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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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This is based on a fantasy I've always wanted to try which is Nightmare on Elm Street roleplay with me as Freddy. This is my first go at writing a fantasy story so please bare with me on this ok.
Let my sexual nightmare begin lol.
The woman opens her eyes to find herself laying on a bed wearing a buttoned shirt and pants. She wonders where she is and thinks of getting off the bed but doesn't want to due to how comfortable it is. For some reason, she can't help but feel a rush over her body making her feel really horny and begins to move her hands all over her body. Her hands cup her huge, soft breasts over her shirt, squeezing and caressing them. She breathes slightly heavily as she pinches her hardening nipples. She undoes one of the shirt buttons and slides her left hand in and grabs her right tit, squeezing it while pinching her nipple harder biting her lip at the small hint of pain. She slides her right hand down to her pants, rubbing herself from the outside of them. After a little from the outside, she slides her right hand right under her pants and panties and begins to rub her pussy inside while she continues to caress and squeeze her breast. She gives off a little moan and as she plays with her breasts and pussy feeling the dampness on her fingers. She thinks to herself "Wish there was someone here to fuck me good and hard"
Suddenly, the woman stops and sits straight up to hear a certain rhythmic tapping and her eyes dart to its direction of the tapping to see a tall silhouette of me staring at her. She sees the blades on the glove of my right hand rhythmically tapping on the door. "Are you having fun?" I ask in a low tone of voice as I glide my blades down the door. "Who are you?" she asks almost shaking in fear. I moan softly as look at her gorgeous body. "Freddy is my name" I reply as I eye her up and down. "You look so amazingly beautiful in those clothes" I said. "Would be interesting to see what's underneath". She couldn't help but feel turned on at my words and softly bites her lip from hearing them. Noticing her lip biting, I ask her "Hmmmm. Did those word turn you on?". "A little" she says in return and starts eyeing me up and down. She tries not to wonder what is inside my trousers but can't due to being so horny from playing with herself earlier. I take her by the hand, pulling her off the bed so she could stand up.
I walk round, admiring her gorgeous frame, stroking her hair with my left hand as I keep my claw to my side. I glide my hand against her soft juicy ass, giving them little squeeze, getting turned on at the softness of it while she feels the same. I take off my fedora hat and move close behind her, move her hair away from her neck and kiss it softly. She moans very softly as she feels my lips caressing her neck. "Please, don't..." she says while heavily breathing. I stop, raise my gloved right hand to turn head to her right nearly facing me. I lick her on the cheek and whisper into her ear "Your mouth says no, but your body says yes". She then looks me in the eye to say "I meant please, don't stop" I give off a little smile as I rub myself against her nice round ass, feeling my cock getting harder in my pants. She gets turned on greatly at the feel of my cock rubbing against her ass. "Wanna suck face?" I whisper. She nods and then locks lips with mine. We kiss deep and hard. Our tongues wrestle as we kiss, moaning softly.
I then go back to kissing her neck. She breathes more heavily at the feel of my lips thinking "mmmmmm he is so good. I can't wait to see what he does with the rest of my body". My hands move round to her front, caressing her large tits from outside her shirt. I moan at the feel of them large juicy mounds. "Tits were always my favourite on a woman" I said. She moans softly smiles when hearing those words and then takes my right hand and uses the blade on my index finger to remove the buttons on her shirt one by one. I slowly slide off her unbuttoned shirt from behind and stand in front of her and smile as I stare at her exposed braless tits. "Mmmmmmmm those sure look good enough to eat" I say with a chuckle. "How horny do you feel?" "Very horny" she replies. "Good, you naughty girl as your horniness is what fuels me" I said. I look down and feel how hard I am from the outside of my trousers with my left hand. I look up and say "look what you've done to me". She looks back with a dirty smile on her face feeling excited at what I'm about to do next. I slowly undo my belt and slide my pants down to reveal the hard bulge in my shorts. I then slowly slide them down to show my hardened cock fly free. She looks at my cock with amazement at its size and licks her lips looking at it. "Come to Freddy" I say beckoning her closer with my claw. "Now its time to play"
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Sorry I forgot to add that if I was to do this for real one day, no real blades would be used as my claw is only plastic and part of a costume I have. Just thought I'd point that out that's all. |
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It has potential to be a dark fantasy, however the way it is written does not entice me. I personally would have preferred more description on the Freddie character, he does not come across as a fearful character (Considering he preys on those in a vulnerable sleep state) Speaking of which... she was not asleep so if sticking to the film theme, would he have been there?
This is of course an opinion. Never deem your ideas as stupid and never stop writing what you enjoy. |
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"It has potential to be a dark fantasy, however the way it is written does not entice me. I personally would have preferred more description on the Freddie character, he does not come across as a fearful character (Considering he preys on those in a vulnerable sleep state) Speaking of which... she was not asleep so if sticking to the film theme, would he have been there?
This is of course an opinion. Never deem your ideas as stupid and never stop writing what you enjoy."
I appreciate your advice. While I was writing the story, I did originally have the woman known as the victim and have her unable to move as if being held down by some kind of force but I took it out as I thought it makes the fantasy sound like rape. Even though I'm good on imagination when it comes to writing a story, I'm not really good when comes to describing a character. My mind goes blank when it comes to that. |
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