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By *modDMan
over a year ago
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"Just looking for advice not abuse what's wrong with my profile please ? "
It’s quite rude, slightly aggressive and I’m not sure English people over the age of 30 should use the phrase “it sucks” other than when imitating something on The Simpsons. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Just looking for advice not abuse what's wrong with my profile please ?
It’s quite rude, slightly aggressive and I’m not sure English people over the age of 30 should use the phrase “it sucks” other than when imitating something on The Simpsons."
aggressive oh god..... Thank you |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It comes across a bit abruptly in places. I always think it's best to focus on the positives. Also it's pointless telling timewasters ect to pass you by as that really won't stop it. |
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By *ifuwMan
over a year ago
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Also stop saying that your sorry you have lack of experience and sorry you want to learn. It sounds like your beating yourself down.
Say stuff like I don't have much experience because I am starting out. But I love to learn. It makes you sound more confident.
Also good picture range, just be a bit more teasing. Also good that they is no dixknpics as well.
I hope some of this helps
Make it sound positive. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Photos are great though. The other thing is to maybe narrow down your age fillters, this may seem silly but it does put many off thinking "he will meet anyone". |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The taste of a nice clean pussy bit spoiled my erection tbh.... I could just visualise a wagging tongue....
Maybe try being a little less direct, use some humour and create some mystery.... ....but then idk, maybe you want something different from what I or other ppl who might comment here are looking for...? Fuck knows, I've changed my mind (well not on the pussy tasting bit) just be yourself and own it! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The taste of a nice clean pussy bit spoiled my erection tbh.... I could just visualise a wagging tongue....
Maybe try being a little less direct, use some humour and create some mystery.... ....but then idk, maybe you want something different from what I or other ppl who might comment here are looking for...? Fuck knows, I've changed my mind (well not on the pussy tasting bit) just be yourself and own it!"
Oh, and good luck  |
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By *argarineCouple
over a year ago
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I agree with above posts. Definitely a little abrupt, and your status would make me block you to be honest as it made me cringe.
I also found the words all blur into one as there are no paragraphs and this made me lose interest a few words in.
Hope that helps x |
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"It comes across a bit abruptly in places. I always think it's best to focus on the positives. Also it's pointless telling timewasters ect to pass you by as that really won't stop it. "
I agree with this.
You could do with an editor that sorts out your sentences, breaking it up and making it easier to read. It's a bit of a word landslide currently.
Make less about you. It's about what you want. If you want somebody to choose you over the hundreds of other men here you need to say what's in it for them.
It would help if you show a bit more personality and preferably add some humour. It's all about sex. If a woman doesn't want to spend time with you she is unlikely to want to go to bed with you. So tell us about the whole you, not just the aspect of you that wants to get laid.
Women are not here just to help you sort out your urges. You can read on the forum again and again that women need to be stimulated mentally. There is nothing in your profile that meets that need for them.
The photos are quite decent though. |
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I’m not sure what you need help with.... good range of pics and not a dick in sight, you’ve had 6 veris in 2 months, that’s good going
If you were to change it I’d get rid of the negatively in the main text and add a bit of personality / fun
Other than that good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I’m not sure what you need help with.... good range of pics and not a dick in sight, you’ve had 6 veris in 2 months, that’s good going
If you were to change it I’d get rid of the negatively in the main text and add a bit of personality / fun thank you x
Other than that good luck "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Maybe rethink the pic of a childs hand in the ice cream pic.
An annoyance of mine is seeing kids in fab pics.
It's not the worst I've seen, there was one where he was carrying his kid and he painted out the whole child  
Otherwise think about using paragraphs, your profile text just merges into one. |
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No knob shot
Everyone loves a knob shot
(please note that this was said in jest, however SOME people do like a knob shot, remember the value of knob shots can go up or down, enjoying a knob does not affect your statutory rights, any resemblance to knobs living or dead is purely coincidental) |
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