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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Haiku.
Typically three lines long in a 5,7,5 syllable structure.
Who can construct the best Fab Haiku..?
To get the balls rolling:
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Excitement promised.
Two couples meet in the field.
A wooden cabin
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Yearning searching tongue
Tightly, sweetly, moistly, lovely, tightly, achingly, fully, finally, unendingly, never-endingly, never-to-end.
Explosive finish
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Crows fly overhead
Magazines and papers strewn
Gentle sunday love
Oh that quite takes my breath away. Love the imagery. Crows v specific? "
Simply, they passed above my house.
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The wind bends the trees
Starlings meet new travel friends
Hand in hand we walk |
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