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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Really sorry to urinate on the bonfire, but haiku should be 5/7/5 syllables 
Fire has been pissed on
And yet, despite the pedants
Fab tittilates us."
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Really sorry to urinate on the bonfire, but haiku should be 5/7/5 syllables "
The sky is a bright light blue
But I see a cloud
People who can't just enjoy |
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"Really sorry to urinate on the bonfire, but haiku should be 5/7/5 syllables
Jaysus oh it’s cauld
Still Nae blooming heat the noo
I am young not auld
There, sorted  "
That's more like it (read in the accent too, per another thread ) |
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"Really sorry to urinate on the bonfire, but haiku should be 5/7/5 syllables
The sky is a bright light blue
But I see a cloud
People who can't just enjoy"
I'm with them to be fair. Even though we can enjoy the odd extra syllable.
It's not a haiku if it doesn't follow the rules and it's okay that they pointed it out in my book.
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