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It was very I, I ,I. There were a few grammatical mistakes if we are being really picky, like 'I am at my most best..".
As a woman reading it, I would wonder what was in it for me, what kind of women you are attracted to, that sort of thing?
I have seen a lot worse profiles, but you did ask x |
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Okay thank you so much be even more critical!
It's been updated.
Theres no preference becuase physicality or preference does not attract me I'm more interested in the mind of a person. But I've added that in my profile. |
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"Your or you’re? People won’t take your assertion for ‘intelligent conversations’ seriously if you can’t sort your grammar and such out. Otherwise it’s fine. "
Good spot chap! Autocorrect nearly ruined my bio |
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"Your or you’re? People won’t take your assertion for ‘intelligent conversations’ seriously if you can’t sort your grammar and such out. Otherwise it’s fine.
Good spot chap! Autocorrect nearly ruined my bio"
I have to proof read stuff sometimes. |
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