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"could i just not submit some of my earlier work? "As long as its 500 words mate. | |||
"Nice one, glad this has attracted some interest. Looking forward to seeing submissions on this thread. " Will get my horny head on and start it now! | |||
 . Anyway let's see if I can write something good
It was an average day at work in the gym, being a 26yr old personal trainer sometimes had it's perks but today wasn't one of them. I split my time between the gym and home visits and as I was seeing a new client at around midday I was just having a steady morning workout. After showering and a quick change of clothes I popped in the car and made my way to Sally's house. We spoken on the phone to arrange her first appointment she seemed nice and friendly and I always looked forward to meeting new clients.
I arrived knocked on the door and waited patiently, Sally answered to door and welcomed me in she was early to mid 40's short brown hair with a large but curvaceous figure and very large breasts. We made our way into the living room seeing as this was our first session we would just chat about what she wanted to achieve and do some small exercises. Sally explained that she wanted to loose some weight and get healthier she then joked about maybe even attracting a toy I laughed along and said I could defiantly help her out, I started the workout by having Sally do some stretches she wasn't really dressed properly for doing anything major, as Sally went thru the stretches I'd showed her I stood and watched she was wearing a loose fitting low cut top as she bent forward I could see her incredible boobs hanging loose so smooth and soft as Sally looked up she caught me glaring down her top I quickly looked away but it was clear that she's seen me I'd didn't know what to say or where to look Sally interrupted the awkward silence by asking me to check her posture from behind, I moved around her putting a gentle hand on the small of her back as I did she pushed herself backwards brushing my cock with her arse, she turned her eyes fixed directly on my croch my baggy jogging bottoms barely hiding my growing cock as it pressed against the fabric. Sally turned dropped to her knees and yanked down my trousers exposing my ever growing cock without saying a word she took me in her mouth sucking and slurping on my ever growing cock moaning as she worked me from base to tip I'd never been so turned on, as she stopped to take a breath I stood her up removing her top and exposing her huge beautiful breasts her nipples getting harder as I circled them with my fingers I took her nipple in my mouth licking and sucking as she moaned with pleasure I moved my hand down slipping it inside her leggings I could feel her wet pussy thru her underwear moving her knickers to the side using my fingers I played with her clit circling and rubbing as my mouth went wild on her tits, moving my hand down I slipped a finger in her pussy she gasped I started slowly moving in and out she was so wet I slid another finger in as she moaned and groaned in ecstasy, working my mouth down from her boobs my tongue ached to join my fingers and taste her sweet pussy I removed her leggings and underwear sat her down and spread her legs going to work on her clit licking sucking probing with my tongue eating every inch of her until she could take no more I pushed my face down harder as she screamed she was cumming writhing and grinding on my face. As Sally caught her breath I stood removing my remaining clothes my 8' cock oozing precum I knelt down easing my throbbing cock into Sally's soaking pussy starting slow I began thrusting in and out harder Sally shouted as I fucked her fast and deep I'm cumming IM CUMMING!! Sally screamed as she came all over my cock I knew I was close so I didn't stop I let out a moan that I was cumming "I want it on my tits" with that I pulled out shooting my hot creamy load all over her belly and her boobs. exhausted we both collapsed on each other in pure ecstasy.
After gathering ourselves and a bit of cleaning up we kissed and I arranged our next workout. I can't wait till next time  .
Sorry if A as I said the punctuation/grammar is shit and B it's not any good. This is the first time I've ever wrote anything like this. Hope people enjoy it xx | |||
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"500 is way too easy. Capturing an erotic moment in 50 or 100 words is hard!" Who said it had to be a moment? | |||
its 499 words .
Coffee, oranges, heat, sweat, passion….these smells mingle to create an erotic ambience in the room. A bead of perspiration funnels between my breasts and powerless because my arms are secured above my head it makes its way slowly down unchecked. Intoxicated by lust my head falls forward hair surrounding my face …. I wait for your return, body wanting, aching for your attention, stimulated by your touch, soft and rough for hours, allowed no release….
Was it hours, minutes? Soft footfall behind me warns of your approach, cool hands on my burning skin, warm lips on my neck, back, ears, fingers in my most secret places, your voice whispers sweet in my ear “what now Lou?, what now?” my only response a low and guttural moan. You step away and again I hear then feel the swish and strike of leather against my skin bringing blood singing to the surface leaving stimulated nerve endings asking for more..breasts, legs, pussy, bum again and again and at the edge of wanting no more…you stop…caress the tender places with lips and hands, soothe the sting to pleasure, cool the heat.
Loosening my ties you carry me to the bed, I wrap myself around you trying to absorb you into me, wanting every fibre of you to possess me as I am possessing you. Dropping to my knees my tongue circles the head of your cock, I run it up and down the length of your hardness moaning with pleasure before taking it slowly into my mouth shallow at first then deep, deeper until I feel it at the back of my throat holding it there looking into your eyes before pulling slowly back then taking it down again. You hold my head in place controlling my movements keeping me there a split second longer than I thought possible before allowing me to move back and catch my breath, my fingers find my swollen and desperate clit and begin to circle and rub in time with your cocks movement in and out of my throat, my eyes never leave yours.
Every part of me cries out to be fucked as if you sense my need you stop and slowly pulling your cock from my mouth guide me to my feet I lean forward hands on the bed, legs apart and wait to feel you inside me, nudging at my pussy your cock teases me entering me an inch and drawing back, I push my hips back to meet it but you pull back at the same time, I start to ask, beg you to fill me, fuck me and finally you do, gently at first, delicately building a rhythm entering me up to the hilt and withdrawing almost completely deliberately, steadily, increasing your pace as I buck my hips in time with yours I hold off cumming until I’m sure you’re nearly there and the sensation of my pussy tightening as I reach my shattering climax sends you over the edge to yours.
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"Here's my contribution its 499 words .
Coffee, oranges, heat, sweat, passion….these smells mingle to create an erotic ambience in the room. A bead of perspiration funnels between my breasts and powerless because my arms are secured above my head it makes its way slowly down unchecked. Intoxicated by lust my head falls forward hair surrounding my face …. I wait for your return, body wanting, aching for your attention, stimulated by your touch, soft and rough for hours, allowed no release….
Was it hours, minutes? Soft footfall behind me warns of your approach, cool hands on my burning skin, warm lips on my neck, back, ears, fingers in my most secret places, your voice whispers sweet in my ear “what now Lou?, what now?” my only response a low and guttural moan. You step away and again I hear then feel the swish and strike of leather against my skin bringing blood singing to the surface leaving stimulated nerve endings asking for more..breasts, legs, pussy, bum again and again and at the edge of wanting no more…you stop…caress the tender places with lips and hands, soothe the sting to pleasure, cool the heat.
Loosening my ties you carry me to the bed, I wrap myself around you trying to absorb you into me, wanting every fibre of you to possess me as I am possessing you. Dropping to my knees my tongue circles the head of your cock, I run it up and down the length of your hardness moaning with pleasure before taking it slowly into my mouth shallow at first then deep, deeper until I feel it at the back of my throat holding it there looking into your eyes before pulling slowly back then taking it down again. You hold my head in place controlling my movements keeping me there a split second longer than I thought possible before allowing me to move back and catch my breath, my fingers find my swollen and desperate clit and begin to circle and rub in time with your cocks movement in and out of my throat, my eyes never leave yours.
Every part of me cries out to be fucked as if you sense my need you stop and slowly pulling your cock from my mouth guide me to my feet I lean forward hands on the bed, legs apart and wait to feel you inside me, nudging at my pussy your cock teases me entering me an inch and drawing back, I push my hips back to meet it but you pull back at the same time, I start to ask, beg you to fill me, fuck me and finally you do, gently at first, delicately building a rhythm entering me up to the hilt and withdrawing almost completely deliberately, steadily, increasing your pace as I buck my hips in time with yours I hold off cumming until I’m sure you’re nearly there and the sensation of my pussy tightening as I reach my shattering climax sends you over the edge to yours.
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"After I booked us into the Italian you mentioned you said you had a surprise for me waiting, we both met up and I saw you from across the bar you had red heels on very tall and a white figure hugging dress you look amazing clutching your little purse and your hair curled we walk to the bar and order drinks, then after a few we sit down to eat the night goes well it was almost summer and there sky was still light after 8, after we eat we walk across the street and try a few more drinks then decide to head back the hotel, it's a short walk and as we pace through the streets laughing and flirting the heavens open, we are both drenched it's warm rain as your dress becomes see thru the more it's saturated, we make it the to lobby and both laugh as we head up to the lift, people staring as our d*unken wet antics as you stumble to walk on the heels you have once in the lift I place my hand on your hip and one on you face pulling you into me kissing you full on the lips the rain from your hair dripping down my forehead and into our mouths as we clash tongues your arms on my shoulders as I struggle to let go you feel my bulge in my pants as you push a leg into me, slightly lifting it bing our floor 12, you walk into the room music playing my hands on your hips and the fire is lit champagne cooling in the ice bucket as requested, I pop the bottle and stand by the tall windows over looking the river the rain now bouncing over them, as you emerge from the bathroom wearing the same red heels I'd be thinking about all night, along with a dark bodystocking, your hair flowing and still slightly wet as you approach me you see my cock pushing againts the front of my pants as your nipples harden and poke through the fish net piece, I give you the glass and gulp at mine I'm in awe at your body, the moon light pushing the clouds away as the rain furiously hits the windows we are next too, I pull you in and kiss you hard on the flips as drink most of your glass leaving a small amoiynt you push a finger against my lips moving me back to arms lengthy as I take my shift off then with the little champagne you have left you lift it up just above your head and lean back pouring the bubbles over your boobs making them glisten in the fire light, then you place hand on my head and pull me down to your boobs I suck and lick at your nipples, teasing and tasting the champagne on then as you moan out then I push you back onto the chaise lounge just feet away from the log burning fire, I start sucking your nipples again through the mesh, teasing one and holding my hands cupping them as you lean back forcing them out more I pull on the materiel tearing it as I climb on your my short open now and my body pressed against yours hands on your face as I kiss you hard again our tongue twisting around each other I push your hands back and kiss your neck my hands wander Down your body over your hips as I lift your legs up you lie back more watching me kiss and tease your thighs kissing them biting them ripping the fish net around your glistining pussy, just as I go to take my tongue all over your swollen clit you place a Hand on my head and stop me push against my chest with your sexy red heel and pour a glass of champagne then you pour some down your naval as it drips down over your already wet pussy and in one action you lean back again and move your leg saying continue it sends me wild I lick and tease your pussy furiously my tongue whips across it as I taste your juices and the sweet champagne mixing the more I lick I lift your legs up sliding my tongue all over sucking your clit as you moan out your cumming I push down hard cover your clit with my mouth, as I lick more and more till you moan out almost louder than the music playing, u grab hair and pull me lifting your legs and arching your back as your body buckles with each moan you cum that little more and I wait with my face buried between your squeezed legs as you slowly release me gathering your composure you stand up, and push me into the couch pulling my shirt off and kissing my chest, you undo my pants and see my cock straining to come dropping to your knees you pull then down leaving me in black shorts your hands run up my body and down again lifting my boxers from the top, pulling then down and over my hard cock as it pops out above the waist line you push my head back and look into my blue eyes, then in one motion your eyes never leave mine as you suck me not deep at first just enough to keep eye contact as your tongue slides over my cock then deeper and deeper you go pulling down at the same time I close my eyes and lay back it feels amazing your glossy red lips teasing me and your big boobs leaning against my balls and legs you look me in the eye more as you tease me licking me all over then I pull your hands you climb on me lowering your pussy inch by inch down my hard cock, as yuk place your hands on my neck and let out little moans, my cock now filling you deep as I cup your boobs ripping you a bit more as I pull you in feel your hand behind my head clasping me as I lick and suck each nipple fairly, I grab your ass and lift you up and down as you start to moan out again, my cock now easily sliding in and out of you, my hands on your ass and we now kissing hard passionately again you stop and rest your forehead against my bouncing on my cock the rain still crashing the windows as the fire breaks down the logs, the music softly playing in the back ground you moan out more and more I close my eyes and lean back forcing my hips up so I can be as deep as ever inside you I feel my cock about to explode as I lift up and move you to the chaise lounge as I grab a leg lifting it high up I start to fuck you deeper and hard your really wet now and my other hands trailing a the kids marks on your body where I left little bites I pull you behind the neck so I can kiss you as you bite my lip and tell me your cumming, I am too we kiss hard just feet from the window as we both cum at the same time my head now against yours as I pant in rhythm with you my body shaking as yours trembles under me.... 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"Some fantastic entries so far. Shall we say closing date is next Saturday 15 Feb? Winner will be announced at the end of voting. " Sounds good. Don't mind if I win this is the first thing I've ever done like this. As long as people enjoyed it I'm happy | |||
"500 is way too easy. Capturing an erotic moment in 50 or 100 words is hard!" | |||
"Please excuse my terrible spelling and grammar I've got a rare type of dyslexia some things just don't compute . Anyway let's see if I can write something good
It was an average day at work in the gym, being a 26yr old personal trainer sometimes had it's perks but today wasn't one of them. I split my time between the gym and home visits and as I was seeing a new client at around midday I was just having a steady morning workout.
Hope people enjoy it xx"Yes I did enjoy it and your spelling was spot on .
Didn't quote it all to save space. | |||
"500 is way too easy. Capturing an erotic moment in 50 or 100 words is hard! "I don't get the point of this post. If you think this is too easy why not start a thread asking people to write a 50 or 100 word piece? | |||
"Some fantastic entries so far. Shall we say closing date is next Saturday 15 Feb? Winner will be announced at the end of voting. " That's fine by me. | |||
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"Well up for this, what a good idea! I'll be back with my entry once I've had a think x" Nice one x | |||
"500 is way too easy. Capturing an erotic moment in 50 or 100 words is hard!
I don't get the point of this post. If you think this is too easy why not start a thread asking people to write a 50 or 100 word piece?"Yeah, I kinda thought that | |||
"Please excuse my terrible spelling and grammar I've got a rare type of dyslexia some things just don't compute . Anyway let's see if I can write something good
It was an average day at work in the gym, being a 26yr old personal trainer sometimes had it's perks but today wasn't one of them. I split my time between the gym and home visits and as I was seeing a new client at around midday I was just having a steady morning workout.
Hope people enjoy it xx
Yes I did enjoy it and your spelling was spot on .
Didn't quote it all to save space."Thanks | |||
"500 is way too easy. Capturing an erotic moment in 50 or 100 words is hard!
I don't get the point of this post. If you think this is too easy why not start a thread asking people to write a 50 or 100 word piece?"Agreed | |||
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It was during my second dance of the night that I clocked him.
Friday evening at Secrets was playing out in its usual way; the club was heaving with its mix of inebriated stag dos and city traders finishing the working week. The resident DJ was mixing old-school hiphop, bass ramped up so you could feel it thumping in your ribcage. The air was thick with dry ice and a hundred different club smells, and I was surveying the room from the top of the dance pole, my place of work for the past 6 months.
Ray had started as a barman in the club two nights previous, and I knew he would be trouble from the start. He had an athlete’s body, perfectly toned arms and a rock hard chest that stretched out his black tank top. From the moment he’d stepped behind the bar, I’d had… inappropriate thoughts about those hands, and that mouth, where I’d like it to touch, kiss, lick…
I slowly eased down the pole, gazing around the room, and noticed Ray had slunk away to a dark corner. His eyes were transfixed on me. I began to dance only for him, grinding the pole and stroking up and down my body, making sure he could enjoy every inch of it. I started to imagine what fucking him would be like, and I could feel my pussy starting to ache. He kept watching.
By the time my dance finished, I’d decided to take him up on his silent invitation. I grabbed my things and strode right past him to the cellar. I didn’t need to wait long until he appeared. Without saying anything, he pushed me against the cold cellar wall and his mouth was on mine, his hands grabbing at my ass. I knew we didn’t have much time, which heightened the intensity. His tongue licked down my stomach, tasting my sweat and perfume. He yanked my knickers aside and started flicking his tongue across my clit, slowly at first, then more urgently. I came almost instantly, waves of pleasure that almost had me seeing stars. He stood up and I saw he already had his trousers unzipped. His cock tasted warm and salty, and as he drove it into the back of my throat, bringing tears to my eyes, I could feel he was ready to come. I stood up and bent over some boxes, presenting my ass to him. He thrust his cock deep into my soaked pussy over and over, and I couldn’t help moaning as I reached my climax again. He leant over me, and with a final grunt bit his teeth deep into my shoulder. Thankfully the music was still pumping, so nobody heard my final orgasmic scream.
After we'd recovered, I turned to face him. He still said nothing, just gave me a sly smile that promised more, kissed the bite mark on my shoulder and stalked out, picking up a champagne crate as he left.
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"Happy Valentines Day everyone! Heres my story for the challenge. 499 words at my last count
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It was during my second dance of the night that I clocked him.
Friday evening at Secrets was playing out in its usual way; the club was heaving with its mix of inebriated stag dos and city traders finishing the working week. The resident DJ was mixing old-school hiphop, bass ramped up so you could feel it thumping in your ribcage. The air was thick with dry ice and a hundred different club smells, and I was surveying the room from the top of the dance pole, my place of work for the past 6 months.
Ray had started as a barman in the club two nights previous, and I knew he would be trouble from the start. He had an athlete’s body, perfectly toned arms and a rock hard chest that stretched out his black tank top. From the moment he’d stepped behind the bar, I’d had… inappropriate thoughts about those hands, and that mouth, where I’d like it to touch, kiss, lick…
I slowly eased down the pole, gazing around the room, and noticed Ray had slunk away to a dark corner. His eyes were transfixed on me. I began to dance only for him, grinding the pole and stroking up and down my body, making sure he could enjoy every inch of it. I started to imagine what fucking him would be like, and I could feel my pussy starting to ache. He kept watching.
By the time my dance finished, I’d decided to take him up on his silent invitation. I grabbed my things and strode right past him to the cellar. I didn’t need to wait long until he appeared. Without saying anything, he pushed me against the cold cellar wall and his mouth was on mine, his hands grabbing at my ass. I knew we didn’t have much time, which heightened the intensity. His tongue licked down my stomach, tasting my sweat and perfume. He yanked my knickers aside and started flicking his tongue across my clit, slowly at first, then more urgently. I came almost instantly, waves of pleasure that almost had me seeing stars. He stood up and I saw he already had his trousers unzipped. His cock tasted warm and salty, and as he drove it into the back of my throat, bringing tears to my eyes, I could feel he was ready to come. I stood up and bent over some boxes, presenting my ass to him. He thrust his cock deep into my soaked pussy over and over, and I couldn’t help moaning as I reached my climax again. He leant over me, and with a final grunt bit his teeth deep into my shoulder. Thankfully the music was still pumping, so nobody heard my final orgasmic scream.
After we'd recovered, I turned to face him. He still said nothing, just gave me a sly smile that promised more, kissed the bite mark on my shoulder and stalked out, picking up a champagne crate as he left.
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