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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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i met an old mates wife i had not seen for 6 years she had lost weight and looked great still curvy with nice tits she chatted and we went for lunch we got rather d*unk and the truths came out about how my ex told her i was wanting to fuck her i said i never had a chance as she said she was flattered as i eyed her up and i said perved over her more like she said she rememberd me rubbing her tits as she slept saying how horny she was i said she had great nipples and were they as good she said would i fuck her now oh yes i said as we got a cab and i rubbed her legs and thighs as she looked at me kissing me as i stroked her thighs she opened her legs saying yours is it at mine i kissed her rubbing her tits as she striped off saying fuck me now in bed i never knew she called my ex as she came round and as the door was open came in as i was licking her out my ex was sexy and stood fingering her cunt watching us i noticed her as she moaned as liz said it was her fantasy to see us ann asked if i enjoyed it as i stood up kissing her and fingerig her cunt saying yes as she asked if i fucked any other friends i said no |
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Is this story serious? I have no idea what the fuck is going on. The dialog is "she said I said" and the transition from one area to the next is confusing as fuck. I thought she wanted to be fucked in the cab... That is my review.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Be fair! He is from Glasgow!
And the criticisms are from someone who can't spell the word "sense".
Get a grip!"
Excuse me? Just because he is from Glasgow we should be fair to him for not being able to use punctuation and making a story make sense?
We should be fair if he suffers from dyslexia, or another learning condition, but not because of his geographical location, which is utterly irrelevant.
How would you like it if I made a criticism of you based on the simple fact of you being based in Birmingham?
Let's not paint people with a brush simply because of the city they live in please! |
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If you're going to criticise someone's spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc, always an idea to make sure yours is perfect......I have a spelling obsession but wouldn't dream of correcting anyone and certainly not on here. It's the very definition of irony.
Fair play to anyone posting a story/fantasy on here. What happened to the adage "if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything"?
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Be fair! He is from Glasgow!
And the criticisms are from someone who can't spell the word "sense".
Get a grip!"
excuse me? How rasist is that comment!!!!
Shocking!!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"If you're going to criticise someone's spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc, always an idea to make sure yours is perfect......I have a spelling obsession but wouldn't dream of correcting anyone and certainly not on here. It's the very definition of irony.
Fair play to anyone posting a story/fantasy on here. What happened to the adage "if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything"?
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An ellipsis only comprises three periods and not six. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Be fair! He is from Glasgow!
And the criticisms are from someone who can't spell the word "sense".
Get a grip!excuse me? How rasist is that comment!!!!
Shocking!!!"
racist even ... Dam iphone |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Be fair! He is from Glasgow!
And the criticisms are from someone who can't spell the word "sense".
Get a grip!"
What has OP being from Glasgow got to do with anything? Unnecessary remark if you ask me.  |
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