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"Good profile.
Not overly long and ranty. Sine decent pics, yes. Pretty face."
Good profile above too. Fine variety of pictures and always preferable to see anyone smiling in photos.
Well written text too. Informative and concise.
All the best to you.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Face picture is a great thing but only a cock picture, I am not sure if couples and single ladies will like that few choice of pictures..."
A lot will find it preferable to lots of shots where the profile owner (male) is hardly visible for anonymous ladies in the way...  |
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Nothing; I was gonna say a bit bare in terms of no pictures and not a lot about you but you make it clear at the start that you're only on to socialise with friends, so makes the former points unnecessary!  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Face picture is a great thing but only a cock picture, I am not sure if couples and single ladies will like that few choice of pictures...
A lot will find it preferable to lots of shots where the profile owner (male) is hardly visible for anonymous ladies in the way... "
Lady knows what she wants and why she is here, is highly thought of too by the veris 
I wouldn't mess with this one  |
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"Nothing; I was gonna say a bit bare in terms of no pictures and not a lot about you but you make it clear at the start that you're only on to socialise with friends, so makes the former points unnecessary! "
Good, well written profile and a good selection of photos.
Gets a from me |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Face picture is a great thing but only a cock picture, I am not sure if couples and single ladies will like that few choice of pictures..."
Not here to sleep my way through site but with meets come pics I'm not a vain man that is constantly taking selfies lol |
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"Face picture is a great thing but only a cock picture, I am not sure if couples and single ladies will like that few choice of pictures...
Not here to sleep my way through site but with meets come pics I'm not a vain man that is constantly taking selfies lol"
Plus points... Has written something in the profile
Minus points... Kinda whiny status and 1 pic.. traditional cock shot with trousers round the ankles |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Face picture is a great thing but only a cock picture, I am not sure if couples and single ladies will like that few choice of pictures...
Not here to sleep my way through site but with meets come pics I'm not a vain man that is constantly taking selfies lol
Plus points... Has written something in the profile
Minus points... Kinda whiny status and 1 pic.. traditional cock shot with trousers round the ankles "
Imo your profile is a bullshit filter (in a good way), written almost as a step by step guide for those reading to know if they are what your looking for which hopefully works by reducing the needless private messages that you receive. It hasn't been written on the day you join or after a PM has annoyed you but clearly overtime with thought and experience. We chatted ages ago at a social so I know your a friendly sort anyway but in the page it's shown when you are open to chat to those who may see you at the club.
The veris pretty much back up my thoughts, or vice versa
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"Nothing; I was gonna say a bit bare in terms of no pictures and not a lot about you but you make it clear at the start that you're only on to socialise with friends, so makes the former points unnecessary!
Good, well written profile and a good selection of photos.
Gets a from me"
Thank you! and yours |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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@ missbehaving whiny cock shot ok granted not the biggest lol but not the smallest lol like I say no need for multiple selfies one pic of my dick is enuf lol as stated in many a profile (I don't want cock pics) or am I looking in wrong place lol if so guidance and knowledge are powerful attributes |
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"@ missbehaving whiny cock shot ok granted not the biggest lol but not the smallest lol like I say no need for multiple selfies one pic of my dick is enuf lol as stated in many a profile (I don't want cock pics) or am I looking in wrong place lol if so guidance and knowledge are powerful attributes "
I didnt say your cock shot was whiny.. I said your status was.. whiny as in moany...
And it's your choice of you just want to have 1 cock pic..
But if youre going to keep getting devensive when people critique your profile it's probably best not to post on a thread called "Profile Critique" |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"@ missbehaving whiny cock shot ok granted not the biggest lol but not the smallest lol like I say no need for multiple selfies one pic of my dick is enuf lol as stated in many a profile (I don't want cock pics) or am I looking in wrong place lol if so guidance and knowledge are powerful attributes
I didnt say your cock shot was whiny.. I said your status was.. whiny as in moany...
And it's your choice of you just want to have 1 cock pic..
But if youre going to keep getting devensive when people critique your profile it's probably best not to post on a thread called "Profile Critique" "
Ah rite I'm with you now my apologies |
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By *ab fem OP Woman
over a year ago
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The profile text is too long. I couldn't read it all because of that. The pictures aren't the best. Maybe try taking some that doesn't look like you have quickly taken a couple in the bathroom before you get caught
Apart from that it seems fine |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Decent profile text, explains enough about you & who you're looking for. Might want to mention the "actually French" bit nearer the start to be sure of people understanding your profile in that context.
One thing I'd say is, for a single guys profile, there is a lot more woman in the pics than man. This might put some off as they may compare themselves with women you've met before or may just not want to see your previous "conquests" (apologies for the word choice there). Maybe a couple more of just you on your own would be good?
Just a suggestion.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Nice profile, good selection of pics and that's certainly the proverbial well skelpt arse lol Jesus that looks sore lol good well written profile but pix could be improved on "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Nice well written profile. Some nice pics and verifications "
So how the hell do I find it so hard to get a meet lol thanks though, appreciate the feedback |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Well written, could have more pics as ones you have are not very clear, nice verifications as well. K x"
Poor lighting and a crap camera phone lol, thanks though |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Brilliant and Enticing Profile, straight to the point and no messing, lol
Sadly not for me but I can definitely tell they are inundated with messages
Happy New year Folks
xx peter |
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Not my cup of tea (but sure the feeling is mutual!
Good amount of detail on the profile, but only one public pic which doesn't give any idea of build/body type.
...but at least it's not just a cock shot! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Not my cup of tea (but sure the feeling is mutual!
Good amount of detail on the profile, but only one public pic which doesn't give any idea of build/body type.
...but at least it's not just a cock shot! "
Thanks mucker,
Will never show cock pics.
I show face and body pics to people who contact me and stimulate interest. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Lovely fellow with sexy bum....
Thank you. message me lol
Confident and well informed "
yip, tells what you need to know, plenty of public pics and sure you two will enjoy fab together. Bet you've had tons of messages, profile is enticing enough |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Good amount of detail, well laid out and paragraphs accordingly. Contradicts on height by saying 6' on info but 5'11" in body of text. An inch can make all the difference!  |
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"Good amount of detail, well laid out and paragraphs accordingly. Contradicts on height by saying 6' on info but 5'11" in body of text. An inch can make all the difference! "
nice photos and straight to the point profile |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Some very hot photos with lots of teasing poses! Personal preference is we ain't overly excited by negative style pictures but none the less still very nice!!
Good description of wants and needs in the text of the profile, maybe a little bit lengthy but at least you let people know what you want.
Overall very well written profile by what we think a very sexy woman! Xxx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Could do with a little more detail and a bit more structure to the profile. Splitting paragraphs can make it so much easier to read. Pics are good, but could be clearer. Otherwise, good to go |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Could do with a little more detail and a bit more structure to the profile. Splitting paragraphs can make it so much easier to read. Pics are good, but could be clearer. Otherwise, good to go "
Straight to point and lets you know exactly what they are looking for.
Good pic son show as well.
Sure they will be inundated
xx peter |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Great profile, straight to the point and knows what looking for!
could maybe have a couple more pics xx"
WOW, mine, really shucks
xx peter
he says gripping tightly at the base |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"for GlasgowHorsey
Informative profile and pics reveal enough but not too much
8 3/4 out of 10"
You are braver them me showing your face pix, mean that as a compliment! Great profile pix and straight to the point, you come across friendly |
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For Kazz n Scottie.
Hot pics. Well written. Short, but conveys information and sets expectations. Excellent!
"for GlasgowHorsey
Informative profile and pics reveal enough but not too much
8 3/4 out of 10
You are braver them me showing your face pix, mean that as a compliment! Great profile pix and straight to the point, you come across friendly "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I think we all Deffo need to state who its for as some people add comment at same time and you don't know who for
This comment is about _els01:
straight to the point, enticing and you know where she stands and what she is looking for, great pics too, another profile prob bombarded with requests 
This is for kazz_n_scottie Profile:
Simple profile, tell you how they manage their fun and what they are looking for. pics are amazing
they are always sure to be inundated
xx peter |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I don't know if any of the reviews following my post were for me so it would perhaps be helpful if we start off each critique with the profile name. or just use the quote button like this lol"
NMD you are so true it takes a clever girl like you to keep me correct LOL. Your profile is excellent and informative and that's exactly what I am looking for. Pictures are pretty good also xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I don't know if any of the reviews following my post were for me so it would perhaps be helpful if we start off each critique with the profile name. or just use the quote button like this lol"
Good variety of pictures and it's clear you're literate and give out a lot of detail in your profile. I'd say try and trim the word count though. We typically find that if everything is on your profile we get bored reading it or have nothing to ask to break the ice. |
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"Well it's good and bad
Good as it's informative fantastic pictures not to long.
Bad as I'm a single guy and would love to meet you and we all know that's not going to happen lol. ."
This for me ??  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Well it's good and bad
Good as it's informative fantastic pictures not to long.
Bad as I'm a single guy and would love to meet you and we all know that's not going to happen lol. .
This for me ?? "
PMSL
think people should put the person title in their comment
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"Yeah I think people definitely should quote or put the username"
Your profile is decent. From a guys perspective, good pics of the Mrs lol, from
The females perspective, probably more pics of the guy?? No idea.
Well written, short and to the point profile text as well. |
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"Yeah I think people definitely should quote or put the username
Your profile is decent. From a guys perspective, good pics of the Mrs lol, from
The females perspective, probably more pics of the guy?? No idea.
Well written, short and to the point profile text as well. "
informative profile and yummy photos especially the suit ones  |
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"[Removed by poster at 05/01/16 18:22:28]"
From a females perspective probably more public pics, and I'd probably personally crop the current one in such a way that you take up the majority of the image as half of it is the wall above the mirror?? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Yeah I think people definitely should quote or put the username"
Nice couples profile.
Very clear what you are looking for.
Good use of CitizenM of the pics. Love that hotel. It is like it was built for fucking in. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"[Removed by poster at 05/01/16 18:22:28]
From a females perspective probably more public pics, and I'd probably personally crop the current one in such a way that you take up the majority of the image as half of it is the wall above the mirror??"
Point taken
I have remedied this I hope |
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"[Removed by poster at 05/01/16 18:22:28]
From a females perspective probably more public pics, and I'd probably personally crop the current one in such a way that you take up the majority of the image as half of it is the wall above the mirror??
Point taken
I have remedied this I hope "
good profile nice photos the back one in the mirror sidetracked me so nice tatts too |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"[Removed by poster at 05/01/16 18:22:28]
From a females perspective probably more public pics, and I'd probably personally crop the current one in such a way that you take up the majority of the image as half of it is the wall above the mirror??
Point taken
I have remedied this I hope good profile nice photos the back one in the mirror sidetracked me so nice tatts too "
lovely photos and some nice use of filters  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Ok curious for the feedback. Do your worst people, no offence will be taken 
I like your profile, clear face pic (handsome bloke) good profile text. I like it! "
Nice pics. Legs and eyes looking good.
Honest profile cant ask for more x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Nice straight to the point profile with very good selection of pics too. Verified Genuine which is also a real bonus on profile.....Only downside probably a bit too young for me... |
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"[Removed by poster at 05/01/16 18:22:28]
From a females perspective probably more public pics, and I'd probably personally crop the current one in such a way that you take up the majority of the image as half of it is the wall above the mirror??
Point taken
I have remedied this I hope "
100% better imo |
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"Nice straight to the point profile with very good selection of pics too. Verified Genuine which is also a real bonus on profile.....Only downside probably a bit too young for me... "
I think your profile reads well and explains what you're about. I'd say maybe more higher res images? That's about it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Well written profile of what your into and looking for
Downside no pics on profile
Semi rectified this morning"
its great when others on here help us out with our profiles on this post, lol
Not looked at scotssteve's profile but then again I think he'd rather have a reply form a couple or a fem. I mean you want Critique from the section that your into. I think |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Well written profile of what your into and looking for
Downside no pics on profile
Semi rectified this morning"
Lol least its better than nothing at all nice pic apart from the weird eyes lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Lots of pictures and right to the point , great x"
For Ivanabeused Profile:
Don't take it the wrong way, I haven't a fecking clue what your wanting from reading your profile, not much info except a sentence, lol
intriguing pictures which im sure will get you messages
xx peter |
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