So I’ve been playing around with the idea of some poetry style erotica, and before I throw too much time in to it, I just thought I’d get some opinions.
So the next bit is just a rough draft… please let me know what you think!
whispering “this is mine” i flex my grip on your chest, you look to my hand realising i mean your heart. It beats a little faster as you blush in fluster
I kiss your neck and feel you tremble at the knees weakening, you may have lost standing if not for the firm grip upon your hip and the warm hand around your ribs feeling your heart beat ever increasing with each kiss lowering your head at a slight tilt
Like blossom with the summer ending wilt,the kiss upon your collar. The hand that had your hip bone pressed into my palm moves around to your lower back pulling you closer as i take a step back! |
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