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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Emma had worked hard all her life and despite being divorced in her late 20s she had managed to live a good life,her only failure was her spoilt son Oliver hed been in and out of work since he left school macdonalds had fired him so had Morrisons,homemase and Greggs .

She was tired of covering his debts and aftef his latest job let him go she went mad.

SO OLIVER how do u intend to pay your debts and cover your rent she challenged him

I don't knoe mummy was all he could say sheepishly.

Well im not bailing you out anymore she warned him as she slammed out of his room .

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By *ardnreddyMan  over a year ago

LIVINGSTON

Post the rest please

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

More would be nice ??

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By *az1Man  over a year ago

Birmingham

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

This was supposed to be????

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

The weeks passed and Oliver still didn't have work ,Emma was so annoyed at her only sons lack of respect she couldn't be bothered to talk to him ,while Oliver still lived rent free and ate all he wanted.

It was early one morning and Emma was in the shower and she was startled by some vicous banging on her door .

OlIVER GET THE DOOR she screamed ,why me he ??? moaned as he sulked out of his room and headed towards the door.

Emma heard some voices and her sloilt son scream .

Fuck sake moaned to herself wots he done now as she pulled on her robe and headed down stairs to investigate.

In the lounge she found her son pinned too the sofa by a heavily tattooed thug,while a second taller skinnier thug said to him.

Today is the day olliver mr bullsworth said pay up what you owe or get seriously hurt .

But but but I'm not working im skint stammered oliver.

Guess wot boy we dont care replied the skinny thug who looked at his colleague ok butch do it .

Butch nodded and reached into his pocked and pulled out a knuckle duster and slid it onto his tattooed hand .

Oliver started to cry mummy help me he whimpered as butch pulled back his heavily tattoed hand.

When emma said STOP in a strong and controlled voice .

Butch stopped as his mate turned to face emma .

How much does he owe she asked the skinny thug called slash he looked emma up and down a grand today.

Emma scoffed is that all he owes me 9 grand .

Well mummy u gonna pay it for your little shit he said nodding towards the sobbing oliver.

Please mummy begged oliver between sobs.

Emma stepped towards her pathetic son .you pathetic little user how do you owe these creeps so much money.

Hey Mrs thats a bit harsh were only doing our job said butch .

Emma looked at butch sorry hunni she said with a smile im just sick of it.

Please mummy pay them sobbed oliver SHUT UP emma butch and nigel all said at once.

Emma looked at slash i don't have a grand here do you take credit cards.

Slash laughed we ain't tesco miss cash or property .

Emma looked at oliver then back to slash i want to talk to mr bulllsworth .

Slash nodded and walked away he went outside to the car and a few mins later walked back in with two more men .

One of then a short tubby guy in his late 50s stepped forward nigel here tells me you want to see me ,please boss its slash in front of customers whispered slash/nigel.

Emma burst out laughing nigel well that's scary.

Bullsworth silenced her by holding up his hand.

What do you want he said slowly

My son owes u money he can't pay I dont have enough cash and u ain't hurting oliver or taking my stuff .

Mmmm said bullsworth so wot u suggesting said bullsworth as if he didn't really care .

We need to teach oliver a lesson without anyone getting hurt she said .

Agreed said bullsworth who looked at butch tie him up in a flash butch had tied oliver hands with cable ties .

So bullsworth sunk Bank on a sofa right mummy this is the only deal left fuck us all as he pulled out his cock.

Emma nodded and her robe slipped to floor agreed said emma .

NO MUMMY pleased oliver SHUT UP mummy and the gangsters shouted at once.

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By *imale38Man  over a year ago

Barnsley

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By *angtidy42Couple  over a year ago

Redditch

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By *ndyandMandyCouple  over a year ago

swansea

Nope not for us

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By *qyRMan  over a year ago

Torbay

Looking forward to the next chapter

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By *ornycoulpledoncasterCouple  over a year ago

doncaster

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By *cotFit4funMan  over a year ago

Kettering

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By *iscoman7771000Man  over a year ago

birmingham

Carry on

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By *irtyslag1000Woman  over a year ago

Darlington

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By *av501TV/TS  over a year ago

Scunthorpe

I miss Whizzer and Chips and the Beano and Dandy Summer specials ????????

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By *untimes-2022Man  over a year ago

Newcastle

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By *untimes-2022Man  over a year ago

Newcastle

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By *idethesausage2Man  over a year ago

Trowbridge

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By *eanasmustardMan  over a year ago

corby

Nice start

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By *iceguy12345678Man  over a year ago

Fareham ish

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By *igkidexyMan  over a year ago

Dublin

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By *ardnreddyMan  over a year ago

LIVINGSTON

Getting better

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Bad Oliver...

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Nice

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Bullsworth pulled out his old cock right bitch he said in a bond villan voice im first suck on this .

Emma took no notice of her whimpering son as she started to suck him deep .

Mmmmm that right bitch take it he said as he pushed her head down and kept it there .

He looked across to his bodyguard hey angelo she's fucking good ,the tall Italian smiled as he stepped behind her and in one swift move ripped her thong free tossed it to butch .

Shut him up butch replied my pleasure as he shoved emma underwear into oliver mouth then wrapped the belt from her gown around his face.

With the new silence angelo pulled out his well groomed cock and without notice he rammed it into her pussy he looked at his boss hey boss she's enjoying it she really fucking wet.

Haha said bullsworth as he cum into emma mouth and he held her head there while she swallowed every drop.

Only then did he let go off her head as she gasped for fresh air the italian stud soon shot his load before being replaced by nigel .

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By *igkidexyMan  over a year ago

Dublin

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Barnsley

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Darlington

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cambridge

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By *iscoman7771000Man  over a year ago

birmingham

More please

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By *oukevCouple  over a year ago

Lancaster

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By *asyGent75Man  over a year ago

Doncaster South Yorkshire

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By *anteddeadoraliveMan  over a year ago

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Nice

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

So, what happened next ?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Bullsworth smiled up angelo get omar in here angelo.

The muscular italian smiled back as his boss before leaving.

Nigel pumped away in the gorgous Emma's pussy as he pumped his balls slapped her clit making her moan the noise excited nigel so much he exploded his cum into her he stepped back watching his cum leak out onto the sofa .

He turned to his mate wot do u think of that butch ,he asked his mate.

Butch nodded and put his arm around oliver neck like they was old mate s looks like mummy's having fun sonny he teased the spoilt son .

It was then omar walked in the 6ft 5inch black guy was a huge physical presence .

U wanted me boss he said in s deep African accent.

Yes omar replied bullsworth I got u a present he said nodding at a kneeling emma .

Omar grinned is gold teeth sparkled.

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By *asyGent75Man  over a year ago

Doncaster South Yorkshire

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manchester

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Crewe

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By *es for funMan  over a year ago

port talbot

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By *erry bull1Man  over a year ago

doncaster

Pity Oliver was nt getting it

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By *orny playmateMan  over a year ago

clydebank

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By *iscoman7771000Man  over a year ago

birmingham

More please

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Interesting

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By *easing_twoCouple  over a year ago

Bristol, Thornbury

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Dublin

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By *harlotteBrooke9TV/TS  over a year ago

Warwickshire

Great story so far x

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By *reyyaMan  over a year ago

North Yorkshire

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Bristol

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Darlington

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By *lirts.R.usCouple  over a year ago

lanarkshire

I would have let the son fuck the thugs lol

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By *onnaluvdollTV/TS  over a year ago

cork

More please. I think mummy will be corrupted to Crim cock

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By *attboy107Man  over a year ago

Near Bedford

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Emma was now kneeling surrounded by the 5 thugs while her spoilt son looked on tears streaming down his cheeks .

Omar pulled out his huge black cock in front of her ,making her eyes widen in either shock or excitement....you decide .

Emma looked at oliver all this is both our faults I've spoilt you all all your life and you contained being a mummy's boy I know hope this lesson will make a man of you.

And with that she gripped his huge black weapon and squeezed it into her mouth omar grabbed her head and fucked her face hard after a few moments he let go so a gasping emma could grab some air.

Butch by now had his small cock out wanking himself ,omar realising his pal had had no fun lift emma with ease and placed her on his tiny 5 inch cock with slid into emma now soaking pussy with ease as she rode butch she kissed him excitedly forgetting oliver was sat next to him ,she heard omars deep African voice nigel take her mouth ,and so the skinny thug knelt beside her and pulled her face towards him and thrust his cock into her throat.

It was then she heard bullworths cruel voice omar one hole left take it now .

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By *hor66Man  over a year ago

Clacton-on-Sea

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port talbot

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By *erry bull1Man  over a year ago

doncaster

Hot

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By *unburyguy71Man  over a year ago

Sunbury

Carry on

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By *ig daddy 1969Man  over a year ago

manchester

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Nice

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By *eachlife49Man  over a year ago

ocean

Getting better!!!

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Dublin

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By *lirts.R.usCouple  over a year ago

lanarkshire

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By *spotpleasurerMan  over a year ago

Norwich

Win win for everyone!

The guys get to fuck a sexy MILF.

She's enjoying it too judging from the moans.

And boy gets his debt cancelled without any harm except watching mummy get gangbanged.

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By *ob4fun4Man  over a year ago

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Kettering

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By *b1976Man  over a year ago

North East

Fabulous

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Excellent ??

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By *aseMan  over a year ago

Gourock

Poor.....

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Near Bedford

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Bristol

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chester

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close

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By *anteddeadoraliveMan  over a year ago

st helens

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peterborough

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Epsom

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By *un Bi couple yorkshireCouple  over a year ago

Doncaster

Good lesson

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

omar pulled Emma's pert arse cheeks apart and spat into her hole before taking his huge weapon and placing it slowly into her and slowly he essed it home.

Emma had no choice she had to stop riding and sucking as the black thug slid into her.

Omg yes panted not realising wot she was saying while oliver looked on in disbelief at his mummy.

Omar now started to ram harder and she moaned as he did before she returned to sucking nigel .

Nigel was the the first to cum as he exploded his load over her then butch who despite his massive frame made a girly wimper as he shot his load deep into her .

Omar now grabbed her hair and and pulled her back so her tits bounced into butchs face

A deep moan and Omar exploded into her virgin arse as he pulled out angelo replaced him as he slipped in on his friends cum and started to pump hard making her moan again.

Omar now pushed nigel to one side and slipped his still dripping cock into her mouth making her swallow another load.

He then pulled out seeing she had cum all over her face he held his cock near her as he passed over her face but rather than the panick he expected she opened her mouth and let it bounce out of mouth and down onto a not so happy butch underneath.

Angelo now cum again he pulled out again and watched his cum leak out with a smile he pulled her off butch and laid her back so her head rested on her sons lap as he passed over her now sore pussy

Guys time to said bullsworth stand up and all the thugs started to get ready.

Ok mummy you brought your son a month he said to Emma

But I thought I'd covered the debt asked a shocked emma .

No my girl u saved him from a serious beating he now owes 1300 that needs to be paid one month today .

With the thugs gone emma untied her loser son .

Now will u pay your fucking debts she hissed in anger.

I'll try mummy but emma had little faith as she noticed oliver hard on.

The end

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By *tanlee1512Man  over a year ago

Epsom

Great story.

Thank you for sharing that with us.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Needs to carry on .....

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Mmm could be a dark twist

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By *hereswallyMan  over a year ago

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By *ndrea54TV/TS  over a year ago

cambridge

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By *ottopcock9Man  over a year ago

Cumnock

There must be more this this!! Well written and definitely space for a part 2 a month later.

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By *igkidexyMan  over a year ago

Dublin

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Seems I should continue xxx

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Go on then

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By *iggers51Man  over a year ago

tamworth

Mmmmm yes doxx

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By *ucksguy2000Man  over a year ago

aylesbury

This has great potential for more x

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Seems I should continue xxx"

Most definitely, please do

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By *imale38Man  over a year ago

Barnsley

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

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By *lirts.R.usCouple  over a year ago

lanarkshire

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By *attboy107Man  over a year ago

Near Bedford

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

After his awful experience of watching his beloved mum get fucked by 5 thugs to save him from a beating ,oliver had landed two jobs and in three months had cleared his debts he ran home excited to tell his mum the good news .

As he walked in his front door he was met by loud moaning coming from his mums bedroom ,oliver just sighed surley it was mums boyfriend Tristan he was a school teacher and would still be at work .

So confused he sat down on the sofa and put the TV on and waited for mums visitor to finish.

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By *stingxMan  over a year ago

Glasgow

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By *titch69Man  over a year ago

Torbaydos

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By *tanlee1512Man  over a year ago

Epsom

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By *lutandhubbyCouple  over a year ago

west midlands

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By *aughtywifeyWoman  over a year ago

close

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

oliver was shocked when a hour later his mum emerged in her satin robe followed by angelo and omar ,he immediately recognised them as two of bullsworths henchmen.

Mum what are doing I've paid the the debt he almost shouted .

Emma just looked at her son yes oliver I know was a answer he didn't expect.

But why mummy why he asked almost to shocked to believe it.

Because I enjoy it she replied coldly.

Yes she does angelo piped up and she got a fit body for a woman her age and with that omar pulled open her robe to reveal her naked body to her shocked step son .

Hey ollie are u getting hard omar teased oliver .no snapped oliver but he clearly was and emma looked shocked as she looked at his straining joggers .

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By *lutandhubbyCouple  over a year ago

west midlands

i think oliver needs a woman's hand, (or mouth). xx

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By *iggers51Man  over a year ago

tamworth

Mmmmm this iz good cant waitx

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By *stingxMan  over a year ago

Glasgow

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By *un Bi couple yorkshireCouple  over a year ago

Doncaster

Glad this is back on track xxx

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By *keptic69Man  over a year ago

solihull

Ah, he has now become her step son from just being her son at the start of the story. Mmmmm, interesting.

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By *na WintersTV/TS  over a year ago

woodford halse


"Ah, he has now become her step son from just being her son at the start of the story. Mmmmm, interesting."

How do you figure?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I thought the same thing, he's now the step son, lol

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By *anteddeadoraliveMan  over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Story finished

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Getting even more interesting.

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By *na WintersTV/TS  over a year ago

woodford halse


"I thought the same thing, he's now the step son, lol "

It doesn't mention anything about him being her step son...

Definitely calls her mum, and she calls him son.

How many step parents do you know that leave their partners but keep the kid....

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"I thought the same thing, he's now the step son, lol

It doesn't mention anything about him being her step son...

Definitely calls her mum, and she calls him son.

How many step parents do you know that leave their partners but keep the kid...."

Oh dear bless ya, let us explain it to you slowly, right at the start hes her spoilt son, not spoilt step son, now in the last part of the story hes her step son not spoilt son,

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By *na WintersTV/TS  over a year ago

woodford halse


"I thought the same thing, he's now the step son, lol

It doesn't mention anything about him being her step son...

Definitely calls her mum, and she calls him son.

How many step parents do you know that leave their partners but keep the kid....

Oh dear bless ya, let us explain it to you slowly, right at the start hes her spoilt son, not spoilt step son, now in the last part of the story hes her step son not spoilt son, "

Well somebody thinks they're special don't they...

For one, your wording is quite, dickish.

Explain it to me slowly, as if I'm a child or have some form of learning disability? Get over yourself please.

You could've maybe just quoted the snippet where the OP very possibly, mistyped and added the word step, showing where the mistake is instead of being a dick about it...

Or you could've just taken it as a mistake and not pointed it out...

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By *lirts.R.usCouple  over a year ago

lanarkshire

One mistake never mind it is a great story mate carry on

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By *na WintersTV/TS  over a year ago

woodford halse

OP has said the story is finished...

I'd assume because of people picking holes as usually happens on the forums.

Twas a good story though, keep up the writing OP

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By *attboy107Man  over a year ago

Near Bedford

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By *titch69Man  over a year ago

Torbaydos

Shame, I was enjoying this

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Don’t finish it there op

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

It wasn't a mistake a did it on purpose as it was about to get dark

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By *ndrea54TV/TS  over a year ago

cambridge

Firstly i have step children that are grown up and have stayed with me. So that answers those morality police out there.

Secondly. This is a fantacy story and I'm loving it. Please continue OP a little darkness is sometimes fun.

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By *ceman619Man  over a year ago

Sunderland

Don’t worry about it getting dark

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By *cu_asexMan  over a year ago

Dudley

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By *tanlee1512Man  over a year ago

Epsom

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Continue please it was fantastic more please

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By *attboy107Man  over a year ago

Near Bedford

We like Dark

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By *aughtySexualArousalMan  over a year ago

SPALDING

Is there anymore

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