar and leash around his neck to the St Andrews Cross. I once again cuff his wrists and ankles to the cross and place a spandex open mouthed hood over his head. I make my way over to the mirrored tall boy cabinet with crystal handles, pull open the top draw and reach in with my long manicured fingers and pull out the pin wheel and wartenberg wheel. Whilst my submissive, his name is Sam, is waiting with much anticipation of what's going to happen next. All he can hear is the sound of my red patient stilettos getting closer and closer to him. He then feels my mouth against his and I take a sharp quick bite of his bottom lip. I can almost feel the rush of excitement that went through his body as I took the bite. |
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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago
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Personally, I would suggest that you don't write any more for now, but take a look at what you've got and see where it could be improved with a rewrite.
You've got a nice style, and an eye for detail, but the story is a little bit muddled in terms of tense and structure. What you've written so far would really benefit from you taking a step back from it now and considering how it reads. The first paragraph for example could flow a lot better if you tackle it again.
Hope that is constructive, it's a lovely story so far with some flare, but a bit of a polish could make it really hot.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Personally, I would suggest that you don't write any more for now, but take a look at what you've got and see where it could be improved with a rewrite.
You've got a nice style, and an eye for detail, but the story is a little bit muddled in terms of tense and structure. What you've written so far would really benefit from you taking a step back from it now and considering how it reads. The first paragraph for example could flow a lot better if you tackle it again.
Hope that is constructive, it's a lovely story so far with some flare, but a bit of a polish could make it really hot.
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I appreciate the constructive criticism 
However, I'm no writer so I am just writing it as it comes out of my head/mouth.
You are not the first to give advice (others via pm)
As I said I'm far from a writer it was just something to do in my very bored moments. |
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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago
Bristol |
"Personally, I would suggest that you don't write any more for now, but take a look at what you've got and see where it could be improved with a rewrite.
You've got a nice style, and an eye for detail, but the story is a little bit muddled in terms of tense and structure. What you've written so far would really benefit from you taking a step back from it now and considering how it reads. The first paragraph for example could flow a lot better if you tackle it again.
Hope that is constructive, it's a lovely story so far with some flare, but a bit of a polish could make it really hot.
I appreciate the constructive criticism
However, I'm no writer so I am just writing it as it comes out of my head/mouth.
You are not the first to give advice (others via pm)
As I said I'm far from a writer it was just something to do in my very bored moments. "
Totally understand. You write very nicely off the cuff as it were, so you may want to do some more with it. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Personally, I would suggest that you don't write any more for now, but take a look at what you've got and see where it could be improved with a rewrite.
You've got a nice style, and an eye for detail, but the story is a little bit muddled in terms of tense and structure. What you've written so far would really benefit from you taking a step back from it now and considering how it reads. The first paragraph for example could flow a lot better if you tackle it again.
Hope that is constructive, it's a lovely story so far with some flare, but a bit of a polish could make it really hot.
I appreciate the constructive criticism
However, I'm no writer so I am just writing it as it comes out of my head/mouth.
You are not the first to give advice (others via pm)
As I said I'm far from a writer it was just something to do in my very bored moments.
Totally understand. You write very nicely off the cuff as it were, so you may want to do some more with it. "
Thankyou I will try and take your advice on board, no promises though |
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