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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Morning folks, probably going to open a can of worms asking.
But as a first Forum post, I wonder if you can review my narrative for me and advise on additional pictures.
Thanks in advance.
Will take criticism, constructive on or not..not offended. So do your worst. Xx |
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By *SAchickWoman
over a year ago
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It's not bad, you've got a couple of wee typos that you might want to check, some people will be put off believe it or not, and a few more pictures, I like full body pics, but others preferences will vary  |
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