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Help! Can you lot describe the feeling when the dick first goes in please?
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe.... |
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe...."
safe sex or with someone trusted that you don’t have too ? X for me there’s definitely a difference |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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God now thats a question! Its that instant warm moist feeling you get when your dick first touches. Sliding in feels like your dick is being hugged tightly. Moist and warm all the way in |
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It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up  if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol |
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"It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol"
How do you mental block? |
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By (user no longer on site)
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It’s like water wrapping around a rock on the beach. Her pussy moulds around every millimetre and contour of my dick. Warm too like putting prewarmed clothes on  |
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"It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol
How do you mental block?"
Hard to describe really but it's like trying to stop yourself sneezing when you feel it building up, not always successfully. Doesn't matter if I don't though as I'll definitely last longer on round two |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
safe sex or with someone trusted that you don’t have too ? X for me there’s definitely a difference "
Oh bareback 100% this is stories and fantasies section. Skin on skin, pork on prawn. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You know when you get up in the midfield the night to use the loo and then get back into bed and wrap the still warm duvet round you?
It's like that dialled up to 100 and concentrated in one part of your body. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"You know when you get up in the midfield the night to use the loo and then get back into bed and wrap the still warm duvet round you?
It's like that dialled up to 100 and concentrated in one part of your body. "
"Midfield the night"....meant "middle of the night" |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
safe sex or with someone trusted that you don’t have too ? X for me there’s definitely a difference
Oh bareback 100% this is stories and fantasies section. Skin on skin, pork on prawn. "
In that case I would definitely rub myself up against up pussy and clit gently building some rhythm up and then letting my tip of my penis enter you deeper and deeper for me this feels truly amazing as I feel your tight vaginal muscles grip my cock hard feelings the warm of your wet pussy makes me grow harder and bigger. Hmmm love sex |
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Not really a writer and don’t know your story’s style but here’s my 10p I hope it’s helpful.
At that point, as your lining up, it feels kinda magnetic, mentally you want to tease but feeling the warmth is too appealing. The levels of tightness on entry are very noticeable as are the reactions, it’s those reactions what make it the most pleasurable.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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as much as the 'physical' is one of smooth welcoming warmth, the best feeling I could describe is the quiet gasp of satisfaction a woman makes, eyes widening, mouth open, as it slides home... |
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
safe sex or with someone trusted that you don’t have too ? X for me there’s definitely a difference
Oh bareback 100% this is stories and fantasies section. Skin on skin, pork on prawn. In that case I would definitely rub myself up against up pussy and clit gently building some rhythm up and then letting my tip of my penis enter you deeper and deeper for me this feels truly amazing as I feel your tight vaginal muscles grip my cock hard feelings the warm of your wet pussy makes me grow harder and bigger. Hmmm love sex"
This is my favourite and may have had an effect this morning 
Glad I took a peek at this thread, thanks guys x
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By *oxychicWoman
over a year ago
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"It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol"
Rubbing the tip on my clit would have me squirting for england that's a good way |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol
Rubbing the tip on my clit would have me squirting for england that's a good way "
What you upto this week? We should get together  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"It feels hot and wet, I like to rub the tip up and down her pussy before sliding it all the way in and groaning as it feels so good especially after a lot of teasing build up if she's tight as well it takes some mental blocking to not come straight away lol"
Hot. |
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By *eannaTV/TS
over a year ago
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe...."
As I kneel between her legs her dampness glistening in the light I take my m_mber and slowly rub it up and down over her clioris and entrance several times making my m_mber moist so it would be easier to penetrate first I feel the entrance open slightly and the head of my m_mber slides in feeling the tightness of her entrance close over the head like a hot softness never felt before almost sucking me in but I resist and pull out not completely just enough to tease, then I push in further feeling the hot dampness grabbing harder and tighter, again I go to pull out and again I push in this time all the way the warmth and tightness completely wrapped around my m_mber sending such feelings that I never want to leave. |
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The warmth and wetness welcome the tip of the cock causing an extra twitch. You want to slide it all the way in but the tight wet little slit resists, pushing your dick back. You work up a little rhythm, forward and back, forward and back, the wetness edging down the shaft of your cock letting it enter centimetre by centimetre, getting deeper, her moans only accentuate the feeling and then suddenly...it slides all the way in, balls deep. The vagina that was resisting the hard dick is now actively pulling in. The warmth and wetness enveloping the hard cock is a feeling that's comparable to no other, it just feels right, you close you eyes to focus and elongate that feeling, the nerve endings in the head of your penis send a ripple of pleasure throughout your whole body. The warmth, the wetness, you never want this feeling to end. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Whilst we’re on the subject of lit erotica I’m just gonna express one of my pet peeves that I see used a lot (be men usually, sorry guys) but when they say she bucked her hips or bucked against me.
Just makes me piss myself and think of buckaroo or one of those mechanical bulls.  |
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"Whilst we’re on the subject of lit erotica I’m just gonna express one of my pet peeves that I see used a lot (be men usually, sorry guys) but when they say she bucked her hips or bucked against me.
Just makes me piss myself and think of buckaroo or one of those mechanical bulls. "
'We gon' ride like in the rodeos girrrrrl, yessiree!' |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ok, so this sort of thing?
At that moment, focused on that beautiful pussy, nothing else matters. The warmth, the wetness, the wonderful aroma draws me in. Every fibre of my being screams at me to plunge my solid cock deep inside you. Sometimes I can resist the temptation and take it slowly, savouring every spine tingling sensation.
Then sometimes the urge is utterly overpowering, i can’t help myself, I have to be inside you. All thoughts of restraint are abandoned as I satisfy my craving for your body, sliding deep inside you to feel that wonderful warm enclosure around me and I know it’s where I’m meant to be. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I feel my foreskin stretch, slowly slipping over the head of my cock as your warm wet juices lubricator my pulsating helmet. The skin slipping back and forth smoothly as my precum and your juices mingle, through the fluid movement. I gasp as my rim reaches the entry to your cunt, and iI feel your warm, lips envelop my glistening glans and shivers shimmer down my spine as your muscles tense and grip my shaft. |
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By *rHotNottsMan
over a year ago
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It’s just pure bliss, the moment you wish you could slow down time itself, looking into her eyes, both saying mmmmmm , her gasping as it goes deeper, and having a nice slow passionate kiss to accompany it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You know when you plug a USB cable in to your laptop and it goes in first time
Feels like that
This is the reply that turned me on the most. "
Pulling it out, turning it round and trying the other way round can be fun too |
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By *ouanna JoWoman
over a year ago
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"You know when you plug a USB cable in to your laptop and it goes in first time
Feels like that
This is the reply that turned me on the most.
Pulling it out, turning it round and trying the other way round can be fun too "
 Not sure I’m familiar with this move  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"You know when you plug a USB cable in to your laptop and it goes in first time
Feels like that
This is the reply that turned me on the most.
Pulling it out, turning it round and trying the other way round can be fun too
Not sure I’m familiar with this move "
I’ll show you if you like lol |
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"It’s like water wrapping around a rock on the beach. Her pussy moulds around every millimetre and contour of my dick. Warm too like putting prewarmed clothes on "
Those are both really good ways of putting it! |
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There is a lot more that goes on apart from touch. If bare you can get such a rush of senses just before you enter. You pick up on all the scents and feramones as you get really close, it drives your brain wild and you really really want to enter your body reacts you go extra hard and all your sex organs fire up with anticipation. Some women are really good at teasing and edging when on top... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe...."
I'm assuming unsafe sex (as it's fiction, most fiction describes this as it is after all fantasy , which includes sensation and a deep bond that ensures mutual trust already in existence? And as much as safe sex is practical and wise in real life, so are completing tax returns and I don't think your work will contain any graphic details of doing this now, will it?
Ok then...
The act itself is always best watched for that visual thrill and delicious anticipation....As the diamond-hardened in readiness organ moves tantalisingly ever closer to it's mecca, a drop of pre-essence oozes saucily from the tip as if in mimicry of the glistening feminine treasure that lies in wait...
After seconds that seem like an eternity, the bulbous mushroom atop the proud stalk makes contact with the soft embracing heat and the gorgeous sensation that ensues fires like electricity in an instant down the lucky man's shaft, pooling in his balls and radiating like fire throughout his body, coaxing the pleasure centres in his brain to drive his unrepentant prong home into her slickness, to mate her wholeheartedly....
He does so. And as he sinks his eager solid cock almost gleefully deep into her inviting little pocket, her sex wrapping him snugly and squeezing her new possession as he does so, the overwhelming sensation of touch magnifies uncontrollably as she takes first his glans, then the steely thick column of flesh that drives it, till the desire to have her to completion is the only thing in life he can focus upon...
Something like that.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You know when you plug a USB cable in to your laptop and it goes in first time
Feels like that
What about the Ethernet port dont you just wanna hear that satisfying click lol "
Oh God I'm so hard right now  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
I'm assuming unsafe sex (as it's fiction, most fiction describes this as it is after all fantasy , which includes sensation and a deep bond that ensures mutual trust already in existence? And as much as safe sex is practical and wise in real life, so are completing tax returns and I don't think your work will contain any graphic details of doing this now, will it?
Ok then...
The act itself is always best watched for that visual thrill and delicious anticipation....As the diamond-hardened in readiness organ moves tantalisingly ever closer to it's mecca, a drop of pre-essence oozes saucily from the tip as if in mimicry of the glistening feminine treasure that lies in wait...
After seconds that seem like an eternity, the bulbous mushroom atop the proud stalk makes contact with the soft embracing heat and the gorgeous sensation that ensues fires like electricity in an instant down the lucky man's shaft, pooling in his balls and radiating like fire throughout his body, coaxing the pleasure centres in his brain to drive his unrepentant prong home into her slickness, to mate her wholeheartedly....
He does so. And as he sinks his eager solid cock almost gleefully deep into her inviting little pocket, her sex wrapping him snugly and squeezing her new possession as he does so, the overwhelming sensation of touch magnifies uncontrollably as she takes first his glans, then the steely thick column of flesh that drives it, till the desire to have her to completion is the only thing in life he can focus upon...
Something like that.
B"
Sorry but thinking of a giant mushroom doesn’t give me exciting thoughts
I think if super mario bouncing about |
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
I'm assuming unsafe sex (as it's fiction, most fiction describes this as it is after all fantasy , which includes sensation and a deep bond that ensures mutual trust already in existence? And as much as safe sex is practical and wise in real life, so are completing tax returns and I don't think your work will contain any graphic details of doing this now, will it?
Ok then...
The act itself is always best watched for that visual thrill and delicious anticipation....As the diamond-hardened in readiness organ moves tantalisingly ever closer to it's mecca, a drop of pre-essence oozes saucily from the tip as if in mimicry of the glistening feminine treasure that lies in wait...
After seconds that seem like an eternity, the bulbous mushroom atop the proud stalk makes contact with the soft embracing heat and the gorgeous sensation that ensues fires like electricity in an instant down the lucky man's shaft, pooling in his balls and radiating like fire throughout his body, coaxing the pleasure centres in his brain to drive his unrepentant prong home into her slickness, to mate her wholeheartedly....
He does so. And as he sinks his eager solid cock almost gleefully deep into her inviting little pocket, her sex wrapping him snugly and squeezing her new possession as he does so, the overwhelming sensation of touch magnifies uncontrollably as she takes first his glans, then the steely thick column of flesh that drives it, till the desire to have her to completion is the only thing in life he can focus upon...
Something like that.
B
Sorry but thinking of a giant mushroom doesn’t give me exciting thoughts
I think if super mario bouncing about"
Mmf you and Mario and Luigi #familyguy |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe....
I'm assuming unsafe sex (as it's fiction, most fiction describes this as it is after all fantasy , which includes sensation and a deep bond that ensures mutual trust already in existence? And as much as safe sex is practical and wise in real life, so are completing tax returns and I don't think your work will contain any graphic details of doing this now, will it?
Ok then...
The act itself is always best watched for that visual thrill and delicious anticipation....As the diamond-hardened in readiness organ moves tantalisingly ever closer to it's mecca, a drop of pre-essence oozes saucily from the tip as if in mimicry of the glistening feminine treasure that lies in wait...
After seconds that seem like an eternity, the bulbous mushroom atop the proud stalk makes contact with the soft embracing heat and the gorgeous sensation that ensues fires like electricity in an instant down the lucky man's shaft, pooling in his balls and radiating like fire throughout his body, coaxing the pleasure centres in his brain to drive his unrepentant prong home into her slickness, to mate her wholeheartedly....
He does so. And as he sinks his eager solid cock almost gleefully deep into her inviting little pocket, her sex wrapping him snugly and squeezing her new possession as he does so, the overwhelming sensation of touch magnifies uncontrollably as she takes first his glans, then the steely thick column of flesh that drives it, till the desire to have her to completion is the only thing in life he can focus upon...
Something like that.
B
Sorry but thinking of a giant mushroom doesn’t give me exciting thoughts
I think if super mario bouncing about"
Each to their own. I like mushrooms very much indeed. One of the first things I chuck in an omelette.
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"I feel my foreskin stretch, slowly slipping over the head of my cock as your warm wet juices lubricator my pulsating helmet. The skin slipping back and forth smoothly as my precum and your juices mingle, through the fluid movement. I gasp as my rim reaches the entry to your cunt, and iI feel your warm, lips envelop my glistening glans and shivers shimmer down my spine as your muscles tense and grip my shaft."
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Erotic literature is, ahem, very hard to get right
Yeah. I struggle to write it.
Me too"
Your struggle is of a different order to mine. You write excellent erotic stories  |
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"Erotic literature is, ahem, very hard to get right
Yeah. I struggle to write it.
Me too
Your struggle is of a different order to mine. You write excellent erotic stories "
Thank you  It still has unique challenges, though. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Erotic literature is, ahem, very hard to get right
Yeah. I struggle to write it.
Me too
Your struggle is of a different order to mine. You write excellent erotic stories
Thank you It still has unique challenges, though."
I’m sure it does. Given that you write more than the odd paragraph you are considerably more aware of those challenges than I am. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Can’t wait to finish work to get writing the next instalment. Some really good descriptions I can use.
It’s in stories and fantasies ‘finding your kinky equal, a love story’ if anyone wants to read the first part.
It’s comedy/erotic or comerotica! |
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I love describing erotic scenarios with the right person.... and that moment when you know you are going to be sliding deep inside someone is amazing... but I love the tease of it, using the head to just part the lips but not going deep and just using the head to tease... seeing the woman desperate to pull you in deep but not allowing her as it’s all about control... teasing her to the point of screaming in frustration and ecstasy and then when she completely accepts she is being controlled one deep hard thrust causing her to gasp loudly and swear uncontrollably.... at this point I’d hope she would come |
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"I love describing erotic scenarios with the right person.... and that moment when you know you are going to be sliding deep inside someone is amazing... but I love the tease of it, using the head to just part the lips but not going deep and just using the head to tease... seeing the woman desperate to pull you in deep but not allowing her as it’s all about control... teasing her to the point of screaming in frustration and ecstasy and then when she completely accepts she is being controlled one deep hard thrust causing her to gasp loudly and swear uncontrollably.... at this point I’d hope she would come "
That sounds hot |
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"I love describing erotic scenarios with the right person.... and that moment when you know you are going to be sliding deep inside someone is amazing... but I love the tease of it, using the head to just part the lips but not going deep and just using the head to tease... seeing the woman desperate to pull you in deep but not allowing her as it’s all about control... teasing her to the point of screaming in frustration and ecstasy and then when she completely accepts she is being controlled one deep hard thrust causing her to gasp loudly and swear uncontrollably.... at this point I’d hope she would come
That sounds hot "
It feels amazing... it’s hard to hold back but so so worth it |
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"Can’t wait to finish work to get writing the next instalment. Some really good descriptions I can use.
It’s in stories and fantasies ‘finding your kinky equal, a love story’ if anyone wants to read the first part.
It’s comedy/erotic or comerotica!"
I never knew you are a writer, I'll definitely have a read. I love something for the imagination |
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By *ee04Man
over a year ago
Essex |
I love this feeling
At first there is a little resistance especially a tight one. Then you feel the give as it goes in. And the clamp on the shaft as the head gets deeper. There is still resistance so take it slow gently pushing in deeper taking your time until you are balls deep then build the momentum.
It’s almost a pop when the head is in and feeling that resistance give is awesome.
Don’t know wether this helps in anyway |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"It’s for my short story. I know how to describe it from the woman’s POV, I can describe sucking dick and licking arse holes just can’t graphically and accurately describe it from the mans perspective.
Let me set the scene, you’ve been sucked and edged, rimmed and edged, now your dick is solid, you’re dying to fuck and you have a very tight wet little slit to sink into, describe...."
Not as graphic as some of the above, but I would compare it to sliding in to a hot bath after three hours of shovelling snow in minus 8 degrees |
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