Your insight is excellent. Western men (I'm not British myself) don't tend to have that so we can't write such a story with any degree of authenticity.
I'd add that you're sensibly keeping the updates tight, making them more easy to read for those on mobiles or who have only a few minutes at lunch or break to have a quick read. That's really good for Fab and you could always post a more expansive version on Literotica (if you had the time or inclination)
I have a few ideas as to how the story might progress but it's your story so I'm looking forward to the next segment, while fabbing your gallery of course
"Although Smith loves Wendy, his relationship is more akin to treating her as a prize that others will envy him for. Wendy is a loyal wife to Smith, even if the attraction isn’t really there from her side anymore. The chemistry between her and Ash however is very clear.
He’s a handsome, charming and confident dark skinned man. As the top recruit of one of India’s most esteemed paramilitary forces, Smith was initially keen to employ Ash as the “best of the best” security chief for him and his beloved wife.
Wendy is the quintessential English rose, albeit with a spark in her blueish, green eyes. She’s petite with beautiful, dainty hands and feet and what many would describe as perfectly proportioned, pert breasts and bottom. She’s an object of desire by many men, but especially in the Indian sub-continent, who see her fair complexion and thick, long blonde hair as particular appealing and a rare site in that region.
Aside from her sexual appeal, Wendy has a kindness and humility that makes even the most distrusting villagers warm to her. She also befriends a local Indian girl Priyanka, who quickly becomes a friend and confidant who Wendy can trust and ask for advice from.
Smith senses the attraction between Ash and Wendy and it is something he resents. He would have replaced Ash in a heartbeat, but he begrudgingly acknowledges that Ash is excellent at what he does and genuinely provides a high level of safety for the married couple. He sees this as a priority over any perceived insecurities he may have with having Ash so entwined in their private life. It’s also not like Agent Smith is faithful. Unbeknownst to Wendy, Agent Smith has paid for sex with young Indian girls in the local brothels. Who he describes insultingly as his “dusky whores”.
Unlike her husband, Wendy is a likeable person and despite her obvious attraction to Ash, faithful to Captain Smith. With this said, it was hard to disguise her sexual pull towards Ash, ever since Smith introduced him to her in his security role.
Ash provides security to the couple, but in reality his priority is to safeguard Wendy, as much of the day at least Smith is at work, where his security needs are handled there.
Initially Wendy tries to disguise her attraction to Ash, but she can only bottle up her desires for so long. It doesn’t help the fact that Ash, as well as being a fine specimen of an Indian man, is more confident and assertive than the average local and not as demure in displaying his lust for her…
How am I doing? Any of the storylines I should go into more detail in before the inevitable?!"
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