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By *ave0070 OP Man 41 weeks ago
Sleaford |
My wife was out having a girly afternoon with her friends and I stayed at home on my own and was having a drink and watching TV and round about eight o'clock she came back with two women that I've never met before and she said that she had met them in the pub and got on really well with them and invited them round to meet me and have a drink at ours they introduced them selves one was called Tammy and the other one was called sally they were both really attractive and had gorgeous bodies with fantastic tits and sexy arses and they were both in there early thirties we all sat in the living room together chatting and drinking and having a laugh and I asked them how long they have lived round here and they said they have only just moved here from Liverpool and was living together until Tammy could find a place of her own then my wife Julie asked why they wanted to leave Liverpool and they said they wanted to get away because they wanted to meet some nice friendly people because a lot of people were not very nice to them where they lived before and I said wow that sounds horrible for you both and very strange because they were both complete stunners and they said that you for saying that but it's probably because we are both a bit different and they didn't like it so I said that they don't look any different from any other women to me and Julie agreed with me then Tammy said that we both seem like a lovely couple and hopefully you will understand what I'm about to tell you both then proceeds to tell us that they are both transexual women and have both got cocks and balls but other than that they are just like any other women and my wife just said that it doesn't matter one bit about that to her at all and she is so happy that they trust us both enough to share it with us and then sally looks at me and says you have gone quiet Dave have we made you feel uncomfortable saying that and i said of corse not it was a bit of a shock thats all and its hard to get my head round it because your both absolutely gorgeous and I would of never guessed that about you both and I've never met anyone like the pair of you before but I can tell you with all honesty that it doesn't bother me in anyway what's so ever then Julie say's i told you both that he's a good bloke and you would get on with him and Tammy said I'm so glad that we have met you both and hopefully we can all become good friends with eachother and me and Julie said that we would really like that chapter two tomorrow if you enjoyed this . |
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By *amesB66Man 41 weeks ago
St Peter Port |
"That was a bit difficult to read,. I'm very sorry that it was hard to read but I'm not very good with punctuation but I will try my best with the next chapter for you "
Thanks, Dave. Interesting start. Just stick a full stop where you naturally draw breath. |
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"That was a bit difficult to read,. I'm very sorry that it was hard to read but I'm not very good with punctuation but I will try my best with the next chapter for you "
Thanks for the story so far. I hope you take it constructively, but breaking it down into paragraphs would make it easier to read. Punctuation in general seemed fine to me.
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Lack of punctuation doesn't detract.
And actually, a decent level of reading comprehension enables you to know where punctuation should be placed, making reading it as easy as if it was fully punctuated.
Keep it up OP, it's a good intro to the story. |
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"Lack of punctuation doesn't detract.
And actually, a decent level of reading comprehension enables you to know where punctuation should be placed, making reading it as easy as if it was fully punctuated.
Keep it up OP, it's a good intro to the story."
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I hope the OP hasnt decided not to bother after being given the usual shit from the punctuation police. This isnt The Times writing competition and most of us are really enjoying it. If the punctuation police dont like it, could I ask them to leave the thread and find one that suits their OCD minds. You do not have the right to comment on punctuation. Nobody does |
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