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"Just 3 people. Thats disappointing.
I will go write it else where.
Enjoy the other stories written by other guys"
Wow I think we were all enjoying your story until you started acting like a spoiled brat. You asked if you should continue and three people said yes, it was no Booker prize winner but it was a decent read. I think that now you should go elswhere and write it becuse you have totally alienated everyone on here. |
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"Just 3 people. Thats disappointing.
I will go write it else where.
Enjoy the other stories written by other guys
Wow I think we were all enjoying your story until you started acting like a spoiled brat. You asked if you should continue and three people said yes, it was no Booker prize winner but it was a decent read. I think that now you should go elswhere and write it becuse you have totally alienated everyone on here."
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What is wrong with the story tellers on here.... Seems that some of them, their egos are bigger than them... If you are going to write then do it.... Don't keep asking if you need to continue, like the guy said its not a Booker prize winner... Its a STORY |
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Sorry if it sounded i was on an ego trip. Wasnt the case. If you look at the story i had hardly any comments just thumbs up. If i am taking hours writing a story it would be good to get more feedback. So appologies |
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By *imbo100Man
over a year ago
Worcester |
I think this particular author is one of the best on here and actually runs his stories to conclusion. I understand what he means when spending time writing them and keeping them interesting he needs feedback, as after all he’s doing it for nothing but thanks!
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"Sorry if it sounded i was on an ego trip. Wasnt the case. If you look at the story i had hardly any comments just thumbs up. If i am taking hours writing a story it would be good to get more feedback. So appologies "
The thumbs up are generally two fold, one to say “this is good” and 2 to book mark the thread to ensure it doesn’t get lost in the forums, what would be great but won’t happen as the platform this forum is on won’t allow it would be for a notification when the OP posts again that way people would post a comment but not repeatedly give a smile or thumbs up
Keep going it was a hot story |
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As i drove to the restaurant i held my wifes hand i looked in the rear mirror and saw paula and Gary holding hands tightly. We were all nervous. We arrived and were seated at the restaurant. A round table that seated 6. Paula sat beside me, i could smell her fragrance and she was in touching distance. Lesley sat kind of opposite me with Gary close next to her. We ordered wine and looked at the menu. We chatted nervously until our food came. I was worse than useless my nerves kicking in but i could see my wife moving kind of shuffling on her chair. As i chatted to the beautiful Paula i pretended to drop my knife. Ad i bent under the table i could zee my wifes stocking clad legs some what apart her dress was pulled up high around her thighs. I vould see Garys hand stroking her bare thighs above her stocking tops. The side of his hand was rubbing her pussy through her lace panties. The dirty bastard was doing to my wife what i wanted to do to his.i dat up straight looked my wife in the wyes and placed my hand on Paulas stocking clad knee. No resistance, she didnt pull away. I slid my hand gugher until i could feel her bare thigh. I looked around the restaurant to make sure none of us were making a scene. Eventually my hand reached higher until i too could feel a warm moist pussy. PAULA gasped as i rubbed her pussythrough her silky panties.
So both guys were rubbing wet horny pussys until we decided that dinner was getting in the way. I asked for a doggy bag and left to get into my car. We all stopped at the car, i held Paula and kissed her like a man possessed deep gungry kiss and she kissed me back. We eventually pulled back and watched Gary kissing Lesley deep and hard, his hands exploring her peachy ass. They saw us watching and pulled away. Lesley and Gary got in the back and Paula sat next to me in the front. It wasnt long before my hand was under her skirt rubbing herpussy. She lifted her hips and pushed against my hand. As i drove carefully towards hime i could see in the mirror the 2 in the back kissing hard, i looked over my shoulder and Gary was fingering my wife hard. She was rubbing his hard cick through his trousers. I pulled up at the garage, i needed some fuel. I got out and just put £10 in. I quickly paid for it but when i fot back to the car my wife had lent forward between the front seats. She was kissing paula hard and deep as Gary played with her ass. I got in. For godd sake we will get arrested i said. I was slightly embarrassed by my wifes wanton actions.they stopped kissing anf i drove the last few miles home with a painful erection
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We walked into our house arms around each other not caring if the neighbours were watching. As soon as we got in the lounge les sat on the chair with Gary kneeling between her legs, they were kissing with wild abandonment hands all over each other. He had her dress up around her waist and was fingering her hard. She was breathing hard and i could tell she was about to come. I sat in front of Paula, pulled her silky panties to one side and plundged 2 fingers deep inside her. I kissed her as her pussy tightened and she orgasmed. I undid my trousers and pulled my hard cock out, rubbing it as i knelt tall in front of Paula, just inches away from her wet greedy pussy. I looked over, Gary was making a great job of eating my wife out. I could hear her orgasm again and again. I pulled a condom out of my pocket and put it on, in one movement i pushed my hard cock inside her. Gary sat straight
And did the dame as me. Condom on, les looked at me and i nodded my approval. Gary did the same ro Paula as i started to fuck her hard. She was crying out in orgasm. This was beyond my wildest fantasy fucking a beautiful stranger watchibg my wife being fucked. After a while we both pulled out, i took my condom off and spunked hard covering her mound. Gary spunked all over my wifes bare thighs. Round one had just finished. I went upstairs and got a quilt and laid it on the floor. The girls slid off the chairs and laid down together, kissing. |
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I as on the chair naked looking down at the girls. Gary was naked sitting on the sofa, the girls were having a great time, naked but for stockings my wife lay on top of Paula, kissing her deeply hands exploring Paulas pert breasts. I watched in ore as my wifes hand snaked between Paulas legs, her fingers opening her pussy to my gaze. My cock started to get hard again as i watched Lesleys finger enter Paulas pussy knuckle deep. Two beautiful mostly naked women making love right by us guys. Lesley started kissing Paulas neck, sliding down to her erect nipples taking them into her mouth one by one, her finger still deep inside her.Paula opened her eyes as she orgasmed, she loiked directly at me as she came hard. Lesley kissed all the way down Paulas sexy young body until her head was between her thighs. She started lapping at her pussy and clit the same way she had done to Racheal a week or so ago.Paula gripped my wifes hair making sure she could grind her pussy onto her eager mouth and tongue.Gary stood up and knelt behind Lesley. Gripping her gips he started fucking my wife, she didnt miss a lick as she tongued Paula to orgasm.
Lesley changed position so the girls were in a 69, Gary still fucking my wife. I knelt between Paulas thighs, lifted her soft bum up pushing her mound harder into my wifes slutty mouth. She was moaning loudly as Gary hit the spot with his hard cock. I lifted Lesleys head out of the way by gripping her hair and entered Paulas smooth pussy. She was lovely and warm and wet. I fucked her hard. The site of two beautiful women licking each others pussys and being fucked by us guys lasted for what seemed an age. I used my finger on Paulas tight ass pushing knuckle deep. She came hard. Gary was fucking Lesley like a demon both guys ramming hard into the girls. We both pulled out and spunjed on them again.
Slowly we untangled and one by one we had a shower. It was late, the girls sitting in silky dressing gowns and Gary and i just sitting in boxers all of us with a glass of wine.
The conversation was easy now all the nerves had gone. Eventually we showed them to their bedrooms and we went to ours totally satiated. |
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Morning came, my wife wasnt next to me, i could hear noises coming from the second bedroom, i walked along the hall, the door was open lesley was once again licking Paulas pussy. She was wanking Gary at the same time fuck sake my wife is showing her slut side, i watched the action wanking i walked towardsPaulas mouth and she eagerly sucked my cock until i saw Garys spunk exit his cock onto my wifes hand. I massaged Paulas breasts until i spunked in her mouth. Breakfast i suggested Paula has just had hers said Gary.we had breakfast got dressed and promised to meet again.
The end. I hope you enjoyed it  |
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"Morning came, my wife wasnt next to me, i could hear noises coming from the second bedroom, i walked along the hall, the door was open lesley was once again licking Paulas pussy. She was wanking Gary at the same time fuck sake my wife is showing her slut side, i watched the action wanking i walked towardsPaulas mouth and she eagerly sucked my cock until i saw Garys spunk exit his cock onto my wifes hand. I massaged Paulas breasts until i spunked in her mouth. Breakfast i suggested Paula has just had hers said Gary.we had breakfast got dressed and promised to meet again.
The end. I hope you enjoyed it "
Great story, I think there was a misunderstanding earlier, often when stories start, the thread is inundated with comments and bookmarks which quickly overfill the thread. For this reason most people prefer to sit quietly until the end and then voice our appreciation. I am glad you restarted it was definitely worth it and I look forward to more.
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Thanks for that..... more please 