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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Bit rusty with the old erotica so thought I'd try a bit of free writing on you lovely guys and girls. Don't hold back on the comments, I'm thick skinned.
...She parted her legs enough to allow his trail of soft kisses to work their way up the inside of her legs to the top of her thigh. She could feel the warmth of his breath on her pussy lips as his lips hovered next to her sweet spot. She knew if she reached down to pull his mouth onto her he would pull away. She had to wait for it, wait for the feeling of his tongue on her clit, which was now throbbing for attention. She tried her luck by arching her hips up towards him but he moved just out of reach. She grabbed one of her breasts and pinched her nipple hard so the pain would give her temporary relief from the longing she had to feel his tongue on her cunt. Then it happened, a long warm lick from the entrance of her honey pot all the way up to the tip of her clit. He lapped at her with a fierce hunger that she had been longing for. The shivers of pleasure pulsed out from her pussy to the tips of her fingers as she contuined to massage her breasts. His hands held on to her hips and he hungrily lapped her juices up. His thirst for her fuck oil drove her wild and she could feel her first orgasm building up, ready to be released from her now aching clit. He know this and held her hips down so he could ride the wave of pleasure when it came. With one last lick he sucked on her clit hard, his teeth gently pressed against the hood of her sweet spot and it was enough to make her cum hard. She dug her nails into his shoulders and he lapped at her soaking cunt as the bolts of pleasure shot through her body. The sensation almost too intense to handle as he kept the pressure on the source of her orgasm. She screamed in ecstasy as he controlled her with his tongue. She was his and she loved it.
Sorry in advance for any typos but if I read back though it I'll only end up changing parts and was meant to be a free writing piece.
Let me know what you think, still rusty but hoping that help get back on form!
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It's good stuff ... BUT I need my erotica to be in context. Just a graphic description of the act isn't enough to get me going. What was the relationship between them? Boss / secretary? Builder / client? What's the story? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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Thanks for the comments guys. I know the C can be a big turn off for some but others love it so was trying to cover all bases. As for the context, could not agree more. But was no prep for this and more a case of kicking my own ass into writing again. If anyone has any requests for longer pieces, please feel free to msg me and I'd love to work on something for you. |
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