Any ladies etc want to comment and point out any improvements? Trying to be honest and did a revamp but constructive criticism always appreciated ????
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You know yourself better than anyone. Write your own.
There are literally hundreds of threads like this. Everyone will give different advice. You can't please everyone.
Be yourself
Honestly man, this is a topic that’s been done to death. The best tip is to search through the forums for the previous ones as they are genuinely full of great tips.